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Posted: 13 years ago
I so hate Pammi
Dev should be murdered
Poor Geet went through so much.
Good that she was finally released from that jail.
She can at least find some place to look after herself
without threat to her daughters.
Hope she meets maan soon
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
ughh hate dev & his family 😡
poor geet had to go through soo much
cont soon

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dev, want to kill him now 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome luv ur ff
cnt w8 2 read more
cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list x 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome luv ur ff
cnt w8 2 read more
cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list x 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
please add me in ur pm list. loved ur story. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
hate Dev & Pammi...😡 😡 😡
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
~PART 5~


Kuch to majburiya rahi hongi yuhi koi bewafa nahi hota
tatol kar dekho apne dil ko fasla bewaja nahi hota…
'
Teri berukhi ko bhi rutba diya humne.
Pyar ka har farz ada kiya humne. Mat soch ke hum bhool gaye hain tujhe;
aaj bhi khuda se pehle tujhe yaad kiya humne…



She slowly opened her eyes to find herself on a hospital bed, with pammi giving her deathly glares! She blinked a couple of times to adjust her eyes to the light when she heard pammi asking her to leave!


" now since you know the truth…it would be better for you and your daughters not to step into my house ever again!! I've to make arrangements for the arrival of my bahu…she'll give us everything which you and your parents couldn't give!!! I don't want you to see you around that place anymore with your inuspiciousness…you get that??" and she walked away leaving her all alone! Didn't even bother to look back even once at the poor soul!

Endless tears escaped her eyes…lying there….helpless…dumped…betrayed….all alone!!! Where will she go now?? Whom to???

She cannot go back to her house….NO its was definitely not her house!!! Its that bas**** dev's house…Not hers!!!! Not anymore! But the uncertainity still lingers….where will she go now??? She slowly got up from the bed and walked out. There were no more tears in her eyes….no emotion on her face! She held her stomach and walked out on the busy road!!! Pammi was long gone….and geet didn't even bother to look for her!!! she knew her mother in law really well…atleast now!

It was nearing noon…scorching heat testing people's patience yet she wasn't reacting at all! She walked lifelessly till she heard the honk of a bus!

Immediately she turned around with the tiniest hope of getting her way out of this place…her mayaka…her own house! Yes….her parents will definitely help her out. She was having a severe pain in her back but still she managed to reach the nearby bus stop! But again…why was god so cruel to her???

The last ray of hope disappeared soon….it was the last of the day to her village….she had no money..not even a 50p coin…and above all it was over crowded!!! Her village was around 3-4 hrs by bus…but she couldn't have boarded the bus in that condition! Why her out of all the people? Why god was so mean to her??? What has she done wrong to deserve such hardships?

She sat on the nearby bench even more dejected!

What would she do now??? She was starving! Her heart cried…not because she was hungry…but more because her babies were starving! She sat all alone with tears in her eyes!

"Babaji…ab mein kya karoon??? Kuch raasta bataiye na Babaji….please…meri bachiyon ki raksha kijiye…p…Please" she cried! She was famished! Very few people around in that hot sultry afternoon…she didn't even have the energy to walk to someone and ask for water!

She closed her eyes and rested her head on the back rest of the bench!!! Is this the end? Is it her last moment? Is she going to lose her babies once again? She didn't even flinch with the thought! Rather remained calm….slipping into the eternal darkness…..never to come back again! Its better that she dies here along with her babies…..then they would definitely be in a better place…atleast better than this hell!!!! A place where no one would be there to hurt them….harm them….just love and care everywhere!!!!

PRESENT

"geet…utho…geet….geet…..are you alright?"

She was smiling in her sleep! She lazily opened her eyes and the 1st thing she saw was HIS face!!!! The 1st thought in her mind was HIM and the 1st word that slipped out of her mouth was , "Maan"!!! Babaji was long forgotten!!! He sat bedise her and bent down to caress her cheeks!!!

"are you alright sweetheart? You were smiling in your sleep!!!"

She smiled naughtily and lazily!! She wrapped her hands around her neck pulling his closer! He gently lied on her, very carefully, avoiding pressure on her cute tummy!!!

"agar aap humesha mere sapno mein rahenge to mein smile hi karoongi na….aur sapne kya…. haqueeqat mein bhi!!!"

She raised her head and kissed the corner of his lips!!!!

"kya baat hai memsaahab…aaj subah subah iss nacheez par itna pyaar?kaunsa aisa punya kar diya humne jo aaj aisa inaam mil raha hain?? He teased.

She giggled at his words, " aaj humara dil kar raha haiaap par pyaar barsaane ko…so kar diya!!!" and she again kissed the other corner of his lips sweetly!!!!

He raised his head and looked deep into her eyes, "geet…..you are making things dangerous for yourself!!!" he said huskily…ohh god he sounded so serious!!!

But she was in no mood of giving up!!!

"acha?" she made a cute face, " I love playing with danger!!!" And that was the limit!!! He had been provoked enough! He smacked his lips right on her as fiercely as he could, sucking in everything he could!!! She felt breathless with his force but eventually gave in! how could she not? He was everything to her…in fact more than anything….way above her babaji too!!!


She opened her mouth for him to devour her while his hands misbehaved…opening the top few buttons of her nightie! He caressed her tummy and she smiled in that kiss feeling ticklish! They broke away when he buried his head between her head and shoulder, trailing wet sensuous kisses on the exposed skin!!! She shied…like a new bride and turned her head away to give him a better access!!!

He was thoroughly disturbed when his phone screamed loudly! He got up annoyed…cursing the caller!!! But nothing could have been done. It was important call and he had to attend it!!! He nodded his head and went away attending the call!!!


He was in his trousers and vest…just back from his morning session in gym when he saw her smiling in her sleep!!! And now he was really getting irritated with his client. There was this urgent need of getting back to her…holding her and kissing her till both could no more..but his luck…the call was getting longer…grrr…disturbing him…Damn!!! He walked to the balcony to avoid looking at her bare shoulders…now read with his marks left behind! She loked damn tempting with that wild look of hers…open ruffled hair, half unbuttoned nightie exposing her smooth skin over her shoulders…ufff!!!!


She couldn't stop falling in love with him again! How ironic it was…she was in a better place…no one there to hurt them…he wouldn't let anyone to touch then…he filled each and every part of her llife with his love and care…they only difference being SHE AND HER BABIES WERE ALIVE AND HAPPY!!! And this was what had made her smile in her sleep!!!! She looked at him again, pacing up and down the balcony, frustrated!!! She laughed at his plight and mumbled, " I found my angel…."

She moved her hand over the cute bump feeling the tiny life inside her and went back to that day when she had finally given up all hopes of living!!!

FLASHBACK

She felt something cold and wet touch her face!!! She struggled to open her eyes only to see she was still sitting on that bench in the bus stop!!! She was feeling too weak….somewhere cursing her fate that she was still alive!

"geet…geet…" a familiar voice caught her attention!!!!

"are you alright? What happened to you?"

She slowly turned towards the voice only to find her best friend Meera standing with a bottle of water!!!

"Mee….ra" she could barely speak. Tears rolled down her eyes….god is not so cruel after all!!!! Meera held her shoulders to support her while she somehow managed to hug her by her waist and cry!!!

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next: would meera help her out???

Prev: PART 4

Next: PART 6

update courtesy: kawaii_geet (ash)

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Edited by sweet_aishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u for the update =)...Will read and comment on the update =).x.
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Posted: 13 years ago


very pain ful to see Geet in that worst condition...but thank God Meera has come...

awesome update...thanx for pm

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