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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara25

hi just came across your ff.. indeed its awesome.. just a suggestion when u update write longer updates.. and yes do pm me the next time u update.. so far all parts are nice and i think im the only one who can stand the suspense in story..

hi just came across your ff..
U r welcome to the ff😊...
indeed its awesome
thanks dear...
just a suggestion when u update write longer updates
i update vry regularly so it becomes difficult to write long updates plus i want to end it in a interesting poin in the story so sometimes small updates.
and yes do pm me the next time u update
have added u to the pm list.
so far all parts are nice and i think im the only one who can stand the suspense in story..
thanks dear...good that atleast u r able to withstand the suspense...
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Posted: 13 years ago
"Love" she whispered and clutched his shirt tight as she focused her eyes to look at his silhouette which was hardly reflected by the faint light that entered the room from the curtained window.
That was hint enough for him to continue.
Part 20
She never knew that a person could affect her so much. She had dreams about him though she could never remember the face of her dreams when she woke up but the feeling that she wanted to trace that straight nose, those eyes always mesmerizing her, her hand itching to cup his face in her palms, run her hand down his neck and the tantalizing skin of his chest shown from the open buttons of his shirt. Ah! His skin tempting her to place her hand on his chest, she wanted to place her hands on his nape...her hands to entangle in his hair... She wanted to feel his breath on her face...she wanted the touch of his lips on hers. Those bow shaped lips made her desire him. She was imagining her self in his embrace, how would he touch her, his smooth finger trailing a line down her body. There wasn't a single night that she haven't dream about him. She wanted to go near his ear and slowly start biting, licking the soft end. Trailing her tongue down his jaw... She wanted to brush her nose, along the side of his jaw. His rough skin brought a certain urge in her. She lost herself in it, goose bump forming on her body and now that dream seems to be coming true.
In silence he felt her tremble as he hugged her. For one second, he hesitated. Should he step back? The choice he finally made shocked the hell out of him'.but then he embraced her back. And somehow it felt right.
Whilst still kissing her, he backed her against the door pane as he hungrily devoured her mouth. His hands slid past her waist and into her think mane as he pulled away the hair clips she wore, entangling his hand in mane of her hair while his lips moved to trace along her jaw line. It was so easy to get carried away when she was this close to him and he could feel her melting in his desire just as he was burning. Her tense muscles relaxed underneath him and she inhaled sharply. He trailed a line of kisses down her neck and at her collar bone moving back to her lips.
She was breathless... as he passionately continued to kiss... holding her lips into his. He clasped tightly with his hands and brought her closer to his body. Her body began to feel molten within... she felt drowsy...her head was spinning... he could feel her weight completely falling in his arms... she seemed lifeless. He softly moved away.
Without knowing that she was doing so with mute invitation in her eyes, she moved closer to him, as though she did not want him to move away and he responded to that invitation.
Adjusting himself atop her, he laid her on bed . . . and as their lips met again, they both were overwhelmed by a hunger that leapt from never-ending to nerve-ending, binding them together as their mouths and hands and bodies meshed.
She had though that people only kissed like this in films-briefly, testing, tasting. Her lips clinging to his'.. His hand spread across the back of her head beneath her hair, keeping his mouth close to his own whilst his tongue probed the soft willingness of her mouth, possessing it in the same way that her desire for him possessed her.
He slowly removed the heavy dupatta giving enough time for her to move away if she wanted and stop what was to happen next. But as though a powerful spell had been cast upon her, her ability to resist him was melting away and failing when he touched her breast. The thick velvet fabric of her blouse not hindering him in his desire to touch every inch of her body.
And soon he was kissing the side of her neck, sending wild, and wonton shivers of arousal racking her. She could hear herself moaning in pleasure at his every touch. His long, slim fingers curled deftly under her to remove the clasp of her blouse and pulling it away from her b****t. Her heart was thumping slowly and heavily as she silently willed him not to stop, but instead to hurry, hurry...because the need inside her could not be contained for much longer.
The whisper of his breath'his lips against her skin'was making her crazy'his hand moving back up her body caressing her skin and cupping her b****t. Just the feel of his thumb rubbing sensuously across her aching n' made her moan out loud.
She shuddered with the excitement whist his hands caressed every inch of her, making her quiver from head to toe in open longing for her to do the same.
As if understanding her need, he took her hand and placed it against his own body, she almost sobbed with pleasure. Her hands were long and slender unbuttoning the shirt frantically, wanting to touch his skin, rub her hands down his chest and feel the contours of his body. All the while he was kissing the side of her neck, sending wild shivers down her body, slowly moving between her b****t his tongue tasting and teasing every pore of hers. He slowly kept on kissing her as he went down making her senseless with desire, his free hand sweeping down the length of her body, pressing her into him before closing on the soft curve of her buttock.
She was lost, she admitted to herself, for there could be no going back from this.
She was his. He could sense her body open to his, could already imagine what it would be like when she closed down on him as her orgasm possessed her and took him to his own pleasure. His hands going to the fastening of his pants and removing the barriers hindering the sweet pleasure they were about to achieve.
The contact of the naked skin to naked skin was enough for them to feel their bodies' combust with desire. The pleasure of the climax so swift and savage, clung to them in an aftermath of intense sweetness and emotional sensitivity that left them trembling. She reached for his hand and pressed it fervently to her lips in an age-old gesture of intense love.
Her body felt weightless and boneless, and yet at the same time so heavy with exhaustion that she couldn't move and he watched her as she closed her eyes
It was the sound of running water that woke Geet up.
Precap: the morning after.
Edited by crystal-rose - 13 years ago
maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
its Geet and Maan... hey your making it very obvious for me to guess... i only hope that my guesses go right...
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Posted: 13 years ago
still the suspense??? is it geet?? but with whom??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Y m i feeling tat its our beloved maaneet ,as i read few lines indicating tat its her n in previous update i read something which was according to me hinting towards maan
Todys updte as usual blew my circuit again, is geet having a dream in this update????
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was..☺️

n with a stranger called...love...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing dear, it was a hot hot update.plsss tell me is it was maan who made love with geet. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

HI BUDDY! HW R U, DEAR. WAS IT A DREAM OF GEET?NO GUESS FOR MAANEET AS U ALWAYS PROVE ME WRONG, YAAR.GOOD JOB👍🏼.KEEP UP WID UR GOOD WORK👏.GOOD NIGHT N SWEETDREAMS.😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Thanks dear ...u r welcome...sure will try to update tom.

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