ff:intezaar updated PT.53 PG122 13/9 - Page 27

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update,Hari.Waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hari thank u for the lovely two parts they were good now this ammo god i hope one day the pf kick them out... mu question is the same as ekta-avinafan question y ammo and vishaka, does ammoknow about vishaka plan update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb work hari...always loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
NICE PARTS 😊 ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i lik this ff could u add me in pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
Frieinds,

Once again thanks for a great resp[onse

and yeah all ur questions will be answered in upcoming part and i think u like it too

I took a break which is utmost necessary to me.I worked out on intezaar and i think i have story upto another 5 parts. so hope u like the upcoming parts which had some drastic sequences

next part by evening

loves,
hari
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Posted: 13 years ago
PARTT 18-SHOCKS
Radev's work completed and there fore Radhika and dev bid bye to their friends and entered into their respective roomsAfter some time dev entered Radh's room and saw a moody Radhika standing balcony and searching for some thing in darkness.
Dev' went to her "radhika"
Radhika;hmm
Dev:main tum se kuch poochu
Radhika;haan
Dev:tumhe kya hua
Radhika looked at him puzzled"mujhe kya hoga"
Dev:u are known for ur word to word answering to people, but today mng why did u spared vishaka in the class and also in house too
Radhika:kyun ki vo mere didi hain
Dev:acha mrinalini bhabh se bhi badkar hain kya
Radhika:nahi
Dev:toh tum bhabhi ko bhi nahi spare karte hain na
Radhika:vo toh alag tha, didi mujhe kuch nahi kahoge, did aur vish mein bahut farakh hain
Dev:toh vusse spare karne mein jaroorat kya hain
Radhika:kuch nahi amma ke liye vusse spare karna hi tha mujhe.
Dev:okay leave it, waise hi aur ek poochna hain tum se
Radhika:kuya hain
Dev: vo vishaka yaha kyun hain, vuski papaka ek ghar hain na delhi mein
Radhika vo vish ko combined studies ka aadat hain, so chachaji thought it may be useful t stay here
Dev okay cool
Radhika:okay bye go
Dev kept a baby dissapointed face and Abhi jaao
Radhika:haan
Dev:tujhe mujh par ghussa hain kya
Radhika:haan
Dev with a worried tone:kyun ,maine kya kiya
Radhika:dekho dev tujhe maaloom ki mujhe sirf buisness ke siva kuch par interest nahi,lekin aaj jab hu padrahe hain,tum ne kya kiya
Dev laughed out loudly and said "oho,vo toh just i am checking,bhabhi said u changed a lot these days, i am checking wether if u changed."
Radhika kept a relieved face
Dev:warna tujhe koun karega, agar kal tera man badalkar, tum kisi se shaadi kiya toh, he is out
Radhika with an angry tone tried to beat him, but he started running and they both started to run with dev front and radhika back, dev not giving chance to radh, run down the steps into garden, and radhika t followed him. At a pointDev was abt o fal becausse of the wet lawn, but radh tried to help him, which made her to fall and they rolled over the sloppy lawn.
Both radhika and dev were rolling one above the other, and at a point radhika tightly holded dev, where her lis touched dev's lips, and they both at that point forgetting the whole position they were kissed each other passinately.They don't know how much time they lost in their kiss, but the first wasradhika who broke the kiss and dev imediately got back his mind and they stopped roling , As soon dev got up on his feet and analyse what happened, Radh was no where n surroundings and the lights were on in her bedroom. Running his hands through his hair he too went up and when he got inot her room, he noticed that radh was in wash room, so silentlyhe went back to his room, closing the balcony door.
As radhika came out f bathroom, she noticed a note near her dress, so went there and took it to read on which it have "sorry, i doesn't intend to do it, but it happen. hope that my tiger will not get angry on me."
Reading this a smile came across Radh's lips, she then wrote some thing on the letter and kept it in dev's room where he was in athroom and went back to her room. .
The night both were unable to sleeps and were lost in their thoughts seeing the smiling moon
Next mroning...

