~DiL sE~ d3 FF IMP NOTE PAGE 129

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❤️ dil se dosti dil se dance ❤️



this is the story of D3- dil dosti dance! Written in our own style! By PriNam (priyanka & narmada)' in our FF we have seen that all couples get equal preference and evry1's love story has moved into the new world ie marriage! But we will be showing college flashbacks' so the story is completely packed with Present (marriage) and college flashbacks!!! V assure you that u will enjoy this~~!! Plzzz read it review it!



introduction of college:


St.Louis college this is the most happening and famous college of Mumbai' it has been topped in all cultural events! There are two groups in the college Dazzlings nd Weaklings!! Dazzlers are considered to be the most happeinig students of the college! They get a chance to participate in all favourable events but weaklings never got chance toput up their talent.. but when Kria Ghai came into this college everything.. she gave a chance for weaklings to show up their talent and gradually weaklings and dazzlings vanished leaving behind Louians'



'passion- for life' (club)


this is the most famous club for all sorts of cultural events in NEW YORK! It gives a chance for new talents to exhibit their talent and also gives them the right way to use it!! age is of no difference here!! ! All those whose dreams are big this club will make it possible! It makes their dreams come true!!! Evry1's talent is respected and given good reward here.. it resides in New York University.. (This college has undertaken the club)' the club has its branches all over the world and it monitors a loads of competitions very often! The club's main branch resides in India to..!



character sketch:


Reyaansh singhania- in college flashbacks: he has a casinova image in the college! The most handsome hunk of the college!! Son of a very big famous merchant Mr.Runvijay singhania' he has always got what he wanted!!!! The very mistake most of them do is they consider him to be a casinova or being a Typical dazzler!! But no 1 new what exactly reyaansh was! Unless and until the destiny (his love) made its way in his life!!! Everything changed around '' his only passion was dance but after he met kria ' love also become his passion

Present time- he is a married man! A commited man! He is very good husband infact a very good friend to have!! His wife kria! He has always been with her in all times! Never left alone! Respected her decisions! Loved her soo much..! he is responsible person now but still filled with same old naughtiness! He is really happy in his life with kria.

Kria Ghai- collge time: a tomboy natured girl whose dream is to become a rockstar! She is a born dancer! Though her mom against this she has seen that her dance always been given more prominience!! She has never let her dance down (chup chupke hi sahi)..!!! from the time she came to st.Louis she had alwys been indulged in weaklings and dazzlings! But this dint last long! Things changed around soon! Once she understood her love she became a timid girl very romantic and really got a Girly character..

Present time: Kria Singhania: she is married to reyaansh! The love of her life!! She had always had a soft corner in her heart for Rey.. but when she realised she was in love she changed herself.. now she was perfect wife a good friend! Their relationship had always been special! They were romantic! They were understanding!!

Swayam Shikavat: college time- a sweet boy next door type.. he knew only 2 things! ie. Dance and his love for Sharon! Though he is rich he would prefer to be a weakling! He was simple never showed of his richness to any1!! Until they both fell in love with each other! Shraon had constantly rejected him! She was always been rude to him! Still he loved her.

Present time- married to Sharon! He loves her a lot!!! He takes care of her like a princess! He is mature and responsible husband!

Sharon Raiprakash: college time- a very arrogant girl! A very typical dazzler!! But she also had a sweet heart behind this arongant face which only swayam new!

Present time- married to swayam .. very happy in her life!! He was exactly the same whom she always dreamt to have like a husband! Only swayam can turn her into a mild Sharon! They are also a very romantic couple!

Vicky: college time- same as in d3

Present time ' married to neha

Neha- same as in d3..

Bhart-vishaka

Amar- rinni

Nilesha 'Vicky

These three couples are also married! And college time same as in d3.



professional life:

rey and kria look over a business in NY and also work for passion club as senior members

Swyam and Sharon look over a event management company and swayam along with Vicky work as dance instructors in St.Louis..

