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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Part 18 was simply superb Rose.

Loved Vicky coming in a girl's suit...😆...

The song was awesome and I am sure it is Maan who has dedicated it to Geet.

Am sure Maan loves Geet but is not admitting because of his brother and also because Geet is his very best friend.

But am getting scared of what he will do next...Will he turn negative in future or not is what I am wondering about...Don't let it out I am loving the suspense...

Hope the precap is about Maneet...

Thanx for the pm dear...


Part 18 was simply superb Rose.
thank you dear

Loved Vicky coming in a girl's suit...😆...
tit 4 tat. he got d taste of his own medicine

The song was awesome and I am sure it is Maan who has dedicated it to Geet.
for geet or no i dont know...but i lov dis song so used it😊

Am sure Maan loves Geet but is not admitting because of his brother and also because Geet is his very best friend.
who,where,what of the song will be revealed later on

But am getting scared of what he will do next...Will he turn negative in future or not is what I am wondering about...Don't let it out I am loving the suspense...
well i only hope the readers don't get fed up of d suspense...and thanx 4 loving the suspense and don't want it to be revealed

Hope the precap is about Maneet...
keep guessing😉

Thanx for the pm dear...
u r most welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

loved vickys dress. precap is interesting. is it maaneet or devgeet???

thanks dear...hope u will enjoy it when i update next.Maneet/Deveet...suspense.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
"There is no need for thanks Geet, by saying thanks you are degrading the love I have for you and whatever I have done, I have done it for my best friend and my brother, Dev. My only desire is to see you both happy and for you both to achieve the dreams you both must have dreamt."
Saying this he hands her over to Dev.
Part 19
They had been dancing for a while now
"When will you tell them about the marriage, Maan?"
"Not now Sunny, when the time is right I will tell them everything. How do you feel? Are you feeling tired? Do you want to rest? ", he changed the subject abruptly.
"No Maan, I will rest later, I am enjoying the party a lot. It was good that I got to attend Geet's engagement party. "
As he left his room to walk down the corridor he cursed the darkness that surrounded the passageways on the upper floors, as the party going on downstairs had a disco theme and that required darkness all around, laser lights and disco ball to illuminate the hall and the stairs connecting the rooms to the hall.
He wondered why the girls had sent him to the terrace. He hurried towards the hall as he was already late and had a good scolding from Dadima for not arriving on time to such an important function but what could he do, he had become busy ferrying her to and fro and now when the party is almost over he was roaming about the house being sent from one place to another.
Bang. In a tearing hurry and in the darkness he did not notice when, he collided with a soft petite form.
"a'a'" she stammered startled holding on to him.
There was a sudden rustling and the sound of voices from further up the passage way. Without thinking about how or why- he grabbed her by the arm and pushed her into the corner near the door of the guestroom which was hardly ever used, silencing her protest by clapping his hand over her mouth.
His body pressed up against her, her back against the wall. If they stayed in exactly this position they couldn't be seen from the passage. He shut his eyes as he felt her in his embrace'. Several moments passed and when they heard voices and footsteps receding in the corridor he relaxed. "A...pp..." she opened her mouth to ask him something but he quickly covered her mouth with his hand again and glowered at her in the dark wondering about the righteousness of what he wanted to do with her... "Shush" he hissed dangerously close against her lips and the words died in her throat. He shouldered open the guest bedroom's door and pushed her inside. Before she could utter another sound he relinquished the thin grip on his control and slammed his mouth on her, crushing her soft lips with his. She was in his arms, his fingers biting deep into the soft flesh of her upper arms, his mouth was hard and possessive on her. He kissed her, like a man deprived of water for weeks, he covered her mouth with his, drinking deeply of her warmth.
When his tongue slipped gently between her lips, a low growl of possession erupted from deep within him. He crushed her up against him as if he could absorb her directly into his skin and hugged her. Ahh'.A gasp evicted from her lips when he tightened his embrace on her.
Her sudden gasp snapped him back to reality, and he wrenched his mouth away from the temptation of hers. Placing her hand on her lips, she gasped for the fresh air to fill in her lungs while he held her firmly. He wanted to be buried in this woman's passion. Her chin tilted up, the look in her eyes was of pure wanting.
And as her gaze drifted downwards to his mouth, she knew that no power on earth could have stopped her looking at it and when he placed a hand on the wall above her head leaning in to her, his big body curling over her, she was powerless to stop a surge of sensation that broke deep inside her, longing for his arms to close on her.
She wanted HIM.
"Love" she whispered and clutched his shirt tight as she focused her eyes to look at his silhouette which was hardly reflected by the faint light that entered the room from the curtained window.
That was hint enough for him to continue.
Precap: In silence he felt her tremble as he hugged her
Edited by crystal-rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG who said to whom and who was he and she, plsss yaar don't test our patience plsss update in the next part who they were.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeppeee iam the fist one to write comment for this part.Loved it.continue soon and unfold the suspense soon in the next part, will be waiting.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

OMG who said to whom and who was he and she, plsss yaar don't test our patience plsss update in the next part who they were.

R u enjoying the suspense or no? if u r enjoying the suspense...then plz have patience...i think a few more parts !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

Yeppeee iam the fist one to write comment for this part.Loved it.continue soon and unfold the suspense soon in the next part, will be waiting.

I am also very happy that u r the first one to comment...and thank u for liking the part...i think the suspense will continue for some more parts
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no again a cliffhanger, now who is this couple???? N you wrote tat it'll be reveled after few parts, plzzz dont prolong our wait update asap plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rose 🤗...thank u for the lovely reply for my comment 😳...so sweet of u...the least i could do for all the effort u put in giving us regular updates...coming to the latest update...awwweome 😍...but who is she ?... who was he she called love ?...and this is going to continue for few more parts...hmmm 🤔...ok ...waiting eagerly for the next update now...plz continue...thank u for the PM...TC 😊


Edited by PerfectYaRav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey bhagwan i am gonna kill u if u dont reveal the mystery lady soon...
i am thoroughly confused...
sunny asking maan to tell his family about marriage...whose marriage..and tha way he changed the subject, i feel that this is some kind of charade he is playing'

and then who is the lady ...whom he is kissing her, like his life depended upon it..
the lady didnt even stop him and seems to be enchanted with him and his kiss...
the precap is all the more killing...

i guess i soon need a wig coz i am literally on the verge of pulling all my hair out
keep witing
plz plz suspense khol do...
loe u and ur ff
reva

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