Radhika woke up early in morning and started preparing for aarthi in the mandir place, son every one arrived. Whne radhika was abt to start aarthi, Rp ji said her to stop and said to dev to take plate and do the aarthi as he didn't do a pooja since he arrived there,Dev cae forward smiling to radhika took plate from her, and then Rahika started singing the song, while dev was doing aarthi


O re kanha nainako naahi chain
Bhor takat hai rah tihari
Jage na sove re, Nainako naahi chain

Kanha nainako naahi chain, ho nainako naahi chain.



Jug jug se more tan man pe naam likha he tera
Jugwale ka jaane kahe nata tera mera
Tu mori ganga jamuna, tu hi mori trishna
Me Radhe, me Radhe tu Krishna


O re Kanha sun nainaki ber
Bhor takat hai rah tihari
Jage na sove re, Nainako naahi chain
Kanha nainako naahi chain, ho nainako naahi chain.

The song completed and every one opened their eyes, but there were two pairs of eyes still closed, Radev's.They were standing at front folding their hands praying the god, When every one saw them the first thought came into their mind was "anha, ye jodi sahi selamat rakhe"

The dyas passed by, radev's friendship deepen more and their love too but which is a hidden unexpressive one. Finally thie exams were also over a day, The next day of her exams
Radhika was in the mandir when asmi calle dher
Radhika:hey asmi
smi:radhu kaha ho
Radhika:mandir aagaya hun, wapas ghar loutaraha hun
Asmi:toh jaldi aajavo, main bhi aaraha hun, ek important work hain
Radhika:lekin, whats it
Asmi:tum aajavo sab kuch batavungi
Radhika:okay
Asmi kept the phone and Radhika wne tot house,By the time she reached pb, asmi was already at main gate waiing for Radhika
Radhika:hi asmi
Asmi:hi darling, chal jaldi frsh hokar aavo bahar jaana hain
Radhika:lekin kaha
Asmi:surprise
Radhika:okay two mins
They both went inside but stopped at door as they listenes a word"manhoos radhika"
Radhika and Asmi wnet to the window to see into the room and saw all pf except for dev and birju,and Rp even ranjiv and vydehi is also there
Ranjiv"kaki,, humne bachpan se ye socha ki Vishaka ka vivaah dev se karein"
Daadima:ranjiv tumhe kuch galat feme huyi maine aisa kabhi nahi socha, main sadav radev ko hi jodi banne ka chaha tha, aur jab aaj vo din aagaya, ye sa kya hain
Ranjiv:maaf kijiye kaaki, lekin vo ek manhoos hain, vo aapke parivaar ke liye acha nahi
Mrinalini:chachaji itni din aapko gourav liya hain, iska vajah sirf aur sirf Radhika hain, vuske baarein mein aur ek shabd nikhala to, aap meri sausral ke bahar jaana padega, Radev ka shaadi hogi vo nischit hain
Radhika was listening with keen interest and worried ness
Vishaka who kept silent till then suddenly started cryibg saibg"mummy, main dev se bahut pyaar karti huu, agar vo mujhe nahi mila toh, main marjavungi."
Radhika at that time felt like earth beneath her lega crashing she kneeled on to asmi for support and tears are rolling down from her eys.
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Posted: 13 years ago
SORRY FOR A DELAY OF A DAY BUT MY SLEEP DOESN'T ALLOW ME TO TYPE IT YESTERDAY, ANY HOW I GAVE IT HERE, ANY DOUBTS ASK ME I WILL ANSWERHOPE U LIKE THIS, ANY MOMENT U CAN''T BEAR ME TELL ME I WILL END IT UP
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnxx for d pm anjana! juz lovd it! awesme prt!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ all my frends who responced and commented me thanks for all ur efforts and i promise u that i will never let u down
@ekta and @palak;i think i answered ur questions

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