Opposite shores of a sea LAST Prt & EPILOGUE Pg 91 - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
oh so thats the story abt his past and his reason in this crime world...
is dev part of his father's gang...
will dev let geet go off like that...
oops they just met after 5 yrs and now they r getting separated again...
waiting for the next..
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Posted: 13 years ago
So finally the reason behind maan entering the underworld is out...
loved the way geet understood him
like geet even i have a confusion did dev knew that geet loved maan and hence purposely decided to get married to her... interesting
loved maaneet moments... i hope maan comes back soon
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n intesne n emotional update! Well written Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
I really felt bad on knowing maan's past. Poor soul. N now again they are parting. I hope everything gonna b fine. Continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
now dat explains why maan is like dis
amazing part
cont soon

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10
nice part...
does Dev have any part in this?
Geet got the shock...
Maan is leaving to set things right and hope he stays safe and returns soon...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww so sweet and sad too!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part...

Will he able to sort out & come back to geet forever as maan...

Do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 11

AFTER ONE YEAR

He is so happy today. Even the word happiness is not enough to describe his feelings!!

For the first time in his life, he is feeling like jumping in joy...literally just like a 5-year old kid who has got his favorite toy on his birthday!!

There is a huge smile decorated on his face...

And he had all the reasons to be happy!! After all, he was free from this crime world at last!!!

And today he is going back to his Geet!!! Just the thought of seeing Geet was sending churning sensation in his stomach!!!

He imagined the beautiful smile that would lit up her face when she'll see him... He imagined how she will run to him and hug him... He imagined her petite and delicate body in his embrace... He imagined how he will go on one knee and propose her for marriage in front of everybody... He imagined how she will blush and says yes... He imagined that he will marry her in front of everybody... She will be his Geet forever... No one will ever dare to separate them!!! He will give her so much happiness that she will forget all those years when she had cried for him... He will love her till his last breath... Even death won't be able to separate them...

"Excuse me sir, would you like to have something?" a voice broke his trail of thoughts...

He looked at the air hostess who was waiting expectantly for his order. He smiled and declines sweetly.

The air hostess goes to the next passenger leaving him in his thoughts again.

He remembered her sad face when he saw her last time one year ago...

It had took him more time than he thought would to sort everything out...

But he has gone too deep into the clutches of crime world, that it took him this much time to get out of it.

He has took him almost 6 months to sign a peace treaty with all his competitor gangs...

His competitors were actually happy that he was leaving the crime world and they could have power over the areas where he had control before... All his competitors were scared from him but they couldn't let him go into the police and threaten their existence.. So it has taken him 6 months to convince them that he would never go to the police... He did not have trust in the police department...

At last they had agreed, seeing how he escaped police!!

If any normal criminal would've been in his place, he would've sentenced life imprisonment or death verdict for all those crimes that he committed!! But he was not a normal criminal!! He was Maan Singh Khurana!!! He had hired the best lawyer of India to defend his case... He knew how the laws gets twisted in the courts according to the lawyers!! And he has won the case!!!

He was free now!!! Free to go back to his Geet!!!

He hasn't informed Geet that he was coming! He wanted it to be a surprise!! He wanted to see that beautiful surprise that will flood on her face to see him after one year!!!

Yes, he hasn't seen her from last one year!! In the initial 6 months, he kept an eye on her and knew everything about her whereabouts!! But then, he had to go to Bangalore for legal stuff and he has lost his tabs on her.

And he's going back to her today!!!

The announcement of flight landing in few minutes fastened his heartbeats!!! He was so close to her now!!! He couldn't control his excitement!!!!

As the flight landed, he immediately ran out after doing the paper work!!

His car was already waiting for him outside the airport!

He sat in his car, and drove towards her home...

It was harder for him to stay even a minute away from her now!! Oh how much he has missed her!!!! But she has always been with him...as his strength...as his love...as his faith!!!!

He parks his car outside her house and gets out of the car. Before going inside, he takes out a ring from his pocket, and smiles at the ring!!!

