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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

superbbb epi.👏
waitinggg for next part.😍. who is dat gaddar??????????😕

The gaddar is 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

PART :44::Piya acha hi update me samaj sakthi hu tera last comment on this update ki ups and downs will there but u know jabse mene ye FF padna shuru ki tabse 44 parts me muje itna ghamnahi dikayee di magar me is update se naaraaz bi nahi muje tuj par poora barosa hi ki tum is painful update ko flawless banadegi har baar ki tarah keep it up

Thanks yaar u r right this was the saddest part of my ff till now but kuch twist toh hona hi chahiye na glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb!

can't see maan and geet in pain!
can't wait 2 know who the traitor is...
continue soon!

don't worry 2 more updates to go and then again they will b happy
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

Hi piya jaise mene tuje promise ki mene tera 44 part s padli abi 45 bi pada damdaar FF hi lage raho i am with u and plz dooriya jaldi katam karoo mujse maaneet ki ye pain de ka nahi jata

2 more update dear maneet will b together again pakka promise😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

omg hell kick the traitor out of kc yaar soon
and make maaneet one soon
but geet shld not forgive maan so soon
awesome update continue soon

hmm... uss traitor ki toh khair nahi regarding maneet they r destined to b together
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

awesome...


finally the culprit will be out...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

yes finally the culprit will b out😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 46

