Devils den:tu hai meriii g..g..g..gggeet

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Posted: 13 years ago
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My Thoughts regarding the Stalker track
I want CVs to completely copy the Darr track here because it gives scope for perfect drama ,romance and curiosity element in the show and the track can run for a longgg time with interest and can also bring our lost trps back 😃
The stalker's real identity should not b exposed in front of Maaneet till the very end of this track ...Viewers should know who is the stalker but Maaneet till the climax point should be unaware of this stalker .Then the stalker can enter Maaneet's life as Geet's old HP friend and become MSK's business client mayb and this way he can make his friendship with MSK just how SRK in darr became Sunny and Juhi's friend but they had no clue that SRK only is the stalker and so same way even here Maaneet will hv no clue that this friend only is the real stalker in disguise 😈 ;So this way the stalker can play his smart double game thus making MSK extremely possessive and it will b interesting to see the cat and mouse game between this stalker and MSK ...
CVs should not make any blunder of exposing the stalker in front of Maaneet in the beginning itself 😡...Drama should build up with suspense and curiosity which is only possible if Maaneet r unaware of the stalker's identity while we viewers will know it 😛
Vikas Sethi is a perfect choice for the stalker's role as he is a good matured actor who can act 👍🏼
Last but not the least the entire Amritsar circus party has no place in this serious stalker track ,so plsss get rid of them and send them to some trip elsewhere and concentrate on this stalker track 😊
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Episode Take
Today's filler episode was quite interesting thanks to the beginning of the darr stalker track 😛...I must say a good suspense element was brought in the episode today 👍🏼
Things I liked
  • The gift scene was well thought out because when MSK in the sms admitted that he has given her the gift for her birthday ,for a second I was left confused thinking whether MSK only called her to the tearrace to give her the birthday present 🤔 but then later the servant gives another birthday gift to Geet which was by MSK thus shocking both the viewers as well as Geet about the terrace gift which I really liked 👍🏼;Normally things in daily soap r shown in a predictable way but the whole SMS twist was quite unpredictable 👏...
  • Finally we will find out Geet's age thanks to this birthday celebration 😆😃;But I wish Geet had opened MSK's gift too so that we can find out what did our Kanjoos Khurana gave her 😡😆 ;But I guess MSK's birthday gift will b kept a surprise mayb because Geet will b wearing the same saree gifted by MSK on her birthday 😛...
  • The whole shadow scene of the stalker was really creepy and it did scare me for a moment because of DD's absolutelly brilliant expressions of fear 👏
  • I dont mind the filmy GGGeet Photo scene of the stalker too as its anyday better than the current circus 😆😃..
  • Precap is really interesting and makes one curious for the next episode to find out whether MSK gave those red roses to Geet or its the stalker again 🤔 ;Also precap suggested that Geet is in office with Adi and so she is kept out of the circus party which is again positive 😃
Turn-offs
  • This whole Reena track with the jokers courtesy film Masti has no head or tail and simply needs to end now 😡..
  • I wish CVs had banked few phone convo scenes of Maaneet here 😭
Episode Rating:8/10...
The stalker scenes and precap made it worth a watch 👍🏼
Edited by jyoti06 - 13 years ago

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-Mayu- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Hello Devils🤗

Well I missed the Den for two days. I hope you guys missed me.😳
Now coming to the stalker track! I guess it has immense potential if executed perfectly. The lost Trps and the lost interest of the viewers can surely be brought back by this amazing track.
I loved the episode only for the whole track that is being setup and loved the whole introduction of the Stalker!
Loved DD and the expressions she gave!

I demand that Maan be bought back ASAP!😃 I want my Passionate; angry and possessive Maan Back! I am missing NPM doing Tai chi!😳
Nothing much to say about the other parts of the episode.
Love
Mayuuu
Edited by -Mayu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looking forward to stalker track, Vikas Sethi will Ace this role, he is a fabulous artist! Can't wait to see him on screen!

Maybe Vicky went to school in HP, Creatives can come back and say that MSK only went to HP to look for Vicky right! Since Vicky was there he got obsessed with Geet only! Maybe Vicky is coming back to take revenge from his brother MSK for taking his love away!

