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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
dont separate maneet 😭 ... hope geet come back to maan 😊 ...eagerly waiting for the next part ... update it quickly ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
amazing update...
loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
jst read ur ff in one go..
awesum.. pls add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
darling r u gonna update soon.
I also sent u a pm...
hope this is happy ending story
or else i will be 😭🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART- 51

Why I can't see properly…oh tears were filled….this is my decision to send them USA but still why I am feeling so pain inside. Why I am feeling that my heart become several pieces. No…no.. maan singh khurana don't feel so much. This is your faith. Already once you have the practice live without kuhu and geet …now you should continue the same. These tears were teasing him..he rubbed his eyes again and again. When he rubbed the tears at the movement immediately tears were filling. He couldn't drive his jeep from parking place to KM main gate.

What is there… who is coming towards to KM in this early morning. He couldn't see bcoz his eyes were teary and there is too much of fog. He rubbed his eyes once again and try to see again is this kuho and geet…no may be it is dream…he pinched his skin himself…no it is not a dream…the two angels were walking towards to him. he saw in his own eyes that their flight departed to destination now again…..no its unbelievable….its true geet coming back with kuhu..his eyes were widened with sudden shock…he get down from his jeep…

Geet rushed to his arms with kuhu. His open arms welcomed to them…still he is confused but he don't want to ruin his happiness questing them…just he want to enjoy this golden movement. he closed his eyes with joy. Some where he scared if he opened his eyes may be again it can be dream. Both were hugged tightly where they forget that kuhu is in between them. Even kuhu is hitting both of them with her tiny fists to leave her. maan kissed geet madly …geet accepted him closing her eyes.

Kuhu confused sometime why papa is kissing mama in spite of kissing her…"she started to cry loudly. They didn't broke their hug. Now kuhu raised her voice more .Maan and geet waked from their own attitude and geet become dark pink in front her own daughter. Maan smiled at her and he kissed her. Maan picked both of them. He made his way towards KM. his gaze stared on geet without moving anywhere. Geet shied and hide her face in his chest..but he didn't shied to scoop her in his arms.

Anni saw both of them from upstairs. She jumped with joy. She ran to dadima room .she shown from the window how maan carrying geet and kuhu. Dadima enjoyed the view. Anni ran to welcome them. Dadima followed her.

Anni went and hugged both of them. Today she is the happiest sister in this world. As a sister she prayed her god for to keep them happy. Today he full filled it. Maan only smiling he couldn't speak a word. Anni understood his feelings. She taken kuhu from geet hand. "maan bhai …aaj tumari din hain….enjoy it.. kuhu will be with me…"she went with kuhu. While going she turned once again and shown her thumb up" hey.." kuhu didn't understood much even she showed her thumb to her papa and mama "hey.." geet shied and hide her face in his broad hard chest.

He carried and made his way to room. He placed on bed and he kept his head in her lap. He closed his eyes peacefully . " maan…."

"geet pls don't disturb me after many days I want to sleeping peacefully."

Geet smiled.. she leaned down and kissed his fore head..he grabbed her head to him. next movement he climbed her lips slowly.

After one hour he came on sense still geet is caressing his cheeks. Her eyes were expressing her love towards him. "maan …app..bahuth bhuri hu.."

"Kyu.." maan deeply looked in her eyes.
" maan…you didn't try to understand what is there in my mind and when I tried to tell you ,you didn't let me to speak…"still her eyes were brimming.

"ha..geet how you came back.." geet again she remember …her journey in flight.

After flight departed from delhi airport she came in sense. kuhu still sobbing in her hug" mama …papa…mama muje papa ki pass janna hain.."sirf tum nahi kuhu muje be jana hain…she understood his pain and love. Now at any cost she is not ready to go away. Now not only she needed him even her kuhu needed him…. but maan….nahi maan ki anko kabhi bi mujse jhoot nahi bolsakthi. Muje patha hain ab maan kya karega. Wo jarur koi jungle camp per chalega. Maan maine aisa nahi hone dungi. Mey vapas lotungi …par kaise…only her one way is bhabhaji….she prayed her bhabhaji…

After few minutes she heard a announcement from airhost ace "dear passengers, we are going to have a emergency landing due to technical problem. all the passengers to be requested to be in upright position and be ready for landing. Sorry for…"

after that nothing is reached her ears. She hugged kuhu and kissed her happily. "hum dono abhi papa ki pass challungi.." all the passengers were disappointed but they shocked looking geet behavior.

She rushed to catch taxi holding her kuhu.

…geet smiled at him. she fingered on wall .maan followed her finger bhabhaji photo nailed to wall…"ajj bhabhaji ke vaje se hum apke pass hain.."

Maan still didn't understood. Geet explained every thing. Even maan thanked her bhabhaji.

Till evening they both didn't come out from their room. When anni just went and have a look, maan sleeping on the lap of geet and geet just leaning back to cot. Yes this is perfect and ram sita Jodi..she went happily.

Epilog.

After one year …..

Maan driving his car towards hosaipur. Geet sitting next to him. sangeetha and kuhu they are playing with their toys at back ceat. Yes maan and geet adopted sangeetha from Bangalore orphanage home. maan very well known that when geet away from him sangeetha fulfilled her motherhood thirst and she is the main reason that geet alive today. Bcoz of sangeetha he got his geet back today.

kuhu and sangeetha become very good friends. Both were in same age, both joined same Montessori. Each and every person in KM love sangeetha like kuhu. Maan is the happiest person in this world. Today he planned something surprise to geet. he stop the car near hosaipur. He tied satin ribbon on geet eyes. when geet opposed he requested her to wait.

Another ten minutes he stop the car. Very carefully he lifted geet from the car. Kuhu and sangeetha were smiling looking her papa mummy. Maan once glared on them and ask them to follow him. children's followed him.