He takes a deep breath and walks inside fastly... He couldn't stay away from his Geet for even a second now!!!

But as he entered the gates, his steps slowed down in confusion at the sight!!

The house was decorated like a bride and was swarming with 100s of people...

He thought that they might be having some function in the house and his eyes started searching for Geet!!

But his world fall apart as his eyes fell on the banner on the door which read 'Handa family welcomes you to the wedding reception of their daughter with Dev Oberoi'!! He felt like someone has snatched the ground from under his feet!!!

All his dreams shattered in front of his eyes!! Geet married to Dev Oberoi??!! His Geet married to someone else???!!!! He felt like someone has mercilessly stabbed him in his heart!!!!

He felt like something was dying in him with the thought!! Tears started making way into his eyes!!!

The pain was too much for him to bear!!! He felt numb with shock as he realised that everything is finished!!!!

The reason for his life...is gone!!! There is nothing left in this world for him!!! His Geet...gone!!!

He still had the ring in his hands but that ring holds no significance anymore!! Because for whom he had bought this ring with so much love, has just accepted someone else's ring to decorate her hand!!!

The tears flowed on his cheeks and he felt his soul leaving his body... The world seemed so aloof from him!! He couldn't hear the noise of people talking anymore...

He stumbles back and makes his empty body to go away from this place!! Somewhere he could leave this empty body behind and closes his eyes forever!!! Because there's nothing left in him anymore!!! His life has gone with his Geet...

Only one question that was screaming in his head was that 'Couldn't she wait for him for one year?? He has promised her that he would come back to her, then why did she gave up on him so soon??? Didn't she trusted him???!!!'

But he knew that he would never get an answer to his question... Because he will never ask her!!! What's the point in asking??!!

If she has decided to move on in her life without him, then he would let her!! He will never come in the way of her happiness!! If this is what she wants, then he'll never show her his face again and make her sad!! He will spend his remaining breaths by living with her memories and silently leave this world embracing her memories...

He turns to go out of the place while clinging on to whatever remained of his shattered heart, but as he stumbles a step forward, someone bumps into him!!!

He looked at the person and felt a heart-wrenching pain in him at the sight...

Geet was standing in front of him dressed heavily in red and pink!! But it wasn't her dress that sent daggers to his heart, it was the sindoor in her head and mangalsutra in her neck that shattered his already broken heart into tiny pieces!!!

He couldn't take the sight anymore!! He felt that he will drop dead with pain at the sight, and honestly he wished he had dropped dead!!! Maybe death would be less painful than to see someone else's name's sindoor and mangalsutra on Geet!! His Geet...who wasn't his anymore!!!!

He closed his eyes to control the pain...

And suddenly he felt someone hugging him!! He doesn't need to open his eyes to know who was hugging him...he could feel and know the touch even in his grave!!

He opened his eyes and saw Geet hugging him and sobbing while hiding her face into his chest!!!

Maan felt a new edge to his pain!! He can't see her crying!!! No matter what!!!! His heart was already dead but he won't let her blame herself for anything!!

Unknowingly his hands reached on her back and he consoled her while stroking her back!!

"Its ok Geet!! Jo bhi hua, shayad ussi mein sabki bhalaayi thi!!" his voice sounded so distant...even to himself!!

Geet picked up her face from his chest and kissed him on his mouth!!!

Maan didn't know how to react! And then he gave into the kiss knowing that this is the last time they will be together!! This will be their last kiss!! Their goodbye kiss!!!

But this is wrong!! She is somebody else's wife!! They can't do this!!! It's forbidden!!! He can take any blame on himself but he can't let people to blame her for anything!! And this kiss is wrong!! But why does it feel so right??!! Why does it feel that this was meant to be??!! No! He can't do this!!!

He broke the kiss determinedly.

Geet looks at him confusedly. She couldn't understand why he's stopping her!?

He said with pain in his voice "This is wrong Geet!! We can't do this!!"

