# Devil's Den# - Amritsar Circus Plss Leave

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Posted: 14 years ago
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The story of the demise of a good show presided over by Mr. Mahesh Pandey at the behest of 4 lions.

Pathetic and lazy writing

Yes today the gloves come off and I am in a mood to call a spade a spade. 😡 Jyo may have to ban me and close the den 😆 😆 😆...but hey I am willing to pay the price for speaking the truth.

The lack of a storyline is extremely troubling to me because we have always had a good one. Now-a days we are getting to see such inane stuff being passed off as comedy that it is painful to watch. The PH seems to have hired Mr. Pandey with one single aim in mind - the shut down the show. He has no comprehension of what the audience wants or what their needs are. He also does not seem to care that the show is under the scanner and that we need a good storyline for the show to continue. The man does not care to do background research and has proved time and again that he can only do extremely poor writing. He lacks the capacity to think outside the box like our first set of writers had.

So what if they are not the characters he created and the circus are the characters her created and he is partial to them. We find it extremely annoying that he is partial to the rapist Dev and his main squeeze Nano. If he has been a strong writer he would have woven a strong story around the characters he created. He is unable to do that either and only writes crappy comedy scenes that are not even remotely funny. His idea of comedy includes farting, making fun of obesity and alchoholism ( both serious problems I might add) and also systematically destroying every single character in the show to make the behave like clowns.

Mr. Pandey if you had worked for any other PH which was genuinely interested in saving the show, you would have been fired by now because
1) You know nothing about the background of the characters and write absolute crap.
2) Your characters have no character and behave in the most disgusting manner.
3) You are systematically destroying the show.
4) Your comedy is not funny. In some cases it is downright disgusting and not meant for viewing with a family audience.
5) You are supposed to be a writer then where the hell is the story? The credits definitely say you are incharge of the story. OK then where is it?
6) You are giving more footage to the characters you created and doing a very poor job of it.

Mr. Pandey you are not even able to do justice to the characters you created. You have turned them into cartoons. It is beyond pathetic. When people criticize you, you offered to leave thinking people will ask you to stay back. But surprise people want you gone and we still do. So do us all a favor and leave the show.

In conclusion - it does not seem like Mr. Pandey knows how to write a gripping track that will raise the TRPs so better dump him and let Barry take over. Barry had given a great start to the ML track until Mr. Pandey came and took over. I had predicted at that point that the story will go to the dogs and it did because the first thing he did was he brought back the sharaabi mama. So can we have Barry doing the story again please.


Giving more footage to non-actors
WHO ARE THE REAL LEADS OF THE SHOW
LET ME TELL YOU THE ANSWER
IT IS GC AND DD WHO ARE THE LEADS
WE CARE TWO HOOTS ABOUT LUCKY, PREETHO AND MAMA
WE DON'T CARE AT ALL FOR DEV AND EVEN LESS FOR NANO

Great clothes and tons of makeup do not an actress make

when the acting and persona comes across as very fake

This is a lesson that the person playing Nano must take

The fact that a non-actor is getting so much footage takes the cake.

Watching her act is like eating something you hate 😵

It is mentally painful and yet there is no escape.


We all love Geet/ DD inspite of the fact that she wears old clothes

Her superb acting makes up for all her wardrobe woes. 😳

We the viewers are very loyal to her because she is a good actress

She is a pleasure to watch on-screen and so we feel no duress.


The actor playing Dev is someone who had potential

But it is all wasted because he is being portrayed as comical

He is someone who had excelled in negative roles from the get go

Why is he bring not utilized to add more spice to the show?


The actors playing Lucky and Preetho do not have much to do

I think they would do better to explore other options

where their talent would actually be used

I hate Mama character because of his alcohol abuse.


GC is the one actor whom we can always trust.

He is one actor who no matter what the scene always gives his best.

Maaneet/ Gurti are he ones who are keeping this show alive

A Maaneet centric storyline is important for the show to survive.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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To All the Devils of the Devil's Den hereby declare the Den to be
a Bird & Dot free zone !!!



If you dare to fly, be ready to fly all the way to heaven, because

we will shoot you. HAAN!


This is particularly in light of the moderator warning
(chk here.. https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1604969)
and henceforth every Devil (old & new) solemnly pledge to NOT indulge in crooning aka bird language
(except : ofc the pengu tribal linguistics)
and here is the dare..
one more croon frm a bird and u know what...!! HAAN!!




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The information here is Xclusive to de Den ONLY! Read n FORGET IT! Infringe our CopyRite and Anj will make u watch the "India Paints" Videos till u c the Light! Everyone Is Welcome, so Post Post! We are like Appy Fizz and Grappo Fizz...Cool to de Core!

