Mayur FF : The perfect couple lastpart pg29 edited - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

lovely... update...

i really dont understand the relation of mayur
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
nice updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
hey nice update yr...
you write it so wonderfully...
plzzz pm me next time and i,ve also send you buddy request..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
hi guys i know i am giving late updates with lot of confusion but dont worry very soon saare raaz khul jayenge. I will just say wait and watch . picture abhi baaki hain😉
part 5
D-mayank mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain

M-baat karne ke liye permission poochne ki zaroorat nahin hain

D-tumhein nupur ko RV ke saath nahin jaane dena tha woh acha ladka nahin hain yeh main isliye nahin keh rahi hun kyunki usne mujhe dump kiya par main use bahut ache se jaanti Ria aur Rv dono hi bahut bure hain tum dono undono se jitna dur raho utna hi acha hain tum dono ke liye

M-Thanks for your concern DIa par tum hum dono ko teek se nahin jaanti humein aise logon ko handle karna ache se aata hain

Rv takes them to disco

N-maine tumhein paanipuri ke liye kahaan that um mujhe yehaan kyun lekar aaye

Rv-paanipuri toh roz kaati ho yeha ka mazaa hi kuch alag hain

N-mujhe nahin aana

RV-please nupur thodi der

N-kahaana mujhe nahin aana

RV-tum nahin aaogi toh uday bhi nahin aayega uske liye toh aao

U-right nupur I think humein andar jaana chahiye please nupur maan jao na mere liye

N-tik hain uday bhaiya sirf aapke liye main andar aaongi

They go inside

Uday was busy dancing with girls nupur was sitting on the nearby table

Rv-shall we dance

N-main andar aayi iska matlab yeh mat samajna ki main tumhare saath dance karoongi tum jao yehaan se

RV-don't be a spoil sport nupur common lets dance

N-i said just leave from here

Rv-ok cool main abhi aaya tumhare liye cooldrink lekar aata hun

N-that's fine

He orders for a cooldrink and mixes something in it

Rv-ab main dekhta hun tum mere saath dance kaise nahin karogi

He gives cooldrink to her

She drinks it and behaves weirdly

Rv-shall we dance

N-maine kahana mujhe tumhare saath dance nahin karni jao stupid boy

(she pushes him he catches her hand and drags her closer she was trying to escape but he caught her tighly suddenlyshe gives him a slap

In anger he holds her wrist tightly

Ni said leave me

R-i wont

( RV receives a punch on his face he fells down and looksat the person it was mayank )

He doesn't say a word silently catches nupurs hand takes her from there

in the car

N-kya entry maara hain bilkulhero ki tarah

M-tu apna muh band kar toh hi acha hain mere upar toh badi jhansi ki rani banti hain ab kya hua agar main time pe nahin aata toh

N-main khud use handle karti

M-tu yehaan kya kar rahi hain tu paanipuri khane gayi thi na jooth bolke disco aayi hain kya

N-mujhe tujhse jooth bolke yehaan aane ki zaroorat nahin hain main tujhse nahin darti sab kuch us bevakuf ki wajah se hua hain

M-tu toh bilkul sahi hain na hum sab hi bevakuf hain normally tumhari jagah kisi aur ladki ko help karta toh thanks atleast bolti par tujhse kuch bhi expect nahin kar sakta

N-main tujhe thanks kyun bolun galti teri hain you were careless

M-haan sahi kahaan meri hi galti hain

(she catches her head)

M-kya hua ab fir se naatak shuru mat kar

N-mayank natak nahin sach main sar darad de raha hain chakkar aaraha hain

(she keeps head over him and sleeps)

M-shut agar maa ne tujhe is haalat main dekha toh meri band zaroor bajegi aaj toh mujhe bhagwan hi bachayega

After reaching home he takes her in arms and silently takes her to room

M-thankgod kisine nahin dekha warna aaj toh mera marna guaranteed hain

He goes to his house

Shilpa'mayu nupur kahaan hain

He starts shivering

M-maa woh uski tabiyet teek nahin hain isiliye apne room main so gayi

Shilpa'aise kaise ho sakta hain subah toh bilkul teek thi achanak kya ho gaya meri bachi ko main abhi jaake dekhti hoon

M-maa aap yeh kya kar rahi hain agr aap gayi toh uka neend kharab ho jayega ek kaam kijiye aap usse subah mil lena

Shilpa-meri bachi bimaar hain aur main use dekhne na jao tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hain

