Opposite shores of a sea LAST Prt & EPILOGUE Pg 91 - Page 48

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Posted: 13 years ago
AUTHOR'S NOTE
hi frnds

so as everyone keeps on requesting for an epilogue im doing it for this one
the reason y i dont write epilogues is because i suck at writing endings...as you will see in this part...lolz

so as u know that this ss was gonna end on sad note, but i forced myself to write happy ending, so this epilogue is also a forced writing... sorry about that!!!


EPILOGUE

After 1 year Geet gave birth to Junior Maan (Armaan) and Junior Geet (Khushi)...twins... Who have the same attitude and anger just like their father!!!

It has been 4 years since their marriage and Geet is again expecting!!

Well Maan has developed a new hobby these days... He wants to make a cricket team...his own cricket team...Ahem Ahem!!

A typical day of Maan and Geet:

Geet opens her eyes to see her life in front of him! This is one of the promises she took from Maan on the day of wedding...that she will always see his face first thing in the morning!! And he has never broken his promise ever!!

Geet smiles and says "Good morning!"

Maan gently kisses on her lips and said "Good Morning Mishti!"

And he kissed her 5-month tummy and said "Good morning Juniors!!"

Geet gets up in a half-sitting position and said "Maan, how many times I have to tell you, it's Junior not Juniors!!"

"Fir soch lo Geet! Problem tumhe hi hogi!!" he said mischievously.

Geet frowns and said confusedly "Problem?!"

"Haan Geet!" he tooks her lips into his and said in between the kiss "Mujhe to meri cricket team poori chahiye! Ab tum decide kar lo ke tum doubles mein dogi, ya singles mein!!"

Geet breaks the kiss and frowns at him and said "Doubles-singles??!!"

"Haan, soch lo Geet! If you'll give me twins, it will be just 6 times...or else" he brushed his lips on hers and said in a husky voice "it's gonna be 11 times sweetheart!"

Geet was so close to loose herself in him but she snapped her senses back and said while pushing him "Maan, ye kya naya naatak hai cricket team ka!!! Aap theek to hain na?? 11 bachche??!!! Main to mar hi jaaoongi!!"

He pulls her with a jerk towards him and said angrily "Geet, khabardaar agar tumne dobara marne ki baat ki to, mujhse bura koi nahi hoga!!!"

Geet realised that he is very angry and said "I'm sorry Maan! I didn't mean it!!"

But Maan looked away angrily and was about to get up when Geet snaked her arms around his neck and said to pacify him "Maan 11 bachcho ka naam kya rakhenge??"

Maan looks at her with a smile and said mischievously "You don't worry about that Geet!! Wo maine soch liya hai!! Tum bas team ki tayaari karo, aisi chhoti chhoti baatein main khud dekh loonga!!" and he started leaning towards her...

Geet blushes and smiles...

They were just about to get into the spread when the door opened and 3 year old Armaan and Khushi came running into their room...

Maan sighs and gets up from Geet and picks up both the kids in his arms and said "Why aren't you guys ready? School nahi jaana hai kya??" He had other plans today...

"Aaj to school mein chhuti hai!!" Khushi tells him.

Maan looks towards Geet who controls her smile mischievously.

Maan gives her a momentarily glare and said to Khushi "So what's the plans of our princess and prince??"

"We want to go to the picnic!!" Armaan answered him instead.

"Alright! What's the problem in it??!! If our prince and princess wants to go to picnic, then we will go to picnic!!" he said with finality.

Both the kids kissed him on each cheek and said "Thank you papa!!"

Maan kissed them back on their cheek and said "But my princess and prince, we can't go to the picnic without taking a shower right? So both of you take a bath, while Papa and Mamma also takes a shower and then we'll go to the picnic!! Okay??" he looks towards Geet and winks.

Geet blushes knowing his plan.

"Okay Papa!" both the kids run out...

Maan locks the door after them and jumps on the bed near Geet.

He comes on top of Geet and she says blushing "Maan, Go take a shower!!"

Maan gently takes her lips in his and said in between the kiss "Maybe you haven't heard me Sweetheart! I said Papa and Mamma are gonna take a shower!!"

He gets up and picks Geet in his arms and walks towards the washroom...


Thats all for this SS... and i need double comments for last part and epilogue...otherwise im not writing epilogues EVER!!!😳😆


Plz hit the like and do comment😊😊


Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
poor maan it took him a year but he finally did come out
aww
love that geet did that for him
WOW! a cricket team poor geet 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice SS Jazz.
But frankly speaking i would have preferred it if u would have stuck to ur original plan of the ending even if it was not a happy one.
Anyways now that u have ended it nothing can be done.
Not all love stories end on a happy note u know.
As for Dev wish u could have elaborated his part a bit more.
Sorry about the comments but I just wanted to give my honest opinion.

So a very nice story...loved it from the beginning...thanx a lot for all the effort u have taken to write it...Hoping to read another SS written by u and that too very soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
what a happily ever after ending
i loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww luvd da happy endin
amazin epilogues
beautifully written
fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
I know it started off sad, but I'm so glad that it tended on a good note...

Enjoyed the epilogue as well, perfect end.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow loved it very very much
11 with cricket team muahh lol
Amazing update and epi
Xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it
The epilogue was great too
Happy Endings 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awwi loved it.. going to miss this FF :)
thanks Jaz!!
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Posted: 13 years ago


I loved it . It was short n crisp . No dragging . Agreed , coz there's no point in stretching it . In stead you can continue from the probability of Dev turning -ve in a new SS . This 1 had its share of problems ; Big Ones !!! but I love happy endings . There's a lot of sadness around hence I felt the SS was Fantastic coz true love won and in the end All was Well 👍🏼

I LOVED this story 👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼
Loved the epilogue and yeah that build up sadness at seeing daughter of Handa's getting married was good one ; quite scary too 😆 . You know I got an inkling though that you're planning something fishy , considering Maan's blissful happiness in planning to propose Geet while boarding 😉

On the whole , it was Fab .
Thanks for pm . Would love to read more of these 😊

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