Hum Aapke Hain Kaun (3) [Epi. Pg.124] - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

maan keep faith one day geet will return

"I cannot do what has been done...but I want to try to give you everything you wanted...everything you had hoped for yourself and for Ayush..." (he sighs) "If you cannot then I understand, I won't ask you for much...I will never come in your way..." (He caresses her cheek and wipes her tears) "you will no longer have any tears because of me..."

He lets go of her and begins leaving...she quietly follows him to their car. Maan sat in the front seat while Geet sat behind him. Both of them didn't say anything to each other nor looked at each other...


yes...he needs to have faith and hope
my motto 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simi me come back. Update jaldi dena plz.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 31
one question, DID THEY EAT?
nice part...
both are in pain...
longing to be with each other but one cant and the other trying...
Maan better start on the mission to make Geet trust him again...
cont soon dear...


ROFL Deepa
you are the first person to ask me this hahaa
no they did not eat lol

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

Simi me come back. Update jaldi dena plz.


haha okay sonu
i iwll try
will go on my lunch break soon
after I will😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross

loved their dance, there was love, pain and passion at the same time.

both are goin through emotional turmoil, maan's angry and guilty for his actions in the past and is trying hard to make ammends.

geet on the other hand is scared, she loves maan yet scared that if he again breaks her trust, she wud be shattered then, as this time she is not alone, there's ayush as well.

quite touching!

both are right in their own places and are in immense pain.
amazing ff!!!!!!!

do continue soon, will be waiting



Thank you very much
I was going of Mahi mahi song dance squeence
but I ended up translating Kurbaan hua song dance sequence lmao

Both are right and both are suffering
but teh question remains willl geet forgive?😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nav2010


He lets go of her and begins leaving...she quietly follows him to their car. Maan sat in the front seat while Geet sat behind him. Both of them didn't say anything to each other nor looked at each other...

OWW POOR MANN AND GEET BOTHHH.
VERY VERY GOOD YAAR, CANT WAIT NEXT ONE. THANKS MILLION TIMES FOR UPDATING.
ONE MORE THING TO TELL YOU THAT PLEASE UPDATE JULDI ME GREEDY U KNOW. LOL
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Nav Thanks
will updaet soon
sorry for the long wait😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
No probs simi hv ur lunch. I hd my dinner nw its time 2 sleep.
By d way wer u stay?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

No probs simi hv ur lunch. I hd my dinner nw its time 2 sleep.
By d way wer u stay?


haha thanks
I live in us...CT and it is mad cold here
wbu?
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys I just have to write the second half of the update
will upate as soon as I can😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Am finally here with the updates...couple of announcements today:
1.) Good LUCK TO EVERYONE FOR THEIR EXAMS!!!! Hope you guys pass😳
2.) Holiday season is almost here so you guys know what that means...after next week I will be unavailable for almost a week or so...so after next week no updates until next year 😆😆
3.) My goals for this two weeks would be to update SKG everyday (No Fridays), finish off HAHK by next week along with One Fine Day one shot
Sorry guys for the bad news...😳

Chapter 32

Two days has been passed since that incident and not once did she see Geet. Maan kept his promise of not coming near her anymore or in front of her to cause her any pain but somehow him not being in front of her causes her more pain.

Why does she needs him to be here with her?
Is she really ready to trust him again?
Is her heart opening up to her again?
Regaining the same feelings she once had for him?

She was so confused on what to do. She tried to catch a glimpse of him at night hoping to be there when he returns home from work but her sleep betrays her all the time. Just yesterday, she waited at the dining table for him to come home. She didn't know why but she did. When she woke up the next morning she found herself on the bed with no sign of Maan anywhere.

Today, there was a party at Khruana Mansion; for two ocassions: One-clebration of Dadima's return from her teer-yatra and second-today was Dev and Naintara's wedding anniversary. She didn't know what to do..of course she knew she has to attend the party but she didn't know how to face Maan. After two days, she will be seeing him...what will be his reaction...what will be her reaction?

Will he again talk to her?
Make her understand?
Ask for her forgiveness? Which is not even sure if she can or is ready to.

Ayush quickly comes to the room carrying a package..she looks at the way he was dressed and sighed. He was wearing a kurta pajama but was holding his pajama in his hand trying to prevent it from falling down. While in his other hand he was carrying a wrapped package. She takes the package from him and puts it on the bed before bending down on her knees to come to Ayush's height.

Geet; what is this? (She says pointing to his pajama)

Ayush: I don't know how to tie it...since papa is not here...I came to you

Geet (sighs) okay let me show you...You take these two strings in each of your hand and then you go over and under...then you make two loops with each and pull it through..like tying a shoelace...

Ayush: ohh..that is so easy...

Geet (kisses him on his cheek) Yeah...see nothing is hard if you just take your time out to think

Ayush: you know what is hard mom

Geet: What?

Ayush: Math...(Geet laughs) I don't get it..and all my friends...even Annie makes fun of me...(he makes a face)

Geet: math is not hard Ayush...I will help you and then you can show your friends how smart you are

Ayush (smiles) Yeah I will show them..Papa is smart..I will ask for his help

Geet (pouts) you don't need my help anymore

Ayush: I do..maybe in drawing...that is easy

Geet: i can help you in math too

Ayush: I know..but its not for you...its really hard...(Geet laughs..he hears Annie calling) Okay mom I am gonna play with Annie...

Geet: okay and make sure you stay with Dadima or anyone from home...

Ayush: okay bye...

Geet gets up smiling after Ayush's talks..she looks at the package on the bed. She sits on the bed and opens the package. She sees a note on top of the material...she takes the notes and reads it...

"A beautiful present for a beautiful girl..."

She knew who it was from..she holds the sari in her hand..it was an orange netted sari..with sequences all around the border of the sari and the blouse...she holds it in front of the mirror again...she saw Maan standing behind her with a smile. She quickly turns around only to have him disappear. Confused at her own actions and feelings..she slowly went to the bathroom carrying his present.
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Note: Please read slow and enjoy the music😳
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5muuIGqSAMg[/YOUTUBE]

Geet entered the house wearing the sari that Maan gifted her. Everyone looked at her and smiled, stunned to see how beautiful she is...she looked around the room for Maan as she slowly walked toward Dadima..but he was no where to be seen.. disappointed..she goes to Dadima sadly smiling at her. She gives Geet her blessing. The whole room goes dark...in the center stage everyone saw Dev and Naintara dancing..Dev held the microphone signing to her...

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Geet walks around smiling...looking at them..she looks around for Maan but still don't see him...she smiles at Dadima at her. she sees herself dancing with Maan...she smiles...he spins her around and brings her in slowly...Maan touches her face..slowly caressing it...Geet just looks at him with a smile...she comes out of her trance when Ayush hugs her leg...she bends down kissing his cheek while he ran away...

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz


She sits at the dining table...still looking out for him..she gets up when she saw him all the way back in the crowd...she puts her head down and looks at him again but saw him gone..she walks around to the back where he was standing...but there was no trace of him...she touches the curtain..she could feel his aroma there...she looks around with sad tears...

Maan stood behind the pillar...looking at Geet...she was sad without him...it kind of made him happy but sad...He tapped Geet's shoulder..with a smile..she turned and was shocked to see him standing there before her...he puts his hand out...Geet slowly puts her hand on top of his..he leads her to the door...she wraps her arms around his neck..both looking at each other with tears...he wipes her tears away..she places her head on his chest...enjoying his closeness...

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath
Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath


He comes out of his dream when someone runs into him...he moves away from there going to another place...Geet goes to the same pillar where Maan was standing before...she could smell his cologne...she looks around...still not finding him...she follows his scent..as if it is part of her now...she stops at the stairs...the same stairs where she once stepped down to leave forever...she puts her hand on top of the pillar as she slowly ascended the steps...

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

She saw herself walking down the stairs broken and with tears..using the pillars for support to hold her into pieces...she stops in the middle of the stairs staring at her past self...her past self looks at her smiling...as she moved down...

Geet moves up slowly...remembering the moments she spent here with Maan...she saw herself running away from Maan as he chases her above the stairs...she smiles...she still remember that day...Maan wanted to kiss him but her feeling shy ran away from him while Maan chased her, finally after few minutes of chase..he picked her from behind and twirled her around...

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein
Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein

She stops in front of their room...she slowly opens the door and steps in...everything was still the same..the color, the bed, the curtains, the dressers...everything...she sat at the corner of the bed...petting it...trying to feel the texture with tears...

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz


She goes to the dressing table...and opens the drawer..she holds her sindoor box in the middle of her palm..she looks at it with tears...she sits on the dressing table chair and looks through the stuff..it was all hers...still the way she left it... perfectly preserved...she gently puts the box down and gets up to leave...as she was leaving..she looks at the closet...

slowly walking toward it..she opens it...it was only filled with couple of Maan's clothes...she gently touches the clothes..remembering the time when she used to take his clothes out before he came out of the shower...she saw a box at the corner of the closet as she moved couple of clothes

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin
Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin
Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin
Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin

She opens the box and was shocked to see all the broken stuff that she threw before leaving...she drops on her knees..looking at the flower that was broken from her gajra, her broken bangles, a piece of cloth from her ripped sari...it was all here...she cries looking at the box unable to control them anymore..she looks up when she saw two pair of feet in front of her..she saw Maan looking down at her...

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

He slowly bends down and helps her get up by holding her shoulders...he looks at her and then at the box...both look at each other with pain and tears...he goes on his knee and hugs her waist...

Maan: Please forgive me...I can't live without you...you are my life...(Geet just stood there motionless as Maan cried holding her waist tightly hiding his face on her stomach...) if you can't forgive me then kill me...(He holds the poison bottle in front of her..she looks at him shocked) I would rather die from your hands then anyone else's...(she holds the bottle looking at it and then at him...)

Okay guys:
What should be Geet's decision?
Do you think it is time to accept now?

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago

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