M-par maa

Shilpa-mujhe teri koi baat nahin sunni

She goes from there

M-mayank beta ready hojaa aaj toh tera murder confirmed hain

Shilpa goes there and finds nupur in deep sleep she checks her forehead

Shilpa-tabiyet toh teek hain fir kya ha hoga meri bachi ko

(she beats on nupurs face to wake herup but she doesnt getup)

Just then mayank comes

Shilpa-mayu kya hua meri bachi ut kyun nahin rahi hain sach nahin kahaan toh teri kair nahin

M-mom woh actually nupur apne friend ke saath baahar gayi thi wahaan uske drink main kisine kuch miladiya

Shilpa-aur tu bait ke sab dekh raha tha

M-nahin maa main uske saath nahin tha main college main tha

Shilpa-tune meri bachi ko akela chod diya teri himmat kaise hui agar use kuch ho jaata toh

M-aap bewajah darr rahi hain aisa kuch nahin hoga

Shilpa-hone ke kuch bacha nahin hain already hogaya tujhe main aakri warning de rahi hun agar dubaarayeh sab kuch hua toh teri kair nahin

M-aap mujh par barosa kijiye yeh phir repeat nahin hoga

Shilpa-mainbhi yehi umeed karti hun agar phir hua toh tu ghar main nahin rahega

next day in college

Ria-tumhein yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi woh pehle se hi gussewaali hain ab toh woh tumhein nahin chodegi

RV-yaar sab kuch unexpectingly ho gaya samaj nahin aaraha kya karun

Ria-jaake usse maafimaango

They goes to canteen

D-tum yehaan kya kar rahe ho kal jo kuch hua kaafi nahin tha kya ab kya karne aaye ho

N-cool yaar itna kyun over react kar rahi ho

D-tumhein ispe gussa nahin aaraha

N-nahin

Rv-nupur tum kitni achi ho maine tumhae saath misbehave kiya phir bhi tum mujhse naaraz nahin ho i am really sorry for what i have done

N-tumne kal jo kiya uska jawab tumhein kal hi milgaya main us baat ko fir se dohra ke apna mood kharab nahn karna chahti

M-par main tujhe nahin chodunga kal teri wajah se mujhe meri maa se kitna kuch sunna pada aur iska badla toh main lekar rahoonga dekhlena

N-ismain uski kya galti hain galti teri thi isiliye tujhe mom ne daanta

M-tu uski side kyun lerahi hain

N-main uski side nahin tumhari opposition main hun

M-tujhe toh mujhse ladne ka bahaana chahiye kamini tum dono ko toh main nahin chodunga its a promise

N-iske saath jo karna hain kar mujhe koi problem nahin hain par agar meri taraf aaya na toh teri woh haal karoongi jo tu sapne main bhi nahin socha hoga

M-tu mujhe dumki de rahi hain main teri dumkiyon se nahin darne waala

N-tujhe dumki nahin live karke dikhaongi just wait and watch

Cj-guys we are getting late class ka time ho raha hain

N-aaj toh shukla sir ne tujhe baacha liya warna tu toh

M-dumki kise de rahi hain kya karlegi

CJ-guys class

Both run to class

Cj-these two are just impossible

Principal calls everyone to the aditorim for making an announcement

elections were being held in college

Rv decides to participate in elections since there was noone ready to stand against RV so everyone suggest mayanks name

M-thanks guys but i am not interested please leave me

Princi-this is not fair mayank you cant backout like this i want you to participate

M-but sir

Princi-no more buts

M-ok sir i will participate

N- i will also participate

All were shocked

Princi-tumhein toh is electon main koi interest nahin tha

N-haan ab bhi mujhe is election main koi interest nahin hain mera main aim hain is sadu ko haraana(looking at mayank)

M-oh really main bhi ab tak elections main sir keliye participate kar raha tha lekin ab mera goal hoga tumhein haraana

N-dekhenge kaun kise haraatha hain

Bechara rv indonoke beech backup hone ke alawa aur koi option nahin tha aur in dono ki ladai main mayank jeet tha hain aur nupur do votes se haar jaati hain

Precap:

N-RV mera boyfriend hain

M-oh really ria meri girlfriend hain

mayank and ria engagement and nupr and rv engagement

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

nice update...

i just love mayur...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
NICE UPDATE...
PRECAP WAS SHOKING...LOOKING INTRESTING...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

nice update dear
hehehehehe mayur fight was cute as usual
poor mayu- S.A use daata...
hey precap isscary.. ye dono kya kar rahe hai????

waiting for next part


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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
what is this yukkk engagement nooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
nice updt
waiting for the next updt..cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
yeh kya kia? mayur ko alag kyun kia?

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