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All the Devils raise hand and repeat after me
"I SOLEMNLY SWEAR THAT I AM UPTO NO GOOD"
"And hereby Pledge to diss All de Spoilers n Spoof de Pictures"

WATCH ON STAR PLAYER

Star Player is testing whether they could go live at the same time or within the half-an-hour of airtime, but are NOT

Previous DENS with THEMES

Introduction on the SHOW's THEME

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1566472/devils-den-mr-seeeeeoo-becomes-tailormaan

Dadi
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1567872/devils-den-this-info-belongs-to-devils-den-only

Potential Plot lines (MB)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1568732/devils-den-the-dance-of-pain

MSK
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1569633/devils-den-arjun-maryaada-purush-or-plain-purush

Dev
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1570540/devils-den-the-return-of-the-phamous-eggs

Aesthetics (make up etc)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1571442/devils-den-maan-bna-daai-maan

Dialogues
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1572317/devils-den-maan-ban-gayaa-santa

Brij and Yash
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1573564/devils-den-confession-tera-delhi-ki-sardi

Sameera
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1574594/devils-den-msk-never-had-a-sister

Arjun
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1575672/devils-den-pyar-ka-izhaar-aur-takraar

Marketing
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1576750/devils-den-hum-tum-bathroom-mein-bandh-ho

Geet
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1577842/devils-den-the-war-aint-over

Symbolism
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1578747/devils-den-boss-se-big-boss

Naintara
Anwesha

Vicky

Music

Dance
Wedding Symbolism
Foreplay
Parallel Tracks

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Edited by liv2laugh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sun's take on the present state of the show
...I fail to understand really enlighten me here...what exactly is happening on screen...the show has no story ,no plot for past many months now...it has become an accumulation of some scenes...

if you had just left the main characters of the show alone to whatever they were...instead you went ahead butchered then and now are flogging it...night and day...you have no money to invest agreed but you certainly have a brain to invest...how hard is to come up with a story ...a tale which you narrate on screen ...

agreed you needed a parallel track to support the leads...but is it really a track...i cannot believe this is the best you could come up with for your precious dev and nandini...what was the hurry to get them married off..there were soo many ways to show their tale...to add spice to the show...but all you come up with is crass comedy

the circus itself could have been put into good use but you refuse to work...it becomes easy to show some scenes repeat it everywhere all in the name of soap and too much work...

this show is your baby...and no parent gives up on their child come what may...and you have the support of the fans who are ready to sit and watch the trash you deliver just to save the show..instead of appreciating their effort you leave not a single chance to blame them and play politics with them

if your story writer cannot write a story ,your episode writer cannot come up with one decent episode,i wonder what are you paying them for..

obesity,alcoholism are not issues you ridicule on a daily basis...your cinematic liberty cannot be allowed to extent to that...you have made enough mockery of social issues...learn to understand the difference ...learn to use this medium to send forth some message ..everything need not start and end with entertainment which sadly is not even the case here

there is still time...no idea abt the future of the show...but as long as it is on air do try to salvage it and give it some respect...let it be a good memory for its viewers not a tasteless sitcom...


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Few pointers from me
Mahesh Pandey plss spare our show 😊
Few simple things which CVs needs to realise
1)We want that old class of GHSP back with good classy sets ,good classy costumes for both our leads GC and DD which should make them look like Millionaires and some good classy side leads and not these classless Amritsar jokers 😡
2)We want a story around Maaneet/GC-DD and not those Amritsar jokers
3)SS-Mel r not the lead of this show ..its GC-DD ...plsss in case Mahesh too has a memory loss ,someone just remind him ...
4)Get a negative character in the show for some drama element becuase at present show lacks a proper sensible track ..
5)Plss dont dare to edit out Maaneet scenes 😡
6)Show has got a good director in the form of Sundeep and good dialogue writer in the form of Barry and of course the main leads GC-DD r the star of our show👍🏼...What is needed now r good set of writers who can write a sensible track understanding the basic essense of Maaneet and also we need good side actors who can act and can make a good gripping parallel track 😊..So in short Mahesh needs to leave and sorry to say Melaine cannot act ..so we need better side actors 😊
7)Plss get rid of unwanted characters like Jugnu mama and stop making mockery of alcohol addiction ...Even Devini and LucTo needs a conclusion now so that a brand new track with sensible drama can be started around Maaneet along with some new characters mayb ...
8)Please do some damage control now with some grand diwali celebrations at least 😳
9)Bring popular old characters back in the show like Nayantara who is more loved by viewers than Nano 😡
10)Last but not the least plss change the current banner of the show asap because GHSP is about Maaneet and not the joker party 😡
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Episode Analysis
THE BEST PART OF TODAY'S EPISODE IS GEET'S DIALOGUE TO MAMAJI SAYING "PLSSS PACK YOUR BAGS AND GO BACK TO AMRITSAR" 😃😃😃
Sorry for shouting in caps but I just want Mahesh pandey to remember this very very very very important dialogue of Barry which is spoken by Geet today so that this can be implemented in the later episode once GC-DD r back in full form for shoot ...Jugnu Mama needs to go back to Amritsar ..PERIOD
As far as rest of the circus party is concerned ,all I can say is plsss now get rid of this man vs woman track by tomorrow with a final blast coming from MSK and Geet 😊...Enough is enough now ...Precap shows Nano and Dev r starting it all over again 😡...so its high time MSK and Geet raises their voice and makes it clear that this house is not a kids playground for their one upmanship games and so if they want to continue with it ,then they all can very well go back to Amritsar and continue with their games 😡...
I m hoping and praying that by tomorrow or by thursday GC-DD r back on sets irrespective of whatever the birdies or articles say ,because its now impossible to tolerate this circus party anymore
No rating for today's episode as it was not worth it 😊
Edited by jyoti06 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pandeyji...aap kab jaaoge????🤔

