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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome update
just dont like the interference of karan in her life who the hell is he to say to go away from there it's her personal decision he is no one to her

its not karan its sanjay...

he is her best friend...he understand very well about her so he don't want to see his friend in pain...
he is very caring so only he say her to move away from there...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

sanjay really seems a nice person, and it was nice seeing geet getting along with his friend

and maan pleaded for his daughter

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: nishha

its not karan its sanjay...

he is her best friend...he understand very well about her so he don't want to see his friend in pain...
he is very caring so only he say her to move away from there...

sorry for my mistake
but meera is also her best friend but she is not telling her to go away so why sanjay

Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: abinash079

sorry for my mistake
but meera is also her best friend but she is not telling her to go away so why sanjay

sorry for my mistake --its ok...😆
but meera is also her best friend but she is not telling her to go away so why sanjay--its not painful for maan to stay with geet but for geet its painfull to stay with maan there is reason behind all these...
thanks for your concern for maaneet🤗

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

hi nisha ( akka )

just caught up with this ff

super a iruku

edho problem naala than rendu perum pirinjurukanga pola iruku

was that problem caused by sanjay ??

idha nanachu nanachu en thalai vedikarathuku munnadi update pannidunga

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: niticool
hi nisha ( akka )
just caught up with this ff

super a iruku

edho problem naala than rendu perum pirinjurukanga pola iruku

was that problem caused by sanjay ??

idha nanachu nanachu en thalai vedikarathuku munnadi update pannidunga

thanks for the pm

super a iruku ---Thank you niti...(mika nanri)

edho problem naala than rendu perum pirinjurukanga pola iruku----you are right...rendu perum romba nala purinju vachuirukanga(bothe understanding each other well)...loving each other too...

was that problem caused by sanjay ??----definetely not... sanjay is geet's best friend just helping her... he don't have any connection with maan and also he don't know about maan so he just seeing things in geet point of view...

and caring for her as a friend...

idha nanachu nanachu en thalai vedikarathuku munnadi update pannidunga ---thala vedikuradu mundai kandipa paniduren niti ungalukaga

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Hi friends..
for your kind information sanjay is not a negative character instead he is a good friend of geet so caring for her... yeah he is good in nature and opposite to maan's character but he never ever fill maan's place in geet heart both made for each other...

sanjay is just a close friend to geet and he seeing things in the POV of geet he don't know any thing about maan and his character he just asking geet to come out of the Mansion where she's not happy as a friend he want geet to be happy for ever...so chill up 😉

Precap:geet moving to HP for semester holidays...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Part 8
Part 9

Now after a long time nearly 6months he again spoke to her he called out her name "Geet" her heart jumps out of happiness but her brain refuse to be happy..she cant justify her expression is she really happy to speak with him or else angry with him why her heart is yet making her too weak before him...
her subconscious mind warning her

#why geet ?why you let him to talk to you?why you let maya to stay with him?why you are so happy when he speaks to you?you are here for dadi geet don't forget that..#

while thinking about his words she started to think about her past which is the most beautiful part of her life where she lives happily with her maan..

they didn't fell in love at first sight they take time to understand each other but there is some thing happen to them after there first meet they live happily with out there knowledge they love each others company they didn't happy with there marriage but there is love in between them..but now every thing is changed...
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flash back
as soon 6months get over with there silly fights and mischief geet enjoyed well in her college after her final exam...its her semester holidays now where she is very happy and want to spend some time with her parents whom she missing very badly for this 6 months..

she used to talk with them in phone but she miss them badly she want to spend this holiday with them..she got permission from dadi too for that but dadi want maan also accompany her..which she hates she don't want to go with maan

As well as maan don't want to go with her that too for her home town where he get trapped into marriage for this bathamees ladiki...
where dadi wont leave them as there wish

dadi founds that both are very busy for the past 1 month where maan with his important project and geet with her studies so dadi want them to spend some time together

Maan finally accepts to take geet to hp just for 2 days as he have very important meeting dadi also agrees and geet is also very excited as at least for 2 days she can stay in her home ...

geet and maan left to Hp as soon as semester holidays begins where maan drives the car as usual he wont speak.. geet stares through the widow after a while she started to smile which turns into laugh soon...

