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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-50

Its morning seven ..geet changed her position from one side to another side. Early morning sunshine is teasing her bare body. she pulled the blanket till her neck. Her hand searched for maan by closing her eyes. no he is not there..she is not willing to open her eyes. some where she scared that her happiness what she felled lost night it may disappear from her mind. She smiled in her sleep. deep dimples appeared in her cheeks. "maan…."she called him ..no replay where he went…she opened her eyes. no he is not present in room. Everything is in same place. only she is sleeping in center of king size bed.

She confused …whether I had dream yesterday ..but her bare body proved that is not dream. Then where is maan. she wear her dress and immediately went out searching him but at whole KM he is not available. She called security . security confirmed that he went out early morning. She try to call his mobile but it is switched off…now geet worried. She can not sit in one place until she no about him.

After some time she called adi..adi informed that maan went Chandigarh to attend business meeting .he will be back another two days. Geet disconnected the phone. She depressed…why he did it..he didn't bother to put a word to his own wife…again her another mind convinced her…may be there will be emergency. She try to calm her self and went wash room.

Anni back with kuhu. She try to speak geet but geet didn't dare to speak to her…but anni confirmed some thing is wrong. She didn't find any happiness in her face. Mean while maan is missing . anni disappointed but she didn't questioned her much.

Geet playing with kuhu but her mind eagerly waiting for her maan. now she decided ,she never leave him and kuhu. That whole night she convinced about maan what he feel for her. he filled her with his love. He made love with her not only to fulfill his desires . she clearly felt that night how much he thirst for her love. His love will never end. How strongly he drugged to her love. His thirst will never end..But still the question why he left delhi with out informing her.

Maan driving his car furisly. He tightened his grip on staring…he hate him self…if its possible he can punish him self..but it will hurt geet. At opposite there is full loaded truck is arriving. Maan lost himself in his thoughts. he didn't notice it. When he found it is already late. suddenly he turned the car and hit to big tree. For god sake maan was safe.

"my god…"he kept his forehead on his staring. When he find himself next to geet at morning its really a big shock to him. he tried to remember lost night. Nothing is clear only he can guess what happened at night. He ashamed him self…how I can… I do this.. don't know how much she hurt bcoz of me. once again he scanned her. he dipped his head down..there are deep marks on neck, shoulder, and breast. Her swollen and tarred lips shown the proof that how wild he is with her…may be I forced her…now I am not having face to face her. I didn't keep up my promise …his fist were tightened and banged car windows forcefully. Blood oozed from his hand.

The thought itself made him to scare to face her. again he abused her …no how long it will go on …how many times ill repeat same mistake and how many times ill ask ask her to forgive me. shame to me… I should end it…. But how…he pulled his hairs from his fingers roughly. He is become mad..don't know how long he drive his vehicle , how long he went but at the end there is no solution.

After two days ,at night geet still waiting for him..but there is no sign of him. maan where are you…pls don't hurt me…her tears flown on her cheeks. Kuhu wiped her tears "kya huwa mama…"her cute question digger her pain more. "kuch nahi .." she try to control…"..but this tears won't listen our commends at many times …"she murmured her self.

Still kuhu watching her keeping her fist on her cheeks. Why mama is crying where is papa.. "mama papa kaha hain.." her teary eyes scanned her once. She grabbed her baby ..

she kissed her with guilt.. "maan pls come soon..here your soul is waiting for you.."

she placed kuhu on her chest. "papa will come ..kuhu" but kuhu not convinced. She started to cry loudly.

Geet tried her best to convince her. after a long time she tired due to her continues cry and she slept without eating her cereal and milk. Even geet in same situation , even she is waiting for him..her eyes were tired looking his way.

Kuhu slept on her cot . geet stood near window .her eyes were still waiting for him. tears were drained in her eyes. her legs were paining since she is standing here more then two hours. Finally she went to bed.

Maan entered KM. once he looked whole KM. till today this mansion filled with geet but from tomorrow…yes he decided he want to withdraw her pains. That can be succeed only when i send her to USA. Now he don't want to block her way any more. Now he is ready to send her but it is very painful to him….but no way. He lost confidence on him. how many times he ask her sorry …but today he want to end every thing.

When he enter geet room she is sleeping with kuhu. Her eyelids were still wet. May be she cried before go to sleep…bcoz of me…I broken her trust. I failed to gain her trust again. The great maan singh khurana lost his battle bcoz of his mistake..and now I should pay for it….he sat next to her. slowly he kissed her on fore head..without disturbing her may be this will be a last kiss for her….

Actually geet didn't sleep. her eyes were burning from two days she didn't sleep properly. Till this movement she waited for him but in the place of worry now angry replaced. How dare he..how heart less he is… he left me and kuhu for two days without any information . Now ill show him what I am…

After few seconds maan opened his secret locker . he is taken geet passport in his hand. He turned back and saw her once again. He went to near again. He touched her shoulder and called her very slowly" geet… utto…"

She changed her position. She groaned on him.."maan chodo muje..i don't want to talk to you.."