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mr Mahesh Pandey please remember and stick to your words on Sep 15th on face book😡 about leaving GHSP, please take Mel Pais ( nandini) and rest of the A'sar clown with you.🤬

I fail to understand aakhir aapko kaunsi bhaasha samjh aati hai.😕 Yadi nahi samjha hai ki meine kya likha ooper. Tab mein translate kar deti hu, Mahesh Pandey saahab aap KRIPYA 15 September vaale apne shabdo ko yaad karein, un pe kaayam rahe aur Geet show ko CHOD ke jaaiye saath mein aap ke saare NAMOONE nandini and A'sar ke jokers ko bhi le ke JAIye. Yadi aap bhool gaye hai tab yeh web site check kariye yaha pe aapki PUBLIC statement on 15 th September hai ki aap geet chod rahe hai.

https://www.facebook.com/pages/MPs-GEET-se-ho-jao-paraye/244543548911235

Writeen update tells me that even Mr Barry Dhillon, A person who is involved in GHSP from the beginning also wants A'sar circus to end.👍🏼 That is why it was symbolic via geet saying to Bevda Maama AAP AMRITSAR LAUT JAAIYE.👏 Look at Mr Pandey even your own co workers now wants you to go.👍🏼 If you think that you are doing greta job because CV has hired you to shut the shop then let me make you very clear that this will NOT HAPPEN. DO NOT UNDERESTIMATE GEET FANS POWER.

Mr Dhillon's dialogue took me in the past where few days back very experience ( yes this person is long time in telly industry and do not sing of his yrs of experience in the industry song, unlike Mr pandey, who claims each and every time his 11 yrs experience of CRAP writing and then blames leads whom he has reduced to extra for NO STORY 🤬), intelligent and wise person had said in an interview that :

"Television is an excellent medium for any writer to perform. He can play with his characters, make them die, love, fight...anything. On the small screen you have the freedom to be experimental, intelligent and different, now some channel heads are ready to treat their audience with different content. As we say in advertising, 'audience is not a moron, she is your wife.' You cannot take the audience for granted" 😎


Yes Mr Pandey read the bold blue. The person is ABSOLUTELY right👍🏼. Mr pandey you can not sell what ever crap you want for the name and sake of 11 yrs experience, we are not moron.PERIOD

GHSP even though started on low reach channel, but it made huge success with international recognition. Until you stepped in, it was UNIQUE, DIFFERENT and was with very strong social message. The day you stepped in, you turned it in to MOCKERY, NONSENISICAL SITCOM where 2 consecutive episodes are not related to each other.

By doing this you are

1: Insulting and killing OLD CREATIVES all effort to get GHSP on international MAP

2: You are promoting ALCOHOLISM in your show hence giving wrong message to SOCIETY

3: You have supported rapist by making him best saint on the earth (technically people should do your social boycott)

4: You have made MOKERY, FUN and child game of divine relation MARRIAGE

5: You have Killed basic essence and characters of the show aka GEET and MAAN

6: Unwanted and undesirable characters are given more important than Leads in fact you have reduced leads to extra

7: You always pointed fingers on other and blamed innocent leads for your failure

8: You not only insulted old CV who created Geet as EPIC but you have NO RESPECT for viewers either. ( if you would have had by now you would have resigned.

9: You are promoting and giving footage to a person who can not Even act forget about expressing feeling, yes I am talking about the girl who plays nandini character. The girl should not be even kept in the show so long. She is the most worst actor and character in Geet history. All she does is imitate lead.

Mr pandey the list is never ending.