What?why laughing you really become mad now?
geet opened her mouth wide open and turned towards him

I was thinking about you Mr.khurana

What to think about me now?

Not now.. i was thinking about our marriage day...

Marriage day !! and whats there to laugh in that..

Nothing is there...but you know how i scold you in my mind when we travel to delhi

What you scold?

Kadoos,saru,, and so on

What's new in this geet how ever you are scolding me now also like this in your mind

Hmm.. but there is difference in that where i don't know any thing about you that time but you are some what good person not bad as what i think...

What you think ?

I thought you wont let me for my higher studies as like all other husbands i seen in my village you also seems to be very arrogant but you are different...

So now you think that am a good person..

Not exactly... you are kadoos and saru but acceptable..

Maan smiled to her words seeing her baby face expression and pretend to be anger to her..

Oh then you will see who Maan Singh khurana now....saying this he is about to stop the car where it stopped by it self...

what happen why you stopped the car please don't fight now am very happy mood that am going back my home...she said this with pleasing expression

geet i didn't stop the car it stopped by it self wait i will check it now...

What happen maan?

after checking he said

its minor problem geet i will fix it...but it will take some time...

Its already 3 now how much time it will take to get ready...

I don't know exactly geet but i will try my best to fix it soon..
saying this he started to repair...

geet waited for a while watching him what he doing and get bored soon as she don't understand any thing and move to farm which is near the car where more children playing soon she mingle with those children and started to play with them...

after a while maan noted that geet is playing with the children...

Maan self thought:# she is very childish how can she easily mingle with those children who is unknown to her#

Its almost dawn now and going to dark soon geet realized that when those children started to move and came near maan..

Maan its not working yet.. still you struggling to its almost dawn now...

yeah i know geet.. need some more time i will fix it soon...you sit inside the car...

No maan.. am fine standing..you need any help...saying this she about to touch some wire which is very hot and her figure gets burn due to that...

"Geeet" saying this he moved to hold her hand in the process he wipe his grease filled hand in his white shirt and he pore water in her figure...and said you better don't do any thing that will be the better help for me
geet made a pout and stand quietly near him
he removed his dirty shirt and keep it the back sheet of the car and started to repair again with his black vest...

its now dark and small drops of rain falling on them where geet enjoyed the drops of rain till it become heavy rain fall but when rain started to fall heavily geet entered in to the car...and shouted at maan

"Maaan its heavy rain come inside the car"

with out rising the head from the car he answered her

geet just few minutes i will finish the work,, we can straightly go home then..

Maan what ever you can see that latter its already heavily raining now come inside else will get cold...

Maan didn't find any words to answer her so he didn't mind her words and continue with his work

which made geet more irritated and she get down from the car as soon as she get down hold his arms and pull him out from the car and push him inside the car's back sheet and she also sit next to him...

Geet what you doing she put her index figure in his mouth and glares at him and said chup bilkul chup

he know its the danger signal for him.. if he spoke also she wont hear to him so he shuts his mouth and sit silently next to her and turns his face towards the window and stare outside..after some time he noticed that she's is shivering in the cold where her cloths is fully wet in the rain...

He took his shirt which is lying next to him and gave it to her..she took it from him and started to wipe herself face, neck. arms and she untie her hair and made it loose and started to wipe it which cause the droplets to fall on his face and make him to concentrate on her...

Yet he is staring out side the rain but when the drops fall on his face he started to admire her beauty which is well exposed now due to her wet clothes..his gaze moved from her legs to head..she feel the odd sense which cause by his gaze to her skin...she suddenly turned towards to him he moved his gaze and turned his face towards the window
and for some time he didn't turned to face her...
at last when he turned to see her he found that she is sleeping where her hands are shivering in cold she placed her head in the closed glass window and fall in to sleep...

Precap:Maan feel odd in among geet's friends...

Part 10
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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago