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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jssood

woh super update

but dear it is long time when u give next part
as maan realized his mistake wt is next action
how he coverup has wrong behaviour towards geet sience her birth
pzzz update soon


thank u sooo much yaar...
bas give me half an hour m going to update...
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PART 13

Annie: Bhai main mom dad aur Dadi ko ye good news deke aati hoon...

Maan just nodded his head in agreement and jumping with joy Annie left...

Geet felt like she was in dream world... This was no less than dream for her and with the thought that it became true her smile brightened making her face glow like never before...
Maan's heart did somersaults looking at her divine glow...

MAAN(thinking): She is looking like a pure angel how could I feel hatred towards such a pure soul even for a moment... You are a heartless man Maan to have given her so much of pain...


The thought again burned the fire of self hatred in him and his whole face turned red with anger...

GEET(thinking): Shukriya Babaji mujhe jeene ki wajah dene ke liye... Aj se main apne bachche ke liye jioongi, mera har pal har lamha sirf isi ka hai... Waise bhi pehli baar aisa koi hai jise Geet ki zaroorat hai...

She smiled sarcastically with the thought and turned her head. Her eyes fell on Maan. Anger was evident on his face..
She got scared...

GEET(thinkink): Hey Babaji kya Maan is bachche se khush nahin hain? Kya wo ise nahin apnaenge?

Tears welled up in her eyes...
He frowned seeing those tears... Those tears broke his resolution of staying away from her... He sat beside her...

MAAN: Kya hua Geet abhi to tum khush thi phir ye aansu?
(I know guys dis is exactly from d serial but kya karoon serial ke dialogues itni rate hain ki similar situation ho to I won't be able to think some thing else)

She was so scared of his anger that she was not able to voice out her feelings...

GEET: Maan...wo baby...
MAAN: Haan Geet baby kya??
GEET: Ap khush ho?

He couldn't have hidden his excitement seeing her hopeful eyes...

MAAN: Obviously Geet!!! Right now I'm the happiest man on earth. Papa mama ko is pyare se gift ke liye thank you kehna chahte the but mama baby ke saath bahot busy lag rahi thi to I thought abhi papa ki no entry hai...

She blushed profusely at Maan's statement... All her fears about he not accepting the baby gone...

His soul felt at peace seeing her blush and smile... His heart jumped with joy of getting his Geet back and the feel of being a father...

All the family members came inside... Each face was lit with happiness...

Gauri had pooja ki thaal in her hand...

Gauri: Sabse pehle mein apni bachchi ki nazar utaroongi is halat mein zyada nazar lag sakti hai...

She completed the ritual... Seeing the elders standing Geet tried to get up but Gauri stopped her and asked her to rest...
One by one everyone hugged and congratulated both of them...

Pratham: Achcha ab humein chalna chahiye Geet ko aaram ki zaroorat hai...
Dadima: Haan beta sahi kaha apne... (caressing Geet's cheek) Apna khayal rakhiyega beta aur agar koi bhi pareshani ho to bejhijhak hum mein se kisi ko bhi utha lijiyega...
Geet: Ji dadima...
Annie(whispered in Geet's ears): Sari haddiyan le ja rahi hoon ab jee bhar ke ek doosre ko congratulate kar lo would be mummy papa...😊

They left...

Geet's cheeks turned crimson red with her comment but next moment she remembered the distance between them and a tear escaped her eyes...
Maan noticed her change of expressions... His heart burned seeing her tear...

MAAN: Kya hua Geet tum phirse?

She forcefully smiled...

GEET: Kuch nahin Maan.

Maan knew something was bothering her but before he could say something she stood up...

MAAN: Kahan ja rahi ho??
GEET: Apni jagah pe..
MAAN: Nahin aaj se tum bed pe sogi aur main couch pe.
GEET: Par Maan...
MAAN: Geet please koi bahas nahin. Its decided.

She knew that he won't budge but still didn't want him to sleep with discomfort...

GEET: Maan ap bhi bed pe...

Maan knew he won't be able to control himself with her close proximity...

MAAN: Nahin Geet main couch pe theek hoon. Ab tum so jao tumko aaram karna chahiye...

