FANFIC-YEH KAISA DEEWANAPAN HAI-PG 21UPDT

HI guys this is nidhi n i m new to this forum its the first time im writin a fanfic pls comment n tell me if u like it n should i continue or not

kunal-a dashin young guy

nimmo-his not so happy wedded wife

scene -they are on there honeymoon

kunal and nimmo are as usual not happy with each other but still hv to go on a honeymoon coz of kunal's dadaji

kunal n nimmo in there hotel room

k-hey nimmo maine hotel ke disco mein ek party rakhi hai kya tum mere saath aa rahi ho ?

n-meri majboori hai pata nahi shayad yaha bhi koi hamara peechha kar raha ho oh god !😕yeh musibat kab khatm hogi

k-so get ready fast (oh i forgot to tell u kunals sisters hv given a nice makover to nimmo n now she's wearin a nice mini skirt with a sweet red top although kunal is impressed but he doesn't reveal it )

n-im ready kunal chalein?

kunal leaves nimmo at the bar n goes along with his other friends on the dance floor . after sometime he returns n finds nimmo gettin bored he was about to say somethin when a cool dashin young guy comes frm behind n says-hi nimmo what a pleasant surprise!!

they both hug each other n then he kisses nimmo on her cheek

kunal is shocked at this n then nimmo turns towards him

n-hey kunal this is vik(vikrant)my college friend well we were best friends n vik this is kunal my hubby

v-hey tumne shaadi karli aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi

n-mujhe khud pata nahi tha ki main shadi kar rahi hoon

v-tumne kuch kaha

n-nahi bas aise hi

n then vik said hey nimmo lets dance

n-ok lets go

kunal looks at nimmo n vik he is very jealous n thinks kitna chipak rahe hain jaise fevicol ka jod ho ,kaise has rahi hai,itna to yeh kanta ben ke jokes par bhi nahi hasti meanwhile he drinks a lot kunal is fully drunk .after sometime he sees nimmo returnin back

n-what happened kunal? why did u drink so much

k-woh tum....vik.....

n-vik lagta hai ise bahut chadh gayi hai main ise room tak chhodd ke ati hoon

v-ok i'll wait for u

n carries kunal to the room kunal holds nimmos hand n says -nimmo u know what u are really beautiful.nimmo blushes😳

but nimmo dont leave me alone i really need u just then nimmo's cell rings n its vik

v-hey nimmo where are u im waitin

n-vik woh actually

k-(murmuring)nimmo i really need u dont leave me alone please!!!!

what will nimmo do will she go leavin kunal or will she say vik that she's not comin watch out

please tell me3 how it is n shud i continue or not

its cool..continue soon 😃 😃 👏
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pl write next part it very nice

cute story Nidhi, welcome to this forum, please continue soon............. 😊

very gud yaar u should rote more

did u all like it shud i continue 😕

wow the fanfic is awesome!!!! 👏
pls do continue soon hun 😊
can't wait 😉

Naina

hey that was really nice start do continue soon...by the way...welcome to the forum.

hi guys thanks for ur wonderful replies here comes the other part

kunal is holding nimmo's hand n saying -nimmo please mujhe chodd ke mat jao i i really need you

looking at him she says on the cell-sorry vik main nahi aa sakti actually kunal ki tabiyat theek nahi hai i think i should stay mmmm...... we will definately meet tomorrow tum isi hotel main ho na ok bye

meanwhile kunal is still murmurin

nimmo goes for a change n comes back while kunal asks her to be wd him after sometime k goes to sleep holdin nimmos hand she slowly removes her hand and tries to sleep on the sofa but is unable to so she decides to be on the other side of k's bed

in the mornin k wakes up and is surprised to find nimmo in his arms but he doesnt let her go then suddenly nimmo wakes up

n-yeh woh actually main sofe par so nahi payi aur neend mein

k-its ok nimmo .even im sorry woh neend mein

n-its ok kunal

they both then get ready n decide to go out for a drive n a bit of shoppin too nimmo is again makin kunal impressed by her blue denim skirt wd orange top n kunal is lookin as usual sweet

k-are u ready ? chalein ?

n-haan chalo

when they come down they see vik vik again comes n joins them he says a hello to kunal n gives a hug to nimmo n a kiss on her cheek n kunal seems disgusted wd all this😈

nimmo doesnt notice this and asks vik to join them n vik says ok

in d shoppin mall kunal is lookin for a sweet gift for nimmo meanwhile vik buys nimmo a beautiful necklace n is puttin the same arround her neck kunal becomes angry n leaves the place wdout sayin anythin to nimmo

after sometime nimmo realises that kunal is not here n he tries on his cell but he doesnt take her call

is kunal in love wd nimmo?

why is vik tryin to be so close to nimmo ?

what will nimmo do tosearch kunal?

will nimmo understand kunals feelings ?

watchout

do tell me how it it is ?

should i continue ?

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