~DiL sE~ d3 FF IMP NOTE PAGE 129 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
lovely upd8!!!
especially the end!!! so sweet!
pl pm me the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Our page's name is Dil dosti dance fanclub and Dil dosti dance & Humse hai life - fan page .. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
EPISODE 3:

Just then there is a call in phone…


K: "maa ?? mom?? Oh no mom ka call!!"


R: "shethan ka naam lia aur….."


K: "rey chup!!! (she is holding her hand on his mouth)"

"Haan mom batayiye kaise phone kia??"


S: "haan mein wo tumse poochna chahthi thi ki.."


Jus then rey bites her fingers kria screems- AHHH


S: "kria kria?? Kya hua???"


K: "wo wo kuch nahi maa wo bas kuch b nahi!!"

Kria to rey- rey plzz


S: "haan accha teek hai wo mein yeh poochna chahthi thi ki tum dono kab waapas aarahe ho??"


K: "haan wo maa hum.. (rey is irritating her by moving hair splits of hair behind her ears … thn touching her lips.. giggling near her neck! :D (romance 😳)) (she is having butterflies in her stomach!! "chodo muje!!" 😆)"


S: "kya??? Meine tumein kria!! KRIA kya ho raha hai??"


K: "mom wo wo yeh"


Rey takes the phone kria goes near the window and stands..


Rey: "mom!! Wo kuch nahi mein bas …"


S: "reyaansh?? Beta! (laughingly) accha samaj gayi tang kar rahe hona meri beti ko??"


Rey moves near kria hugging from behind


R: "nahi mom mein tho bas usse utaa raha tha!"


S: "matlab?? Wo ab tak so rahi thi??? Usse usse phone do!! Mein abi uski kabhar leti hoon!!!"


R: "mom!! Aapko pata hai na aapki beti ko utaana muje bahut accha lagtha ab aap usse dantiyega mat!!"


S: "accha baba! Waise tum dono se tho mein behas nahi kar sakti!! Haan mein yeh poochne ke liya phone kia tha ki kab aarahe ho tum

dono??"


R: "haan actually humne abi tak decide nahi kia hai!! But kal thak mein aapko phone karke bataonga!"


S: "accha teek hai beta kria ka kayaal rakna! Ok? (he keeps in speaker mode) Aur mein usse bahut miss kar rahi hoon!!"


K: "mein b mom!! Aapko bahut miss kar rahi hoon!!"


S: "accha beta ab rakti hoon!! Tum dono apne kayaal rakna ok!

K & R: "yes mom!!"


S: "And kria rey ko zyaada tang mat karna!!"


K: "maa tho isse mein zyaada tang karthi hoon?? Ya fir yeh muje tang kartha hai??"


R: "oohh wooo oowooo tho mein tumein tang kartha hoon??? Haan (he is coming forward to her and she is moving back)!"


Smriti – indono ka kuch nahi ho sakta!!! She cuts the phone!


K: "haan tum ! tum muje tang karthe ho!! (she runs around the bed while rey is chasing her!)"


Rey catches her falls in the bed! Holding her both hands tight so that she cant esacpe..


R: "tho mein tang kartha hoona??"


K: "haan tum!! Chodo!! Chodo muje!"


R: "nahi chodonga!! Chodne ke liye nahi pakda hai..!!!"

They start fighting very cutely then..


He is lost in her eyes her most adorable eyes.. he slowly kisses her eyes… and now he is not holding her hands instead kria is holding him around his shoulders…


He slowly puts her few strips of her hair beautiful hair back of her ears! She then kisses his cheeks and says..


K: "thank you! Meri life mein aane ke liye!"

Rey too kisses her cheeks and says


R: "I ---- LOVE---- YOUUU"


K: "Love you tooo rey 😳.."


Before they could kiss each other their romance was interrupted by another call (rey's phone)


Rey and kria feel a little awkward while rey sees that there were almost 5 missed calls from one their friend from 'Passion for life' club…


thats all for today!! tyy sooo much for all ur reviews!!!!!! i nd priyanka will soon come up wid one more romantic kriyaansh scene!! 😃

love you all! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
nice one man...update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
it was 😃superrrb loved it
pm me pls..
update soon cant wait for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
that was grt pls update it soon pls ... cnt resist😊👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

😳😳So romantic.😳

I can imagine each and every scene.

I have no words to describe this.*Speechless*.

Please do PM me when you update it.

Edited by --aimy-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awww...this is soo cute...!!! i loved how rey was irritating kria when she was talking to her...ooops...their mom...!!!

update soon...!!!!!!!

-Saumya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
yippe!un dno ko sath me dkhma itna acha lgta h..wow..i cnt evn xprs...n u updated sun..plz jaldi jaldi likhna aur pm karma mt bhulna:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
It was sooo romantic. Next update jaldi karna pls.

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