She was not disappointed since she knew he will deny but her heart felt bad being reason of his discomfort...
They both lay on their respective place...

GEET(thinking): Aaram karo... Kaise karoon aaram jab mujhe pata hai wo couch kitna uncomfortable hai??? Baby aane se pehle papa ko tang karna shuru kar diya??
MAAN(thinking): Humesha se mein Geet ke saath itna bura karta aa raha hoon par sabke bawajood Geet ko meri kitni fikar hai. Kitna saaf hai meri Geet ka dil shayad isiliye main usse pyar karta hoon...

His eyebrows lifted with the thought...

MAAN(thinking): Maan what are you saying?? Ye pyar kahan se aa gaya?? Wo Rano mom ki beti hai... Maine usko bahot dukh diye hain aur main usko ab humesha khush rakhna chahta hoon par pyaar??? Par Maan tum uske liye isse zyada different feel karte ho you can't deny ki jab bhi wo paas hoti hai use aur bhi qareeb lane ka dil karta hai...
Uski ankhon mein dekhta hoon to bas unhi ki gahrai mein doob jata hoon...
Par ye sab to attraction hai na... Main ladka hoon wo ladki hai ho sakta hai but pyaar kaise ho sakta hai kal tak to main...

He couldn't complete the thought... His insides were set ablaze with self hatred... But as soon as his eyes fell on her sleeping form he calmed... His gaze travelled towards her serene face...

MAAN(thinking): Kitna taras raha tha main Geet ke chehre pe ye sukoon dekhne ke liye... Thanks baby tumhari wajah se mama aaj khush hai warna papa ne to...
Par baby papa promise karte hain aaj ke baad papa ki life mein sabse important mama aur baby hain aur papa mama ko humesha khush rakhenge... PROMISE!!!!

His gaze fell on her lips which were slightly purred up into a smile...

MAAN(thinking): Geet aaj jab maine tumhara muskurata hua chehra dekha to ehsaas hua ki is chehre pe ye muskurahat dekhne ke liye main kitna taras raha tha...
Jin ankhon ki chamak maine khud chheeni unmein wapas wo chamak dekh ke jo sukoon mila hai is dil ko wo main bayan nahin kar sakta...
Jhoot kaha tha maine Geet... Sach ye hai ki tum mere liye sabse alag ho... Sabse khaas!! Meri angel jo har qadam pe bina ehsaas karae mera saaya bani rahi...
Geet jo main tumhare liye mehsoos karta hoon wo maine kabhi kisi ke liye mehsoos nahin kiya... Kash main itna khudgarz nahin hota to aaj main apni angel apni Geet ke paas hota aur hamari zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat lamha uske saath baant pata...

He felt really disappointed with himself for creating the distance between him and his life's most precious gem with his own deeds...
Sadness again engulfing him with those thoughts... He finally somehow drifted off to sleep...

This morning felt like a new start to Geet... Her dead soul felt rejuvenated with the prescence of her baby...
A bright and cute smile was playing on her lips while she touches her abdomen...

GEET: Good morning baby!!! Good morning Babaji!!! Sorry Babaji aj se baby first. Ap to jante hi ho Babaji mujhe to ehsaas bhi nahin tha par jab baby ke hone ka ehsaas hua to aisa laga jaise meri har chahat poori ho gai... Babaji baat karti rahoongi to college ke liye kaun tayyar hoga waise bas Babaji isi tarah hamesha mere nahin bas Maan aur mere pariwar ko khush rakhna aur mere baby ko bilkul hatta katta rakhna... Ab main chalti hoon Babaji...

Maan woke up looking at her cute and bright smile... Her eyes had volumes of ardor in them... Her feather like lips were moving cutely with her face having a different expression each second...
His heart thumped with the beautiful start to morning she unknowingly given him... His eyes unknowingly started to feast upon her cute gestures when she got up and moved to wardrobe...
He frowned... He didn't want her to move... He wished to hold her in his embrace and watch her cute activities forever...
His trance was broken with a knock at the door...
He was moving towards the door to open...

GEET: Maaan...
MAAN: Kya hua Geet??

She gestured towards the couch with her eyes... He cleared the couch then opened the door...