Rinni simmi help sharon in her business (mostly Sharon handles overy modelling and fashion shows arranged by their company)

Bharat is a owner of a Car showroom and Travel agency

Amar the owner of few 5 star and a 7star restaurant (hotels) in town..

Vishaka and neha also work along with Sharon sometimes and some times along with swayam teaching dance..


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each episode links will be posted here:

episode 1: page 1

episode2: page3

episode3: page6

episode4: page9

episode5: page12

episode6: page15

episode7: page17

episode8+9: page20

episode10: page24

episode11: page26

episode12: page31

episode13: page33

episode14+15: page 37

episode 16: page 42

episode 17: page 44

episode 18+19: page 47

episode 20: page 50

episode 21: page 53

episode 22: page 57

episode 23: page 60

episode 24: page 63

episode 25: page 66

episode 26: page 69

episode 27: page 74

episode 28: page 79

episode 29: page 83

note- page 87

episode 30- page 89

episode 31- page 92

episode 32- page 95

episode 33- page 101

episode 34- page 105

episode 35- page 109

episode 36- page 114

episode 37- page 119

episode 38- page 123

episode 39- page 125

NOTE ON PAGE 129

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EPISODE 1:


Morning time in the city of New York... well-furnished completely modern with all its trendy views and its super extraordinary life style is looking really great on the supercool morning... beginning of the new day 😊 people are started with their day to day today work.. Still 6am😊 a background music indicating the rising of sun and serene beauty of lake in front of a big mansion has filled the place with refreshing day😊 the beginning of the new day...

There is wide lake stretched out with its beautiful pure water towards east side made the early morning even more sweet... near the bank of this lake there a bench on which lies a jacket of a stylish handsome hunk who is beating his body to the wonderful background music DIL SE RE 😳 (well by now u all might have guessed who is this)

He is completely out of this world actually in his world his dancing has made the place even more attractive😛 Its REY (REYAANSH SINGHANIA)


In the scene now enters a servant from the mansion


Servant: "excuse me sir..! Your coffee..."


Rey: "(suddenly stops.. giving an OK look at servant) hmm Il have it! tum jao"


Servant: "yes sir!(he has just turned around and hardly had taken some few steps rey calls him)"


Rey: "suno... wo mad-a-m mmm .???"


Servant: "sir wo abi bi so rahi hai..!"


Rey: "wat???? (complete shock but still not surprised!!! Smiles) accha tum jao and yaad hena aaj se tum sab ki chutti hai? Inform again to all maids ok..!"


Servant: "yes sir!! Mein fir se sab ko inform kar deta hoon'!"


Servant enters inside! Rey comes forward takes his jacket and the coffee which is kept in a small round table near his mansion'

He drinks a sip and runs inside.. all servants are ready for their holiday..


Rey: "ok so tum log abi jaa rahe ho??"


One of the servant: "yes sir!!"


Rey: "ok just a second.. mein abi aata hoon.. (goes near the dining table where he had kept some covers he takes it and goves to servants) yeh tum logon ke liye!! (they take it over and move out)"


He sees at the time its almost 7.00am!!! gets alerted and runs towards his room!!!


As he enters there comes a very romantic breeze from the windows..

There in the bed lies the most prettiest girl in the world!!! Love of his life!!! The girl for whom the name beauty was made!!! (ofcourse you all came to know who this is ? right??? ) She was a princess! 'kria Ghai! Oops sorry its Kria singhania now! ;) who was in a very good sleep! He comes near her lyes next to her slowly moving her hair behind her ears and she just catches his hand and sleeps confortably.. at that moment she was looking so adorable that he goes for flashback.

He remembers their first takkar!!!


