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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

Moderator's Note: Temporarily removed due to plagiarism. See next page for details.

Edited by SuhanaSafar - 13 years ago

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

i will post another part in an hour or so...this was quite long so cut down the shower..but u will have it..i am alreday done with that..😈

give me comments..

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Sorry to say but its same as Truly Magical part

Isnt it

Still hot

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

koi to ac ka temp kaam karo
i am feeling hot hot
hehehe
loved well
gosh a nother long night
well unki stamina ki daath deni padegi
they dont get tired with there night hard work
hehehe
kitna stamina hai dono me

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Sorry to say but its same as Truly Magical part
Isnt it
Still hot

Yes some of it..the idea is..pehla waala is mine..😭

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

@sanjana: after this is a message..tht will be rest..pakka..😉

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Mmm i dont thnk ppl liked it..so let this part be deleted out and let someone write something better.. sry for spoiling everyones mood..😭

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Hey sherya.

I loved it...yaar yeh naya idea kahana ka maine pheli baar dekha hai osrry pada hai😆😆😆

Aur pata nahi kaun kaun se ideas rehe gaye hai jo unique ho🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

of course ppl will like it with teh time difference some might be sleeping😆😆😆 but give it till 2marow morning and see what ppl say

I will TRY to write something 2marow as its been a while 😳

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

awesome sanju 😳☺️
someone write the next part soon

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#280

Moderator's Note

Part of Chapter 45 by mchopra has been copied and pasted from a FF on WordPress. The original was posted sometime in May or earlier, judging from the time of the comments. I am going to remove the post and send it in a PM to the writer. If she can prove to me that it was not plagiarised OR if and when she rewrites this and any other plagiarized passages, I will allow the author to repost the chapter.

Here is the link for the original: http://muskans.wordpress.com/truly-magical/

Edited by SuhanaSafar - 13 years ago