Annie: Good morning would be parents!!!!
Maan & Geet(blushed): Good morning!!!
Annie: Geet kahan ki tayyari hai?
GEET: College aur kahan??
Annie(hitting her forehead): I knew it... College nahin hum hospital jaenge. Check up nahin karwana???

Geet was really scared of hospitals... She instantly got nervous...

GEET: Par Annie kal to tumne...
Annie: Geet budhhu main abhi intern hoon and you need to be checked by a gynecologist... Samjhi!!!! Aur haan Geet ab to ye ghabrana chhodo mummy banne wali ho tum... Waise darne ki koi baat nahin hai main aur bhai hain na tumhare saath...
Kyun bhai aap chaloge na...

He felt like hugging his sister that moment for fulfilling his heart's wish...
But controlled his overreaction and just nodded his head in approval...
Geet felt immensely happy with his decision...

GEET(thinking): Pata nahin sari ummeeden tootne ke bawajood bhi ye dil umeed kyun kar baithta hai?? Shayad baby ke liye... Apke saath se mujhe himmat milti hai Maan to meri himmat banane ke liye thanks...
Annie: Geet! Geet! Kya sochne lagi???
GEET: Kuch nahin Annie... Main tayyar ho jati hoon...

Saying so she went inside the washroom...

Annie: Main bhi chalti hoon bhai bas is pagal ko remind karane aai thi...
MAAN: Theek hai...
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All three of them reached hospital...

Annie: Bhai Geet aap dono yahaan wait karo main doctor se baat karke aati hoon.

Geet's face turned a little pale due to nervousness...there were few drops of sweat on her forehead and she was clutching Maan's hand with all the strength she had...
Maan held her hand with his other hand...

MAAN: Geet tumhein ghabrane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai... Ye hamare bachche ke liye hai.. Tum janna chahti ho na hamara baby bilkul theek hai??

She nodded her head...

MAAN: Bas to phir bina ghabrae apna check up kara lo... Waise Geet tum dar kis baat se rahi ho?? (smirking) injection se na?? Geet bachche darte hain usse...
GEET: Hawww ji nahin ba...s baby ke liye dar rahi thi waise bhi maine Annie se pooch liya hai aisa kuch nahin hone wala... Ap mujhe khamakha mat daraiye...

Maan slightly smiled seeing his trick working...
Annie came and asked them to come inside...
Geet again looked at him getting nervous... He gestured with his eyes that everything will be all right...she smiled and all three of them went inside...
Doctor did some tests on her...
While giving blood test Maan and Annie were holding her from both sides to give her strength and her eyes were tightly shut due to fear...
Maan's heart pierced seeing her condition but he knew it was important...
After the tests were done...

Doctor: Mrs. Khurana aap andar jake apna blood pressure check karwa lijiye...

Geet went inside...

Doctor: Mr. Khurana inki body abhi bachcha carry karne ke liye bahot week hai... Abhi test ki reports to nahin aai hain to main kuch bhi kehne se pehle unka wait karoongi but I'm afraid you will have to abort the child...

His world went upside down... Why God was being so cruel to his Geet first he snatched her parents and now he was planning to snatch her baby NO not this time...

MAAN: Doctor please aise mat boliye... Please reports ko achche se study karke koi solution nikaliye...
Doctor: Ok Mr. Khurana lets wait for the reports... Aap shaam mein aa jaiye ga...
MAAN: Ok doctor...

As Geet came out she felt the tension in the air... She got tensed...

GEET: Doctor sab theek hai na??
Doctor: Yes Mrs. Khurana everything is absolutely fine par aap aise tension lengi na to gadbad ho sakti hai isliye aaj se aap sirf aaram karengi aur apni health ka dhyan rakhengi. Ok??
GEET: Ji doctor!!
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Maan reached hospital in the evening... He was hell nervous... He was continuosly praying for everything to be fine...
He entered doctor's cabin...

MAAN: Doctor Geet's reports are fine na??
Doctor: No Mr. Khurana actually everything is worst than I guessed... Her haemoglobin levels are too low and iron and vitamin contents are also low... Her body is too weak to carry a child... Mujhe lagta hai agar humne abhi is bachche ko abort nahin karwaya to Mrs. Khurana ki bhi jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai...