Maan smiled painfully. I know she is in pain what I have done to her….."geet sirf akari bar..mere bath suno.."she made baby face and turned her face other side.

Maan lifted his kuhu in his arms. "geet mere sath challo…"now geet surprised. May be he planned some surprise to me and kuhu. She followed.

Maan sat on driving seat holding his kuhu one hand and other hand he drive to airport.

They reached airport at midnight 3'o clock. already there is a announcement for geet to come security check. Geet shocked what is going here…maan handover all the documents with air ticket. She didn't understand.

Maan eyes were teary. Tears were about to rush out.. "geet this is last time I am requesting you to forgive me. I know I am not deserve your love. You are right I am a autocrat. But this is last and least I think in future again I won't meet you…"

Geet hands were shivering, she is trying to understand him.. what he is doing… did he really decided to send away from his life…she remember that night…no it can not be…she try to read his face once again.

There is a final call from security check..maan grabbed her to near security check. Geet still in trance..she didn't understood what is happening…why maan behaving so strangely.

Geet just followed how maan guided her..before going inside maan handover kuhu and one packet to her…"geet I have done all the arrangements to you and kuhu at USA. You need not worry to any thing. You want to go back to USA…right now you can go…but kuhu pls don't leave her with me…if she with me may be she will become like me. she deserves your love and care." Maan voice is cracking but he is controlling his best to be normal.

Another shock to geet" maan…"she tried to tell something but maan stopped her mid.

"geet chup.. billkull chup..muje patha hain mey bahuth galath kiya. I need my daughter to grow under your care …other wise in future she will suffer like me. I don't want that kuhu make same mistake what I have done to you…" geet stood like paralyzed. Kuhu waked now and looking here and there it is a new place for her and too much of lights brightness made her impatient. As soon as when she saw her papa she started to fall for him. "hi…papa.." her smile more widened .

Maan looked her pain. "no…" he turned back but kuhu raised her voice. "papa ..papa.." she is jumping in geet arms. This is the first time kuhu crying for him so loudly. She is hitting her hands and legs forcefully.

Geet don't know in what condition she is standing. Everything is happening so fast. Suddenly maan turned back and kissed once kuhu and went out. Securities grabbed her to security room.

After flight departed he waved his hand once and came out rubbing his eyes. he sat in his seat. Some thing flowing in his cheeks …he touched his cheeks …Tears…not believable no I am maan singh khuran…how can I cry …still tears were not controllable. "dam it…hey this is maan singh khurana..he will never cry stop it…"he ordered to his tears. No still they are flowing. He bite his lips fur sly. Geet why I become so helpless…why I am feeling so week that after you left me…he leaned back.

Some how he drew his car to KM. but he didn't dare to go inside. He spent some time in garden remembering how kuhu played here…its early morning sun is raising .the atmosphere totally converted to saffron color. yes dadima and anni will wake any time .before they find me I should escape from here in this movement. I can't answer there questions now…. He rushed to his room..still there is aroma of geet and kuhu present in his room. Each and every corner is remembering his geet and kuhu.

Wontedly he didn't pack geet and kuhu cloths…he need everything with him. he want to live his rest of life with those things. He arranged each and everything's in USA for geet and kuhu. He hugged kuhu's teddy bare. it is in the size of kuhu. He felt kuhu is his arms at some movement.

After some time he packed some needed things and went out side. He left the message to anni and dadima. He thrown all the stuff in jeep. He derived his jeep to outside.

Pre cap: the story started with sangeetha and its ending with sangeetha.

Friends I have not time to edit this part. Without editing I am posting this part. Pls pls try to press like button and leave comments. Any mistake as usual forgive me.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...


continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
I' am really upset with maan how could he do this and geet is she gone crazy without talking to him she left to U.S.I' am really disappointed. continue soon. Hope maaneet meet soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
.😲..I can't figure out maan's behavior ...totally shocked... very confusing character...😕
and precap😕 ...eager to know next ...please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...Varsha...

but I don't like this turn...why this so much lack of communication...Maan didn't try to explain himself or atleast ask for forgiveness and when she is saying something he should listen what she is saying...this behavior of his judging people by himself and throw his desision on others is ridiculous...I will say this turn is totally unnecessary...

thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
osum dear
so what u waznt to say
where is sangeetha came from
precap is confused dear
lovely part
i think there is lack of communication dear
once she should say to him but it vained dear
hope we can see them back soon
udpate soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Very sad n emotional part...
Tyro thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome part...

maan was in so much pain...yet he did that...

geet was lost all the while...

continue soon..

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Y is maan doing thz...

Awesome part...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
DONT LIKE THIS
HE SENT THEM AWAY
DID NOT EVEN TALK TO HER TO FIND OUT HER FEELINGS
HOW WILL THEY LIVE WITHOUT EACH OTHER

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