Let's see, all Khurana men after Geet in some shape or form!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_SWMoXcZFUo[/YOUTUBE]

















Edited by 49erFan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Ressy Res Res ...
Come out Vikram .. we're waiting 😈
I want Vicky to come out as a friend/acquaintance/client, either one, of MSK or Maaneet .. I want him to build a friendly relationship .. get close enough to be able to target Geet secretly but within close distance of her..that'll make this track even more intense!
Z
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
There is a great opportunity for MP to give his brain a much needed rest. Last 6 months se the guy has been coming up with so many unique, creative storylines...bechara must be tired...😛 Now he has to only copy paste Darr track. No need to use his imagination. The original story is very strong. I have faith Sundeep Sharma will execute it well...nothing can stop it from being a hit then...👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6

Stalker uncle :Vikas sethi ji plzzz come soon..to GHSP ...u r very much needed!! Here there are a bunch of jokers from some C😡 grade circus which need to be kicked out ASap to bring in TRPS which are the most needed thing for the show rite now!!

Gurmeet ji I also want to begg u that plzzz come back to ur girl, ur Meeshti needs u ...as she is struck between clowns.😭😭
No expectattions from the episode ...😭😭 but still Hope doesnt die😃
Episode Disection
The stalker and Geet's part was done very nicely by DD and the director did a gr8 job in building this track.👏⭐️
I forgot to mention ..the msging scene ...it was chooo cute!! Loved DD's expressions ...they spoke lengths...😉
The photo touching scene was nice but wud have looked more convincing if the real artist who has to play that role wud have done it...😆😆..the voice over looked thoda sa out of place and also the guy dnt touch the photo ...😆..I think he is scred of MSK ROFL.
I missing Gurti alott😭...Gc hun plzzz come bak!!
But seriously i got scred with the stalker scenes ...and I pray to babaji that we get the much needed TRPS plzzz.
Those Circus party scenes looked so non convincing ...time to time popping in was atrocious!!😡😡
I hope when GC and the stalker come and these people get LOST🤢
Edited by ishpreet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A super small screenplay our dearest Jugnu. Now, this sscene would only take effin' five minutes to show!!! I tried to keep the character consistency whilst showing something we ALL want :\


[Jugnu sitting in the bar, with a glass of alcohol in front of him, He reaches out to take it but then stops]


Jugnu:- No Jugnu, you shouldn't. Try and refrain yourself from drinking. You can't be avadhe vadhe jasoos in Amreeca if you're drunk all the time! No wonder your cases never success, you're always drunk. Nahi Jugnus You can't drink, you shouldn't. What if you die tomorrow, Jugnus? Then how will you go to Amreeca? I bet even that Simranjeet ji, is in Amreeca all 'appy shappy and our neighber, Jaspreet ji, she's all alone. I think she wants you Jugnus, you're a vadhe handsome spy. From now on, you'll not touch this forbidden sinful drink, you'll move on and go to Amreeca with Jaspreet ji and become a vadhe spy.


[Scene ends, with Jugnu pushing away the glass and walks away]


Do check out my screenplay for a party scene regarding the stalker track here :-

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1937163

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res
U may be cute but there is something u should know...
I just came to say hello 🤣 from geet crazy pyscho a rejection hhahahahhahaha

Also to all my denian shisters be alertt, MSK police can pop up anywhere anytime 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Jo,Swa,Geets,Shivi,Z,Anshu,Faria,Sanju n all


Hiii🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Vikas Sethi All sweet Devils ,Gurtians n Maanetians Whole heartily welcoming to GHSP 🤗


What I want from This trck

1.Kick out 2 MPS n All circus ppl including Dev
2.Start parallel track of Adinky
3.Adinky help to Geeet😳
4.Possessive ,AYM MSK Protective caring MSK😳☺️
☺️5.Good n strong BG for Stalker😳

What Donts

1.No Circus plzzz😡
2.No Deveet Scenes🤢
3.No romance n no touchings between Geet n stalker😡
4.Dnt kil Maneet characters 😭

PS : GC come back soon we are missing 😭 WE love Gurtiii ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

All devils Vote for Gurti in SBS 2 more hours there its d time to proove Gurti power n show SBS what Gurti power 😛

Edited by anjalireddyy84 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
The Stalker is on his way...😃
Geet looks soo scred and Alert tooo...👏
Nano-Preetho said something very interesting... DIVORCE...😃

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