His heart sank with the torturous news... He couldn't have heard further...just hearing that he can lose her was enough to tear him apart... He just collected the reports and left...

MAAN(thinking): God aap meri Geet ke saath aisa kyun kar rahe ho?? Main janta hoon ki maine apni zindagi mein itne gunah kiye hain ki main kisi rishte kisi khushi ko deserve nahin karta par Geet wo to itni masoom hai ki itne kuch ke baad bhi use kisi se koi shikayat nahin...mujhse bhi nahin ulta wo mujhe khush dekhna chahti hai... Par main Geet ki jaan daon pe nahin laga sakta mujhe use manana hi hoga...

Lost in his thoughts he reached home...
He went straight to his room... After sometime Geet entered with his coffee...

GEET: Maan apki coffee. Reports mil gain?? Sab theek hai na??

Doctor's words were echoing in his ears making his each second tormenting... He knew this child has become Geet's life... The thought of asking her to kill his own child was agonising him...
By the look on his face she knew something was wrong... Her heart sank seeing his pained features...

MAAN(thinking): Jaan boojh kar main Geet ki life risk par nahin daal sakta... Mujhe usse baat karni hogi...

He closed his eyes and clenched his fists in guilt and pain...

MAAN(thinking): Sorry baby par tumhari mama ki life bahot precious hai... Ho sake to apne is khudgarz aur gunahgar papa ko maaf kar dena...

MAAN: Geet tum abhi baby carry karne ke liye fit nahin ho please abort karwa lo...

His words horrified her... She was stunned... Her hands instinctively covered her abdomen protectively...
A whisper escaped her mouth...

GEET: Maan!!!!
MAAN: Geet please samajhne ki koshish karo agar tum ise carry karti ho to tumhari jaan ko khatra hai...
GEET: Bas Maan!! Apne ye socha bhi kaise ki main apni jaan ke liye apne bachche ki jaan gawan doongi??? Main isko kaise jane de sakti hoon isi ne to mujhe pehli baar ehsaas karaya ki duniya mein koi hai jise Geet ki zaroorat hai... Mujhe khoi hui jeene ki ichcha wapas ki aur aap keh rahe hain main ise jane doon??? Ye chala gaya to main kiske liye jioongi?? Maan ye to meri zindagi hai mera sapna mera sabkuch hai iske karan mujhe kuch nahin hosakta... Please ise mujhse cheenne ka khayal bhi man se nikal dijie...
Maan!!! Babaji hamesha mujhse wohi kyun chhente hain jiski mujhe sabse zyada zaroorat hoti hai?? Pehle maa papa phir aap...

He couldn't control his tears seeing her pain... Her each word was torturing him but he knew he had to let her speak today... For the first time in her life she was letting her pain out and he should let her pour out all her pain... Her last words tore him... He knew he was important to her but never knew she needed him so much... He looked at her amazed at her confession...

GEET: Haan Maan aap nahin jante par ye Geet apse tab se pyaar karti hai jab ise khud pyaar ka matlab nahin pata tha... Hamesha chaha ki aap mujhe samjhein mere saath baatein karein par aap ko to mujhse nafrat hai...

He wanted to close his ears... He was loosing strength to hear further with her each confession but still stood their listening to her for her...

GEET: Phir maine apki nafrat mein hi apni khushi dhoondh li... Gusse mein daantne ke bahane hi sahi aap mujhse baat to karte the par Babaji ko wo bhi manzoor nahin tha... Hamari shaadi ke kuch din tak to sab pehle jaisa chala phir aap badalne lage mujhe laga shayad qismat mujh par meherbaan ho rahi hai par aisa kaise ho sakta tha... Party wali raat aisa laga har sapna haqeeqat ban gaya hai par ankhein khuli to sapna dekhne ki umeed bhi choor ho chuki thi...
Babaji ne aapko bhi mujhse chheen liya tha... Main puri tarah toot chuki thi jab kal ye asha ki kiran banke mere paas aaya... Isne to mujhe apka khoya hua saath bhi lautaya Maan... Isne to ek zinda lash mein wapas jeevan bhara hai ye meri jaan ko khatra nahin pahuncha sakta... Aur agar aisa hai bhi to iske liye to mujhe hazaar mautein bhi marni parein to koi gham nahin...
Please Maan apko maa ki qasam phir kabhi ise abort karne ko mat kehna aur baqi sab ko bhi keh dijie main apne bachche ko kuch nahin hone doongi...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!!!
He come to know that she loves him more than what he thinks
Maan you still have time confess it before its too late
May be ur confession will be able to save baby's life
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing Ab...very emotional and awesome.