Maan went to near the door….he placed geet very carefully on flour. Geet confused.. "maan.."

"Chup…bill kull chup mama.." this time kuhu made her to close mouth.

Geet murmured her self" ye kuhu hana billkull uski papa ki tarah…."

Maan smiled looking his daughter attitude. Now he removed her satin ribbon. Geet surprised…sweet home and small home…..

"geet ye tumari sapno ka ghar…tumari chotisi ghar our hamari ghar…kaisa hain…"

Geet speech less…how can she explain her happiness…yes this is her dream when she agreed to marry prem. Maan designed this house same like how she designed her miniature four year back.

"par maan ,what about KM…"

"Yearly once we are coming to here to enjoy our vacation. Did you happy.." geet nodded.

She rushed inside…she roamed..within few minutes hole home. she felt very happy. Only two bedrooms, kitchen and big hall…every thing furnished…geet rushed out side…there is a small artificial waterfall . already kuhu and sangeetha were playing there….geet lost looking them..from back maan hugged her…he rubbed his nose to her back. "maan…"she moaned…

He didn't revert her but he reverted her by his attitude. He placed his chin on her shoulder .his lips were teasing and trailing from her nape to shoulder. Geet blushed "..maan …pls bacho ke smane ye sab…" but her voice indicated him that she need more. At end of her shoulder he bite slightly. She know he is ignite her desires slowly..he is seducing her...but she is shying.. children's were playing in front of them. Slightly she pushed him and went a side.

After some time geet prepared food for everyone…maan arranged every each and every thing according to her taste. After feeding children's maan and geet made them to sleep.

Maan slowly pinched her toe from his toe. Geet blushed understanding his feelings…she try to escape from him but maan eyes made magic on her…she lost in his eyes.

Maan scooped her in his arms and went to his room. Now he know very well . she will never protest any more. She is already drugged in his love. There is no value of words….maan hugged her tightly and whispered in her ear" geet why don't we plan for mini maan singh khurana this time…"geet shied and hide his hard chest. Maan caressed her hairs. they already celebrated their fourth year marriage anniversary still she shied like new bride. Always her shyness wake his desires. her shyness made him to thirst more for her love.

"geet …shall we try…sincerely this time. "he is teasing her…he know her answer but still he want to tease her. when he tease her , she hide her self in his embrace. He like Her blushing, he like her shyness…when she shied automatically her face turns to dark pink. Then he want to taste her more…there is no change in their love…it is always forever...each and every day they feel that the feel of love making is new to them. As he wish she hugged him tightly burring her face in his chest. Now he didn't delay .he claimed her in his way.

After long time maan saw her in moon light. She is looking more sexy in moon light. He grabbed her on his chest and made her to lean back to on his bare chest. He hugged from back her on waist…she didn't understand what he is planning" maan "she moaned…

"geet don't disturb me just tell me how you are feeling now…I didn't expect that I will be so much happy in my life…"his fingers were trailing under duvet on her bare Brest. Again and again he is testing her nipples sharpness.

"maan even I didn't expect so much happy in my life…leave it ..now just I want to remember our journey from our first meeting to till now. Even you don't disturb me…." both were agreed .they both didn't disturb each other. Just they spent hole night in each other arms counting stars in sky.

at morning maan taken geet to graveyard to meet sangeetha .this is another surprise to her. geet kissed sangeetha's graveyard once. Her eyes filled with tears remembering her lovely sister sangeetha. Even maan is also serious..both placed white and dark maroon roses on her graveyard. "happy birthday sangeetha di" After few minutes they left the place.

suddenly geet turn back….there is a white smoke covered on her graveyard. Sangeetha stood next her graveyard she is waving her hands, wearing white long maxi from top to bottom. She is looking like an angel…her smile is too cute. Even maan turn back yes even he found her, his eyes went wide is it really she is visible. Both were in shock..after some time maan thought may be she is visible only to me…even geet thought same..both once again waved there hands to her and they made their way to home.

sangeetha looked at top. Her bhabhji arms were welcoming her.." …I am coming bhabhaji…pls only two minutes…I need this happiness another few movements .thank you bhabhji…jo maine manga apse apne jaroor poora kardiya….lehkin sirf isi janam par…agale janam mera maan sirf mere hoga …theeke bhabhaji…." Bhabhaji smiled. Next movement she flied to her bhabhaji.

At home another surprise to geet. raju papa, meera, prem all are present with one year small baby from USA. Dadima , anni , vicky and arjun also present in her little sweet home. they decorated and arranged for birthday party for kuhu and sangeetha.

After cake cutting children's were playing happily. All family members were busy with chatting. Geet stood little for from them…she smiled…she went and stood near her bhabhaji" thank you bhabhaji…you full filled all my wishes. Thank you for giving such a lovable husband to me."

"geet beta, what are you doing there come here…"when dadima called her she rushed to join her family.

THIS IS NOT A END RIGHT NOW THEY STARTED THEIR LOVE JOURNEY. I NEED ALL YOUR BLESSING TO MY MANEETS. PLS TELL ME HOW YOU ALL FEEL THE LOVE JOURNEY OF MY MANEETS.

dear friends,

once again i share with you that our maneets are role model to our socity. they done wonders on viewers. i hope i have not destroyied main charecters. at least i need all my friends comments for this epilog. i know friends will not disappoint me. thank you every body who all are motivated me. special thanks for muskcan, and meet parveer bcoz from PMS and comments they try to correct my mistakes.

Once again thanks to everybody.

varsha.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
asusual wonderful update...i really enjoyed it dear...
Edited by ashvinisharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
wow...nice update with awesome ending
🥳👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
loved the journey with tmkh...maaneet is the best...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great FF and concept...now we need a new one

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