Please please spare us, director, leads and dialog writer from your torture and LEAVE GHSP SHOW ASAP. You are not welcome in the show and you are not wanted in the show. May be you are not thinking in long term but let me tell you that more longer you stay in geet show, more damage you do to your 11 yrs experience. Remember that you are directly dealing with PUBLIC aur GRAAHAK BHAGWAAN HOTA HAI, one should always keep them happy. Mark my words, Bad name and bad work travel faster than light, once viewers know HOW BAD YOUR WORK IS, you will lose your position in the market as So called SCREEN PLAY WRITER" So bottom line LEAVE GHSP. NO ONE WANTS TO SEE YOU IN GEET.

Edited by md410 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Coo chi Coo
Maaneet

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUCkBIelSjM[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNUe4wmZMQs[/YOUTUBE]


Arre re arre yeh kya hua, maine na yeh jaana,
Naam kya de kya kahe dil ke mausam ko,
Aag jaise lag gayi aaj shabnam ko,
Aisa lagta hai kisi ne chhoo liya humko

😳😳










Edited by 49erFan - 14 years ago
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Mahesh Pandey pls Get out of GHSP ASAP... Pls go n ruin some other show n spare us n our beloved show of the torture...🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
Get out of Geet as soon as possible. Pls take ur muse Nandini with u. Melaine is an average actor with very just 1 1/2 expressions. she is not able to pull the role of nandini at all. DD is a great actress n she knows which expressions look good on her n make her look cute. That is not the case with Melaine.When she had started out, she was ok, but from past few weeks she has been bluntly trying to copy Drashti's mannerism, expressions n body language. She is not able to do justice to it ends up looking repulsive (ugly would be the apt word). She needs to realize that merely copying DD's style of acting will not make her a good actress like DD or earn her a fan following. Everybody has a unique style n that is what the audience like n appreciate. The best option available would be to remove nandini's character along with Dev, Lucky, preeto and mamaji and also change the writer. Dev nandini n Lucky Preeto r newly married, so they can be snt on a never ending Honeymoon.


As for parallel tracks Adi-Pinky r the next fav jodi in Geet after Maneet ofcourse. So that can be shown. Audience has been demanding their love track since the starting n for once would not mind if Maneet play cupid for them.

Also Naintara can be brought back in Dev-Nandini's life. Dev is n will always remain a Rapist. He has already cheated NT n Geet. He is once again cheating Nandini too by hiding his past sin's from her. Let NT come n reveal Dev's deeds. Let Nandini come to terms with this shocking revalation all by herself without any help or interference from Maneet. This will make an interesting Parallel Track n the audience will like it too. Let Dev sweat it out all by himself. All this can be shown in their Honeymoon track.

Geet aka DD is made to wear cheap looking cloths. Geet is the wife of The Billionaire Maan Singh khurana. She certainly deserves better dresses than what she is presently wearing. Fans have been assured of her makeover even Geet got married to MSK, but it is yet to come. Those suits make DD look ugly. Its just that DD is such a beautiful girl that she can make a sack look good too. Also her dresses seem dirty n not ironed too. What is more astounding that side leads like Nandini n Preeto get new dresses in every episode where Maneet are seen in the same costume for 2-3 epi' at a stretch. Nandini gets night suits too that poor Geet does not. We understand that you want to show how simple Geet is, but yet She is now the Badi Bahu of Khurana Mansion she certainly deserves better cloths. Even naintara's Sari's were awesome n had Class. Since the character of Naintara is out, why not give those Saris to Geet. Geet looks absolutely Stunning n beautiful in Sari's.

Actually both DD n GC need a wardrobe change ASAP, DD especially.
We love Maan and geet and we want to see them in a new story.We want to see Geet post revamp with a new story of Geet which can be easily achieved by a Reincarnation track or GHSP Season 2. There are tons n tons of Mills n Boons stories that can be adapted for the new season. This will not only open new horizons for the show but also will be a great opportunity for actors to portray their talent. I would like to add that Praneet Bhatt aka Adi Sir n Pinky should be the 2 only characters apart from Maneet who should be in the new story. We Love them and their characters a lot, They both are they are Fabulous Actors who deserve to be there in the new Story or Season.
The Best Dialogue in today's Episode was given by Geet to mamaji saying that "He needs to go back to Beeji". Geet has rightly conveyed our feelings. It clearly suggests that the Cv's know wat we want... 😊😊

Edited by swatichowdhury - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Not in a Mood for Analysis today😭😭

I Hate you MP and your Circus😡 Please Leave the Show and Let Us Fans Live in Peace😃


Apart from the Maaneet scenes that we got today nothing worth mentioning😳

I Loath the Precap; Can Maaeet just Shut these two up and Pack them off and Send them to Himalaya and Throw them off the Cliff😡

Enjoy the Den and Happy Spamming Devilz🤗

Love
Mayuuu
Edited by -Mayu- - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anshu_A

Pandeyji...aap kab jaaoge????🤔

Geet ko sach-much paraaya banegar jaaoge kya...😆
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Pandey Ji .. it's time to say Good Bye Ji.
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