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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii
PLEASEEE let it be Geet and Maan!
but if it's Maaneet then they lied and deceived Dev and Sunny?

I seriously dont know that it will be Geet and maan only...i am still thinking what to do?

that u will come to know in few updates whether they have lied or not or whats story further on...

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

OMG Rose what are u doing trying to test our patience or what??????

Who said this and to whom?????

How can u leave us on a cliff-hangar dear????

Pls continue soon...

Can't take this suspense...

Thanx for lovely update and for the pm too...

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

OMG u have still kept the suspense going.

But I feel it is Geet and Maan. Geet's name u have given and from the description I am sure it is Maan. Hope my guess is right.

But was that reality or a dream???? Thats the million dollar question now...

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: crystal-rose

Rose did u ever hear this song---

main dekhoon jis ore sakhi ri...

samne mere sanwaria...

No dear i have not heard this song...from which movie it is? and i did not get ur point? plz explain.

Maaneet fans ka bhi yahi haal hai...jismein dekho woh hi nazar aate hain...😉 😍

wow update was so steamy and passionate...but main point tak aate-aate jald-baazi kar di...two updates u dedicated to foreplay and main act one para mein finish...bahut nainsaafi hai...😃

if i had delayed it you all would have given me galli's and joothi's so was very scared🤢 plus there is going to be one more of it so😉

don't u dare call it a stupid story (ur answer to my last post) when it is making me pull my hair out and write long comments...😆

Well it is actually a stupid story with no head or tail of it...just read muskans deewangi...i m totally in love with it.

thanx for pm

u r most welcome...actually thank u 👏 for encouraging me.

this song is very old song by Lata Mangeshkar...I don't remember movie name...the meaning of this song is---that wherever I see around me I see only my love...
so Maan-Geet is our love...the passionate scene u wrote about the mystery man with Geet...all are believing him to be Maan...

one more passionate love scene wow and when...😍 I am waiting...

I also read Muskaan's Deewangi...I also loved it and did u read Fairyland's Meri Nanhi Dulhan...

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: Mehek25
OMG Rose what are u doing trying to test our patience or what??????

Who said this and to whom?????

How can u leave us on a cliff-hangar dear????

Pls continue soon...

Can't take this suspense...

Thanx for lovely update and for the pm too...

The cliff- hanger brings u this ff again i think dear, otherwise u wont read it.😊 u r most welcome dear. and the suspense will cont for some time.

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: Mehek25
OMG u have still kept the suspense going.
But I feel it is Geet and Maan. Geet's name u have given and from the description I am sure it is Maan. Hope my guess is right.

But was that reality or a dream???? Thats the million dollar question now...

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear.

OMG u have still kept the suspense going.

Yes. the suspense is good i hope😊

But I feel it is Geet and Maan. Geet's name u have given and from the description I am sure it is Maan. Hope my guess is right.

R u vry sure...wait for the next part😉

But was that reality or a dream???? Thats the million dollar question now...

Yes it was a reality...not a dream.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear.

sure dear...u r most welcome

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

this song is very old song by Lata Mangeshkar...I don't remember movie name...the meaning of this song is---that wherever I see around me I see only my love...
so Maan-Geet is our love...the passionate scene u wrote about the mystery man with Geet...all are believing him to be Maan...

one more passionate love scene wow and when...😍 I am waiting...

I also read Muskaan's Deewangi...I also loved it and did u read Fairyland's Meri Nanhi Dulhan...

I hope what u want and see around comes true...😉

One more yes but maybe after the next update...let's see

I just cant help it i must have read deewangi atlest 10 times already ... and whenever i get time i again start...no i have never heard about this ff...i wll try to read it but my first pref. will be writing LLD.

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khushboo22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

nice update

she is geet

but who is he may be maan

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

hiii rose...
i am so sorry for not posting the comments soon...
i had my reasons...and that is power shedding...bloody MSEB wala has lost his sense of rationality./...who the hell has power cut at 5am in morning...my area has it...
one day i am going to make the MSEb wala hang upside down and make him do bharatnatyam...may be that blood rushing to his head/brains will give them some better sense not to pull out the stunt of power cut in the early morning...wishful thinking😡..
ok enough of my cribbing...😆]
so it is geet who is having ahem ahem with some mystery man/...
i have the following Q...or doubts or somewhere things dot add up...
deveet seems be unlikely doing that whatever they are doing...coz one they are engaged and will soon be married...and dev seems to be a thanda aadmi to me..and secondly...geet and man getting intimate looked like something clandestine...and like these two have been waiting for this moment and relishing this stuff...and dropping their guard for some time...

secondly sunny doesnt seem to be pregnant to me in the first place...it looks more like maan fabricated the story

thirdly...i have this weird feeling that the title of the ff love lies deceit seems to be not for a single person...
its like two individuals are playing a charade and trying to act indifferent or friendly to each other...having some motive to mislead the family...but deep withing this charade is orchestrated so that they cud be together at the end...
neither maan nor geet seems to be goody goody to me...or else as usual it is my overworked imagination and wishful thinking that is making my brain signals go haywire and hatch this convoluted plot...
at times i feel i myself will make go confused over ur plot with my weird ideas...
hope u survive after reading this blabbering of mine and atrocious analysis...sorrry my pea sized brain's theory...
keep writing
BTW did i say i love this update...omg omg i was blushing...thank god power cut ho gaya...or else my parents wud have seriously wondered what is it that is making their weirdo daughter blush in the early morning./...
save me from ur updates by giving a warning...as that wud help me to prepare myself and prob i wud be reading when not a soul is near me

one more thing i wanted to say...rose...plz put a adult content warning whenever u r writing such stuff...or else someone may report of adult content to mods...its just a precautionary step...
keep writing
love u and ur ff
reva