Geet frowns at him in confusion and says "Wrong?? What's wrong in this?? We love each other Maan, and I'm seeing you after one year, so what's wrong if we kissed??"

Maan couldn't realise that it's Geet talking!! Is she the same Geet that he knew??!! She is married to someone else and she doesn't feel that anything is wrong in kissing each other??!!

"Geet, tumhari maang ka sindoor aur tumhare gale ka mangalsutra hamein ye ijaazat nahi deta ke hum dono ek dusre ke kareeb aayein!!!" he told her to let her see reasoning in him. He couldn't believe how is she missing such a big point!!

Geet narrows her eyes on him and said "On the contrary Maan, meri maang ka sindoor aur mere gale ka mangalsutra, hamein poori ijaazat deta hai ke hum ek doosre ke kareeb aayein!!"

He said angrily as she wasn't ready to see that it's wrong "Geet, ye sab karne se pehle tumne ek baar bhi dev ke baare mein socha hai?" he closed his eyes to control the pain at dev's name. It hurted him way too much to think that dev is the one who she should think about now...

Geet narrows his eyes in confusion. Now she's seriously not understanding what he's talking about!!

She said flabbergastedly "But why should I think about him?? What has he to do with this???!!!!"

"He is your husband!!" he eats each and every word in pain but didn't looked at her.

Geet looks at him for 2 seconds and then almost screams "WHATTT???!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Now it was Maan's turn to get confused!

He looks at her in confusion not understanding what she meant!

He said doubtfully "Aren't you got married to Dev??!!"

Geet looks at him while anger starts building up in her. She had a huge urge to slap him tight on his face for thinking dev to be her husband and at the same time had a huge urge to kiss him again for his stupidity. But she settles to answer his question.

"Hell NO!!! Pinky got married to him!!!" she told him.

Her words acted like a soothing balm on his broken heart. He realised how stupidly he has thought! The banner just said 'daughter', it never said Geet!!! But there was still something bothering him!!

"But this sindoor and mangalsutra??" he asks doubtfully.

Geet sighs and rolls her eyes and said "These are of your name!!"

He felt like his dead heart came to life with her words. And a smile came on his lips.

Geet started telling him for what has happened in last 6 months when he lost tabs on her...

"Actually, after I refused to marry dev, Pinky fell in love with him! But Mom-Dad weren't ready for their marriage because they wanted that I should marry first as I'm older... So I was--" she couldn't say anything more as he slammed his mouth on hers and kissed her passionately.

He wasn't listening to her at all. He was too happy that Geet was still his!! Her luscious pink-glossed lips were inviting him to taste them...

He could just see her lips moving and at last he gave in the desire and kissed her on her mouth!!!

Geet was momentarily shocked by his act, but then gave in to his kiss and kissed him back while his hands snaked at the back of his neck...

They kissed each other like it's the last time while the people looked at them shockingly...

Geet has accepted him her husband a long time ago when her parents had forced her to get married before Pinky! So Geet has put on Maan's names sindoor and mangalsutra and made everybody shut up!!!

After 2 weeks, Maan and Geet got married in front of the whole world as Maan had promised her!!! And Maan joined his family business back and called his family back from New-Zealand and they all lived together happily...


AUTHOR'S NOTE

Hey frnds so this was the last part...

ok first things first! i did thot of making dev negative but then discarded it as whats the point of dragging the story like a chewing gum??!! the story has to come to an end... so it was better if dev's chapter was left untouched... and now dev didnt know what his father did... he was also clueless just like maan!!


and sorry for giving unnecessary sadness in the update, but trust me that's how this story was gonna end...the story was begging me to end it on a sad note but as i promised you guys for a happy ending, so the twist in the end!! hope you guys liked it, because i forced myself to write the ending... that was not how the story was gonna end if i went with the flow...(i wont make u sad by telling u how it was gonna end, bcoz now it holds no importance)


and an epilogue is also on its way...😛😛 scroll down


Plz hit the like and do comment

EPILOGUE


Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago

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