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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear...thanks 4 da pm n emotional n sad update. Feeling for Geet...she is all alone. No support from Dev. Hate Pammi n Dev😡. Geet having twin girls...Pammi knows n nw wants to kill the babies. Poor Geet! Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great job girls,love this ss already!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome

Geets emotional turmoil was written very well

Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice part
Poor Geet was suffering so much.
she had nobody to support her when she needed support the most.
She must have dreaded her ultra sound scan as her babies gender would be known.
She faced so much during her pregnancy
on top of everything was Dev leaving her behind.'
Wonder what Pammi will do know and how Geet will protect her unborn babies
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey plz update soon. it's being mnths u had any update. plz it's very nice ss plz conti. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAPPY DUSSHERA TO ALL


Together...Forever...
PART 4


A dejected soul…..a broken heart….a lost trust….and a helpless mother…


Days were becoming harder for geet! Its been only a week since dev left…geet started hating everything about him! His touch, that used to tickle her senses, now gave her the creeps…. His closeness and warmth suffocated her to no ends…. His sweet words of being with her forever and ever gave her nightmares!!! And above all, she hated him for leaving her all alone with her heartless mother-in-law!


Geet still worked like a maid….well not literally but almost the 7th month of pregnancy that too with twins, working for even 5 minutes was like hell! No doubt a maid servant worked in the house, but pammi would never leave a chance to make her life a living hell….a torture!!!! And now she had started a new drama altogether….accusing geet of bringing inauspiciousness i.e her so called "manhoosiyat" to their house along with the babies!!!



She kept on hinting day in and day out that dev suffered losses in his business because of her…he left his old mother behind was also because of geet…and that they were becoming financially weaker because of this manhoos geet and her inauspicious daughters!!!!


How in the world can she ever hear the ill of her babies being a mother….how could she? Now there was no one to even take care of her…after they got to know she was carrying girls! No one even bothered to ask is she had even taken any food or not! God knows how she kept on living like that for the whole week…but she was determined to save her babies this time!!!!


Geet (selfthought): I couldn't do anything last time…..but not any more!!! I'll save my daughters no matter what!!!


And may be it was her determination and her motherhood that she was able to survive without being taken care of at such a critical condition!!! Everyday, she cooked food for herself, after making sure her in-laws were done, and helped herself with the medicines!!!


That day as usual, sunil and pammi were watching a news channel to keep themselves updated with the world around!!! Geet was just passing by when something made her look at the TV! That was the hottest news of the country they stated….THE DAUGHETR OF SOME BUSINESS TYCOON IS IN LOVE AND GETTING MARRIED TO SOME GUY NAMED DEV!!!


Her world stopped there for a moment….she forgot to breathe!!!! Her dreams, expectations came crashing down….NO WAIT!!! There are so many devs in this world…even though she disliked him, he was still her husband after all….her God!!! She still expected him to come back to her….may be that love for his child could do the magic….and it was that tiny ray of hope that had kep her from breaking down!!!


But did she expect a bit too much? Her world came shattering down the moment she heard the full name—DEV SHARMA, an emerging entrepreneur from Hoshiyarpur, Punjab!!!

Tears clouded her eyes when she saw the clip of dev going on his knees to propose that girl officially!!!


The little ray of hope she had harboured just a few moments ago seemed to get lost somewhere within the immense darkness!!! The last thing she expected was him cheating on her!!! she numbly walked ahead…as if uske sochne samajhne ki shakti hi khatam ho gayi ho jaise…


Pammi smirked looking at her…sunil felt sad because he loved geet! But he couldn't do anything for her as pammi had taken a promise from him that if he tried tospeak in support of geet or tried to stop her…she'd kill dev and herself!!! moreover, he kept sick most of the time…and he was selfish too…well everyone in this world is and he convinced himself that he was no exception either …so no harm!!!


Geet walked towards the couch…murmering, " nahi….this can't…b…be ha…happening…DEV….." her legs felt weak and body trembling…..she fell on the couch…..senseless!!!

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She slowly opened her eyes to find herself on a hospital bed, with pammi giving her deathly glares! She blinked a couple of times to adjust her eyes to the light when she heard pammi asking her to leave!


" now since you know the truth…it would be better for you and your daughters not to step into my house ever again!! I've to make arrangements for the arrival of my bahu…she'll give us everything which you and your parents couldn't give!!! I don't want you to see you around that place anymore with your inuspiciousness…you get that??" and she walked away leaving her all alone! Didn't even bother to look back even once at the poor soul!

Endless tears escaped her eyes…lying there….helpless…dumped…betrayed….all alone!!! Where will she go now?? Whom to???


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next: i found my angel!!!!

Prev: PART 3

Next: PART 5

update courtesy: kawaii_geet (ash)


sorry for not updating for long guys...we were super busy with our colleges and xams!!! hope u all dun mind!!!!😃



Edited by sweet_aishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update cant see the pain geet going through
hate dev😡 in future i want him to be severly punished by maaneet
precap seems like man is going to save her
continue soon and plz do update quickly
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Posted: 13 years ago
Such a sad part...
Ughh...that jerk Dev n his Pammi Mummi...you'll rott in hell...

Poor Geet...
Waiting for the angel to arrive...
Updt soon...
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ash can u plz stop thisss
dnt make me cry more plzzz
n im nt going 2 write any parts for this ff plzzz
i just end up crying everytime i try 2 start
plzz realllyyy sorrryyy
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Posted: 13 years ago


Hey Aishu...thanx for pm..

very heart-wrenching update...Dev and his family is so selfish and cruel...Dev married again and they throw Geet out of the house...

please update fast next part...

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