So many layers of feelings...happiness at being parents...Maan guilt...his still not realising he is in love with her...Fear of loosing Geet...fear of loosing their child
But Geet's last words..her confession was heartfelt...It made him realise what he is for her. Hope he realises soon what she is for him.
My heart tore when she said that child is the only one who needs her. Noone else ever made her feel that she is needed in thier life. That is so sad. sach mein the feeling itself of being ahted and unwanted by everyone...how lonely she is inside.
I hope Maan realises soon that he needs her too and convinces her of that.
I don't know what you are planning with the pregnancy track...but hope with love, care, ample rest and medicines, she will have the baby.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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one of the bestest updates that u have given
every emotion was depicted beautifully by u
Geet and Maan r happy but this happiness is shortlived...
But the most striking part which actually made me cry was geet's confession
"Issine mujhe ehsaas dilaya k kisiko meri zarurat hai"... this one statement clearly portrayed her lonliness... the way everyone directly or indirectly made her realize that she was unwanted...
uff mere dil k hazar tukde ho gaye the iss dialogue ko padkar
Ok a poem from my side (Geet is narrating this for her baby)
"Humhara hona ya na hona kabhi koi mayne nahi rakhta tha
Humare bagair bhi ye duniya chalthi thi
Hum laakh rothe the par inn aasuyon ko pochnewala koi na hotha tha
Humari zindagi ek battar mazak bankar reh gayithi...
Shayad hum yuhi puri zindagi ghut ghut kar kaat lethe agar tum humari zindagi mein na aate
Ek tumhi toh ho jisne mujhe ye ehsaas dilaya k mujhe bhi muskurane ka haqh hai...apni zindagi apne tarreke se jeene ka haqh hai
Tumhi toh ho jisne iss bejaan si laash ko dhadkano ki aahat sunai..tumhi toh ho jisne mujhe jeene ka maksad diya
Duniya ne tukhradiya tha hume bus ek tumhi toh ho jisne baahe failaakar hume apne aaghosh mein liya
Kitni khush thi main tumhe paakar magar koi mujhe tumse cheen lena chahtha hai...
Kya do pal ki bhi khushi meri kismat mein nahi thi jo mujhe tumse judaa karne ki sajhsh rachi jaa rahi hai
Nahi...ab chahe duniya k khilaf hi kyun na khadna pade main wo zarur karungi par tumse judaa hokar ab main jee nahi sakungi"
maan when will u realize that u love her hiding ur emotions will b of no good...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: azee11

awesome!!!

He come to know that she loves him more than what he thinks
Maan you still have time confess it before its too late
May be ur confession will be able to save baby's life
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa


thank u very much dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Amazing Ab...very emotional and awesome.

So many layers of feelings...happiness at being parents...Maan guilt...his still not realising he is in love with her...Fear of loosing Geet...fear of loosing their child
But Geet's last words..her confession was heartfelt...It made him realise what he is for her. Hope he realises soon what she is for him.
My heart tore when she said that child is the only one who needs her. Noone else ever made her feel that she is needed in thier life. That is so sad. sach mein the feeling itself of being ahted and unwanted by everyone...how lonely she is inside.
I hope Maan realises soon that he needs her too and convinces her of that.
I don't know what you are planning with the pregnancy track...but hope with love, care, ample rest and medicines, she will have the baby.



thanks a trillion yaar n don't worry i myself want to save the child to definitely aisa kuch nahin hone wala...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hw much pain in her each word...
only his 3 words can sooth it rt nw...
awesum one..!

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