Flash back:


[ Rey and his friends with full on attitude move towards the party which said to be most exclusive!! He was the son of a rich merchant from Mumbai... he and his friends came into this club called THE DESTINY located on the famous site of DEHRADUN!! Dehradun is the most beautiful place with a number of jungles opened wide up over the town..! in this small town...a girl whose dreams are meant to be so big yet so confident to reach them is KRIA! Of course REY's destiny . There she is along with her friends to attend the most exclusive party of New Year night! She comes in with her phone on her ears and her mom's instructions on its full swing!!! Her mom SMRITI GHAI who is a good mother still strict enough to her sweet daughter! She is all alone without the husband giving a bright future to her daughter which is her only dream she wants her daughter to be successful and well settled in her life for which she considers studies is the only way and NOT DANCE!!! Because kria's only

DREAM is DANCE !!!!! to be a ROCKSTAR!!!!


K: "mom!! Kya hai??"


S: "tum dance nahi karogi bas!!!"


K: "fine!!!!!!! Kaha na nahi karoongi ab bas phone rako!!!"


By then her phone stops working!!! She just comes forward to her friends who are waiting for her infront of the club! Tired of trying to get inside!


K: "kya hua?? Tum log aise kyun kade ho??? Andar nahi jana kya??"


Girl1: "agar jhansi ki rani ke saat tumara war katham hogayi tho hum"


Kria interrupts


K: "kya???? Jhansi ki rani??? Koun?? (her mom!! It flashes)

huh..??? OYE bas haan wo meri mom hai agar kisi ne kuch kaha tho mein...!!"


Girl2: "accha accha teek hai!! Ab batao andar kaise jaye??"


K: "I know bahut exclusive party hena passes milna bahut mushkil hai...hmmm"


Girl1: "toh kya hum aisa hi waapas chale jaye??"


K: "array nahi!! Muje kuch sochne dona.."


She just turns around and there is voice of whole crowd calling out his name


REYAANSH REYAANSH REYAANSH!!


K: "reyaansh??? Koun hai ye??? Huh..! muje kya??"


And rey just passes by her side and due to crowd he just pushes her and her phone falls down!


K: "(angry) oye LINECUTTER!!! andhe ho kya??!!!??? Dek ke nahi ja sakte??"


Some stranger: "oh deko reyaansh!! Mumbai se aya hai' hayeee

kithna hot hena!!! Bahut ameer bi hai!! Yeh party usi ne tho organise kia hai!!!"


In her mind: "huh.. !! ameer!!? Hmmm! Meri phone?? oh no meri phone!!! (about to cry) shit!!! Yeh tho kharaab hogayi' uski toh..!! (thn all try to get in the club).."


Girl1: kria chodo yeh sab ! ab yeh batao andar kaise jaaye??"


Thinks and gets an idea!!


K: "issi ne phone kaharab kia hena ab yehi humein andar leke

jayega!! (evil smile.. she then calls out his name and the guards let her & her frenz inside thinking they are from REY's side!)"


She enters the party... what she could here all around is REY REY!!!


K: "uff!! Kya hai yeh ? jahan deko wahan sirf us REY ka.. huh..!!! kria tum yahan sirf NEW YEAR enjoy karne aayi hai so uske baare mein sochke apna waqt barbaad mat karna!!"


Just then all ask rey to show of his dance!! He then starts to dance! So gracefull so Hot so much of attitude!!! He was so pefect in his every steps he made!! He was so involved in his dance that he started breaking the things around in the club!! To that extent almost everything was ruined!!! Kria was hitting her forehead disapproving this!


K: "hogayi!! Aaj ka party barbaad! Chalo guyzz yahan reh ke b koi fayda nahi.."


Girl1: "(catching drinks in her hand!!) but kria.. yeh"

(she had kept just one step forward and was talking to kria and trying to convince her)

All the boys along with rey were with full on attitude!! Again the shouts were raised to its full volume! Manager of the club had his glance on the environment in the club!! He was shocked to see the condition of his club! Without wasting another second he called up

the cops!


Rey and his friends were coming infront of kria... they were all very excited!!! Infact the male ego was in their excitement.. when the boys moved front they just pushed one of kria's friend who was holding drinks in her hand.. the glass fell down!! A silent moved in the party but dint last for more than 4 seconds.. they showed attitude and moved front..


Girl1: hey!!! Ithna tod pod kia wo kaafi nahi tha kya???"


