Love Will Find Its Way-Maaneet FF.. Note pg58 18/4 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh don't worry dear...do ur xams well...

Will wait 4r ur next update...

both parts r awesome... Ur doing it nicely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant luved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely parts dear
pls add me and send me the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Updating Tonight IST...
Thanks for all ur wishes...
I did pretty well in the exams...
Loads of love
Sakshi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

Maan drops Geet home and goes back to the Khurana mansion... As soon as he parks the bike, he takes out his mobile, he sees a call from his father... He decides to call him...

Maan: Yes dad... U called me up... Sorry I didn't see your call... Had gone for a short drive with Geet...

Rajveer: Its no problem son... So how was the drive??? U both loved the new bike????

Maan: Yes dad... Geet was pretty excited... She has all plans for tomorrow... Wait... Don't tell me you both forgot her birthday all again... God...!!! Yes u must have forgotten... that's y u called me up so late... Ohhh... Now I get it... U guys r not back home...

Rajveer: Son, listen...

Maan (interrupting him): Hmmm... So now u need Maan Singh Khurana's help to manofy ur little princess... Hmmm... So lemme think... Should I help u???

Rajveer: Please son... U know naaa... Wen we would be back... The hell would be bend upon us... I m sorry we both wouldn't forget her birthday ever again... Promisee... Pakka waala...

Maan: Let me see... Come directly to the Handa House... Main wahan jaakar wahan ka atmosphere theek karta hoon... But then promise me u would fulfil my next wish without any problems and hurdles...

Rajveer: Look no promises as of now... That's wrong and mean...

Maan: Ohhhkkk... Help urselves then... I am going to bed dad... Good night...

Mohinder: Maan... Wait... We will fulfil all ur wishes... Abhi please bacha le yaar...

Maan: That's better papa... (Maan calls Mohinder as papa and his own father Rajveer as dad)... Come back soon... I m going to Handa house... See u there...

Maan reaches the Handa house to see the temperature out there... Meanwhile Mohinder and Rajveer reach back home too...

But Geet had been so excited after her first bike ride that too with her best friend that it had just slipped out of her mind that her fathers had to wish her birthday... She was sooo excited about her plans for the next day that she came back home, wished her mother goodnight and went to bed...

Rajveer: Bach gaye aaj to Mohinder... Nahi to Geet ki punishment se to koi nahi bacha paata...

Maan: Lets see aap dono kab tak bach paate hain... Wait for tomorrow morning.. Chalen dad... U both have got a difficult day tomorrow...

All of them retire for the day...

Next morning...

Maan along with Mohinder, Rajveer, Rano and Savitri Devi are sitting in the Handa house living room waiting for the princess to wake up and the new day drama to begin...

Rano: I guess mujhe Geet to utha dena chahiye...

Maan: Rano Maa, main jaata hoon... Waise bhi aapka inn dono k saath rehna zyada zaroori hai... So that these two don't mess up the things further...

Rano and Maan give a lopsided smile on this statement of Maan whereas the two fathers sat with straight face...

Maan enters Geet's room...

Maan: Mishti... Mishtii... Good morning Mishti...

Geet: Good morning Maan...

Maan: Wake up u lazy head... Its quite late and the day seems bright and interesting... Everyone is waiting since long for u downstairs...

Geet: That depends on u Maan... How the day goes with me... and yeah I don't want to talk to anyone down there... They haven't wished me birthday yet... How can they forget the same thing again and again every year... They don't love me and I don't love them too... Tum jaao aur unko bolo ki mujhe unse baat nahi karni hai...

Maan: Mishti yaar... Koi baat nahi... U know na they are so busy and trust me they wanted to wish u yesterday night itself but u slept early after we came back and they didn't get a chance to wish u... Chalo ab get ready soon... Loads of fun awaits u... Since its ur birthday, u can punish the two people down there... and Rano maa has prepared ur favourite breakfast... Yummmyyy... I am sure u don't want to miss it... I am waiting downstairs and yes there's a gift for u waiting in ur cupboard... Wear that today...

Geet: Yay... U got me a gift too... Thanks yaar... Thankfully that dress only I can wear not like ur other gifts which u njoy more than me...

Maan (leaving the room before he has to listen to more of her taunts): Geet jaldii... I am not going to wait for long...

Geet gets ready and wears the red knee length dress Maan has got for her...

Geet (to herself): Geet yaar u r getting beautiful day by day... I am sure a young prince is gonna fall in love with u soon... (She winks to her image in the mirror)... Time to give some nice exciting punishment to the kings down there...

Geet descends down the stairs and everybody is surprised to see Geet dressed so elegantly...

Geet (grabbing everyone's attention by clearing her throat): Before the men of the house apart from Maan obviously start apologising for their negligence yesterday, I want both of u to stand here in front of me...

Rajveer and Mohinder do as they are asked to... Maan and Rano stand at their back having a hearty laugh at the sake of these two...

Geet: Good... Seems that u were already ready for it... Great... Now I want u to bend down and be a cock for 10 minutes atleast... and then gift me something which I would like right then somehow... Uske baad I will think if u both are forgiven or not...

Maan, Geet, Savitri Devi and Rano were having the time of their life seeing the two most powerful business men of the city bent down just because their princess want them to be...

After the punishment is over everyone wishes Geet a very happy birthday and gives her presents... Everyone has breakfast together... Maan and Geet leave for the wonderful day ahead...

Geet: So Maan whats in store for the day today...??? Whats the surprise???

Maan: Madam surprise agar bata dunga to whats the surprise then... Wait for sometime... The day has just started...

Geet: As u say sir... I am all ready for the fun...

Maan: I can tell u one thing as of now... I have a got u the same number of gifts as ur age and they are at different places... Now its upto u to solve the clues I or others give u and reach to ur gifts... So ready for the fun???

Geet (gets really excited): Yup Maan... U r too good...

Both leave on the bike for the further surprises...

Hey friends...

Sorry for delay in updating but was caught up with exams... Thankfully the exams are now over and the fun filled festive week starts... Here's a short update... I thought of adding the part of Maan and Geet in the birthday celebrations but then left it out completely for the next part... The next part I will update in a day or two... So tell me how u like it..??? Please hit the like button and leave ur valuable comments... It motivates me to write more... and please send me the buddy request in case u want me to send u pms... Its easier for me to send the pms...

Love

Sakshi



Next Part: Part 4

Edited by zaqxsw - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome continue soon n hw was ur exams
Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: muraad

maan and his mishti awesome geet is 15

maan ki age plz



Hey... Maan is two years elder to Geet... It means he is 17... 😊
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi04

awsome continue soon n hw was ur exams



Hey Sakshi
Thanks... Exams were good... Now the festival season begins... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing part...love their cuteness...abhi dost hain par pyar to hona hi hai...hai na
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Sakshi...wonderful update...

all love Geet so much...so lucky Geet...Maan's style of giving b'day gift is out of this world...very unique style...

so we are also ready for surprise ride...please update soon... don't take much time in between...it takes away the flow and fun of the story...

thanx for pm

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