Tortures Of My Wifey cute Thread 2

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Tortures of my wifey cute

01 August 2011

01:36

Thank you for the love and support on my First completed FF ,Mystery Girl which was little sad type ..Now I want to write a small FF , I don't know how long their journey will take them ..but plot is a small one ..

It's the story of a very young couples accidently became huby-wifey and they trying to understand marriage together 'slowly '

Please don't misunderstand me ..i know you will not ..on my comments on religion , cast creed '. Its not mine it's the characters point of view ..what I do', still if you want me to edit it I will ..bas I don't want to get blocked


Index (Latest on Top )


Chapter 23: Shila Ki jawani Personal DVD

Chapter 22 : My 14 Year Old "Baby""

Chapter 21: Not a friend Indeed :(

Chapter 20 : A mother In Distress

Chapter 19 : Marriage Or Jail

Chapter 18.Mama's Boy

Chapter 17. Khurana History

Chapter 16 .Conspiracy drama

Chapter 15 .Explosion of an Innocent Truth

Chapter 14 Saviors and a folded 'Bomb'

Chapter 13. Basic Instinct

Chapter 12 . Cheating Games : Baby I am still Sleeping

Chapter 11. Age Of Innocence

Chapter 10.Meet The Parents : Part 1 : Meet the Iyers

Chapter 9.Praise will get prized

Chapter 8. Keen and Skeptical Student of Biology

Chapter 7. Three Musketeers

Chapter 6.Restrained frenzy

Chapter 5.Challenged Hankerings

Chapter 4.Home Alone

chapter 3. baby Tom and Love stuck Jerry

Chapter 2 : Maan the stupid Hit by the cupid

Chapter 1 : Hiding Our "self's"


My other almost completed FF

Mystery Girl

My new FF

Dark Fantasy : A Notorious Obsession..


Character Sketch in different pages ..updated

1.Geets Brothers without them Torture Will not be complete

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08 November 2011

15:15

It has been quiet a while I updated this ..so story so far '

Geets father is Maans tution teacher and Maan (19) is completely Fida On Geet , Geets feelings , she don't know because she is only 14 even though her certificates show she is 18 .

So when maan is told to drop geet back home when riots broke out in town he was excited .and on their way then unintentionally get intimate ..oyy hold on ..just touchy kissy ..only 'hi hi ..if you want to know how far they went 'just go to first page and follow index links ..ok back to "kahani Ab Thak "

Geets brothers hatta khaatta who is having really very "GOOD" opinion about Maan catch them in compromising position''

And then what ..they kick Maan to behoshi and bring both of them home ' And Geets Eldest brother was going to marry next day so house full of relatives make a chaos thinking Geet lost all her "precious" because of the weird descriptions innocently spatter by Geet ...Now back to story 'I strongly recommend read chapter 16..



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Maans Mother ...


...Maan's Parents ..Prettyji and Luckyji ... they call each other like that ...

pretty singh is very healthy true Punjaban , bilkul pataka ..whatever comes in her head , before it register there will be out of her mouth ...And powerful too ..her husband and son fears her a lot ..a drama queen , but good at heart ..like The GHSP Geet if gets old ...She is beautiful too ...very beautiful indeed ...

Mona Singh was one option in my mind but she is too classy , and Raveena Tandon .but she is too sexy .i dont have her classy punjaban looking fotos..

She is very beautiful ..My Geet gets Jealous of her sasuma that much cute

thank you for your suggestions ...@speechless ..and help with photos.

if i match this man with this women u people promise u will not kill me its their old photo..when they got married ..please press likes if u are ok with it...

ooo .. i love them very much


This is what she was doing when Maan's father first met her when his father took him for a ladkee dekhna

then met in temple lucky told his past and all and she loved his sincerity

and they married




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Chapter 18 .Mamas Boy

20 October 2011

18:50

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So everybody was worried at least showing concerned about Geets ruined future , Geets Brothers did not understand the depth of the "damage' happened to geet According to society .Because for them ..Their innocent sister was saved from the stupid Darindah'

Want to repeat ..Khurana kids not much concerned about society ..name charitr ..bla blah ..things

Their discrimination will be purely based on the academic Records 'simply saying mark sheets.. The one who scores best is the better person ' the logic ..when u fully engross in studies to score that .. U wont go to do any bad activities ..simple '. and Maan come very low class according to them

Shivanand and Khurana was just tired too tired to think anything Khurana out of guilt that his son brought to an innocent girl , who else knew what badnaami for a girl better than him (reference Khurana History ..Sorry I agree Like any History Khurana History too boring pardon me ..then when it Sallu Mia ..I cant Stop ..)'

He got the answer for the solution .according to his purana dimag .but dared to say ..because ..kaha brilliant shilliant Iyers and kaha .. Stupid ..

Idiot Kothe ka Puttar Maan Ullu de paata ..Control Nahee kar Saktha ..

Ab Meim iskey Mom ko Kya jawab Doon

Wait a minute why do I need to answer his mom , it is he who has to answer then thinking of her ..he instantly took his mobile and called his home ..because when the news flashed their car burned she almost dead ..then the reporters again reported no body was found inside ..she got life again ..and thrown shocked Lucky out ' and ordered him Don't come back house without maan ..

And locked herself in Pooja room

Then he scared what will happen if she come here And he disconnected ..He thought Let Iyers decide what they want to do with Maan , right now the state in which they are he cant ask ..He knew well A Ladkee kee badnamee is more than a Ladkas ...'

Because how much she hates these Iyers ' he only knows '

And the reason too '.

He sacred ..but by then he heard her screaming crying and rushing inside with some padosi ..the news spread '

Yup ..when it has so spicy mix in it how cant it reach there ..

'.. And she glared at Lucky one second as if she going to burn him ...then somebody guided her to the Room where Maan was laid

Seeing Priety Aunty , Iyer Brothers gone numb and bowed their head and slowly moved away from scene , because even though she is a jwalamukhi

Khurana passed a defeated a defeated pleading look at Iyer, Then Iyer patt his shoulder , by then Rajasree Appeared on the bedroom door where she was laying ..She heard crying and cursing of Preethi from the other room '

She asked Shivanand to Go near her and she whispered something in his ear he looked at his wife disbelievingly .She nodded .and persuaded him to talk with Luckyji ..

And Lucky was overjoyed by the rquest they had put forth ..

He hold Shivanands both hands and said .."Apney hamara dil kee Bath Kahee ..", then they both hugged ..Rajasree happily went to Kitchen to prepare shagun ka tdhali

but "Khurana Sahb ek bath Kahnee thee .."

People around them where frowning .. They did not understand anything but everyone almost had an idea which they don't want to believe ..

..Shivanand asked "andar chal ke bath Karey .."

And they both escaped from scene

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He was waiting "mom abhee thak aye jyn nahee .., because when arnie kicked him and his head hit oon table he had fainted ..but after 3,4 minutes he brought back to conscious his whole body paining , then he saw Bheem saying he is behosh and when Arnie wanted to kick him more somewhere doc bheem jaga , he stopped Arnie and asked him to stop hurting , now we will deal with him after going home'

So maan the clever stupid understood this trick will work , When Khurana Beat him for failing his semesters ..he usually act behosh ..seeing him behosh '. His mother cant control herself and will pound on his dad like a sherni , even though she too beat him ..but ..he knew well a mothers heart ..

By then he was almost ..no sure that Geet defenitely will blabber all those happened between them to her brothers ..and they will crush him to kill with their bare hands ..and if his dad come to know ..then he will murder him .. Only rajasree can save him from Geets brothers ..but what he did to geet is wrong ..so ..no help ..

Suddenly he remembered his mother ..She can save him only when if he acts sick or dying type ..So he decided to continue his behoshee ..untill his mom reach no matter whatever tortuer they use ..

He got enough time even to set heart breaking dialogues to his mother silently , 'unconsciously' laying on Jeep '

And he was waiting for his mom .. Why she is not coming , thank god I deccided to act behosh , otherwise ..Papaji .. Will have ripped him apart like Sunny do in Gadar ..

Then he heard his mom's scream "Maan 'Merey lal'' and cry '

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kya nautanki family hai...
rofl...i am laughing uncontrollably...
loving it
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Thank You Shruthi Thank you very Much

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

kya nautanki family hai...
rofl...i am laughing uncontrollably...
loving it

Thank you yup ..they not anyway behind Iyers in nautanki ..bas different Style Ka hi ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread

hmm...shagun ka thali is getting ready😍
Maan the stupid is clever enough to save himself from Iyer bros
thanks for the update
loved it
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oho so priety is Maan's mother...Maan is not so stupid as he is seen...so clever successfully in front of Doctor he acted like behoosh for so much time...

now what they are planning...bond Maan's chuha with geet for life time...

thanx for pm

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