Those boys turned along with rey..!

Rey was looking at kria.. though she was in her mask he kept starring at her...


One of rey's friends ... Guy1: huh..??? jab hum boys dance karenge tho tod pod tho hogi na?? tum girls dance ka D bi jaanti ho??? (started laughing)"


Rey still busy at looking kria..


K: "in her mind- BOYS!!!!"


Girl1: (laughingly) dance D kyun pura dance ka matlab b pata hai!!! Showing some attitude"


Rey has a Q mark look in his face


K: "hey kya kar rahi hai?? (slowly in her ears)"


Girl1: "tum chup raho muje baat karne do!! Haan tho kya dance karke dikaade??? Hojaye ??"


Guy1: "kya?? Dance aur tum girls???? Dekthe yeh ladkiyaan aakir kya kar sakti hai ??"



Girl1: "kria chalo dikaado inhe apna dance"


Rey in his mind " kria...??? Hmmm nice"


Kria smells of upcoming danger she pulls her friend to side


K: "pagal hogayai kya?? Kya kar rahi hai??"


Girl1: "kria ek baar dance karke in boys ka mooh band kardo!!"


K: "tum samaj kyun nahi rahe ho?? Meine maa se promise kia hai ki mein dance nahi karoongi (in sad face)"


Guy1: "kyun darr gaye kya?? (starts laughing and every1 joins them)"


Kria hears it!! a JOSH flows over her body! She decides


K: "maa muje maaf kardo!! In boys ko tho sabak sikaana hi padega!!!"


She turns around them and throws the mask on rey's face !!

Now there she is all set to dance!! Closing her eyes she says


"sorry mom!!!"


With a full on attitude and a loud voice she says


"MUSIC!!!!"


With full grace and passion she starts ... she had completed few steps by then she turns and turns and with a wonderful style she stands in front of Rey!! Her eyes so adorable! Her moves so passionate!! Her first look and her first dance infront had made its seal on his heart forever!


Her dance made those guyz shut their mouth and she had proved that girls can not only dance but can be a rockstar!! Before Rey could compliment her before even he could utter a word her had was caught by cops!!!


She is in a shock!


Police: "chalo chalo!"


K: "yeh yeh app kya kar rahe hai meine kya kia!

Sir dekiye yeh yeh ladka hena isi isine yeh sab kia hai meine kuch nahi nahi kia!"


Rey stares at her...


Manager: "dekiye sir ab tak iss ladke ne dance karke meri club ka satynaash kar diya!! Aur ab yeh ladki b shuru hogayi.."


Rey was about to stop the police but even he was caught!!!


Rey: "dekiye aap batayiye in sab ka karcha kithna hua hai mein mein pay kar doonga!!!"


Police: "shut up!! Tum logon ko paise ka bahut akad hena!!! Chalo station sab akad nikal jayega!!"


They both where together!! Both of them dint know that they were made for each other and it was their destiny!! They were meant for each other!!!


plzzz gimme ur reviews!!

Edited by nams_love_d3 - 13 years ago
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hey gud start
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Originally posted by: mjht_sajan_rox

hey gud start

do pm me wen u cont


yaa sure can u accept my buddy list?? it will b easier for me 😊
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Ohk.. Narmada nd priyanka, awesum job!!!! Luving it!!! Plz cntinu nd update soon!!! Wil b waitin!!!!
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Originally posted by: Dancedevil

Ohk.. Narmada nd priyanka, awesum job!!!! Luving it!!! Plz cntinu nd update soon!!! Wil b waitin!!!!



🤗 ok dear DEVILL!!!! surely!! 😃
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hey really sweet...PM me the next time ull update and do update soon...
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Originally posted by: Sweetheart17

hey really sweet...PM me the next time ull update and do update soon...



yup sure !!! 😊
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its really good... i felt boring wen dat flashback started 🤔 ...bt rest was just perfect waitng 4 further epi eagerlly...
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aw nice yar i like it very much update fastt next one !

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