Geet: Ye information toh usne di thi
Dev: Kisne Geet naam batau
Geet: Shasha😡😡😡... haan Shasha ne hi last moment mein aakar hume ye information di thi issiki ki wajah se maan ko site pe jaana pada
Adi: Wait a minute Geet pehle tum ye batau k uss din presentation k waqt actual mein hua kya tha...Maan Sir aise hi project chodkar kyun aa gaye?
Geet: Wo hua yun k Maan aur maine jo bhi documents aur tenders taiyaar kiye the aur jo hum presentation denewale the exactly wahi presentation aur plan Arjun ne pesh kiya
Dev: Magar ye kaise ho saktha hai..iss project k details toh sirf aap dono k paas hi the
Geet: Haan maine bhi Maan se yahi kaha par unhone uss waqt mujhe Arjun se dur rakhne k liye ye baat taal di unhone bus yahi kaha k wo jald hi uss gaddar ko dhund nikalenge
Dev: Achha Geet aap dono ye pura kaam kaha kar rahe the
Geet: Conference room mein
Adi: Ab baat kuch samaj mein aa rahi hai
Dev: Kya matlab?
Adi: Dev Sir uss din jab Maan Sir ne iss project mein apne saath Geet ko lene ki baat ki tab waise toh sab khush the par Sasha ka chehra gusse se lal ho gaya tha auruske baad...
Geet: Uske baad kya Adi Sir?
Adi: Uske baad maine Sasha ko chori chupe conference room mein jaate hue dekha aisa laga jaise k uske haath mein kuch tha magar main thik se dekh nahi paaya
Dev: Toh iska matlab hai k tumhare aur Bro ki baate aur iss project k saare details Arjun tak Sasha ne pauchahye hai shayad usne koi spy device use kiya hoga..koi microphone ya camera jaisi cheez
Adi: Toh chaliye Sir conference room mein jaakar uss device ko dhondthe hai kya pata shayad ab bhi wo cheez yahi ho
Geet: Mujhe nahi lagta Sasha itni badi bevakoofi nahi kar sakthi jaise hi uska kaam ho gaya hoga usne wo cheez waha se nikal li hogi
Adi: Toh ab hum kya kare Maan Sir k saamne bina kisi tos saboot k hum jaa nahi sakte
Dev: Haan Bro ye baat hargis nahi maanenge wo toh Geet se nafrat karte hai
Geet: (remembering her dream) Nahi Dev woh mujhse nafrat nahi karte bus thode khafa hai aur sach kahu toh unhe wo haqh hai... main bus itna jaanthi hoon k woh jaanbushkar mera dil kabhi nahi todenge inke bartaav k peeche zarur koi badi wajah hai
Dev: Wajah kaisi wajah?
Geet: Wo toh main nahi jaanti par apni begunahi saaabit karne k baad yaha se jaane se pehle ek baar main unse ye sawal zarur karungi..aakiri waqt tak mera unparse bharosa kabhi bhi nahi dagmagayega
Adi: Kaash tumhari baat sach ho geet ...par filhaal hume ye sochna hai k hume aage kya karna chahiye
Geet: Ek kaam karte hai hum Sasha ka peecha karte hai agar wo wakai mein involved hai toh wo Arjun se milne zarur jaayegi aur phir hum ussi mulakat ka fayda uthakar uske khilaf ek thos saboot ikata kar lenge
Adi: Haan ye thik hai par hume ye kaam badi hi chalaki se karna hoga
Dev: I am sure Arjun Sasha se ghar pe milne ki galti nahi karega iss liye hum aasani se unki video recording bana lenge aur Bro k saamne usse saboot k taur par pesh kar denge
Geet: Toh thik hai ye kaam humhe puri chalaki se karna hoga usse ek pal k liye bhi ye shaqh nahi hona chahiye k hum uska peecha kar rahe hai
Adi: Thik hai Geet toh filhaal hum office jaa rahe hai aur jaise hi wo waha se bahar jaayegi hum usse follow karenge
Geet: Ji magar aap mujhe bhi inform jarur kar dijiyega main bhi aap dono k saath aayungi
Dev: Iski zarurat nahi hai Geet hum dono samal lenge
Geet: Nahi Dev maine aaj tak apni zindagi ki har ek jung khud ladi hai aur aage bhi ladungi main bus iss baat se khush hoon k aap dono mere saath ho
Dev: Hum tumhare dost hai Geet aur tum humesha hume apne paas khada paaugi toh thik hai ab hum chalthe hai jaise hi kuch khabar milegi hum tumhe inform kar denge
Dev and Adi leave
Meanwhile,
Maan: Iss kaam mein zara si bhi laparwahi nahi honi chahiye
Unknown person: Ji Sir aap fikr mat kijiye aapka kaam jald hi hojaayega
Maan: Good
He then dials a number from his mobile
Maan: Hello Sir MSK bol raha hoon
Man: Hello Maan kaise ho aaj meri yaad kaise aagayi
Maan: Ek bada hi important kaam tha aapse kya main aapse personally mil saktha hoon
Man: Why not bolo kab milna hai?
Maan: Kya aap ab free hai toh main aapse abhi milna chahunga
Man: Ok Maan aa jau main tumhara intezaar karunga
Maan: I will be there within half an hour Sir. Thanks
The call ends
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Sasha: main tumse milna chahthi hoon
Arjun: Thik hai aa jau wahi humare roz ke thikane par
Sasha: Yes I m coming
Adi was observing this
He immediately informed Dev who forwarded the message to Geet
After some time Sasha goes to meet Arjun
Geet, Adi and Dev follow her
Sasha: Hello Arjun
Arjun: Sasha tumse kitne baar kaha hai k mujhe yun lagatar call karke tang mat kiya karo kisi ko agar humare plan k baare mein pata chal gaya toh..
Sasha: O common Arjun ab tak toh kisi ko bhi kanokaan khabar nahi hui toh aage kya hoga itna toh bharosa hona hi chahiye tumhe mujhpar
Arjun: Bharosa... He starts laughing
Arjun: Bharosa aur tumpar are jab uss Maan ne apni Geet par bharosa nahi kiya toh main tumpar bharosa kaise kar saktha hoon..tum toh unn logo mein se ho jo k jis thali mein khate hai ussimein ched karte hai
Sasha: Toh tum bhi koi dudh k dhule hue nahi ho
Arjun: Issiliye toh hum dono ki partnership rang le aayi hum dono ne milkar Maan aur Geet ko alag kar diya
Sasha: Haan main itne saalo se KC mein kaam karti hoon maine kitni koshish ki k MK mujhpar meherbaan ho jaaye magar unhone toh ek baar bhi mujhe importance nahi diya aur ye ladki...
Sasha: Ladki ya bolo bilkul bhenji hai jabse aayi hai MK ne usse apni sar ka taj banakar rakh diya hai usse ek kharoch bhi aa jaaye toh puri duniya sar pe utha lethe hai
Arjun: Uss Geet ki wajah se mujhe jail ki hawa khani padi aur upar se wo Maan mujhe dhamki de raha tha... main apni bezathi kaise bhool saktha tha
Sasha: Haan najaane uss ladki mein aisa kya hai jo k mujh mein nahi hai
Arjun: Chodo main Geet ko haasil nahi kar paaya aur naahi tum Maan ko par humne unn dono ko alag toh kar diya
Sasha: Waise maanna hoga aapke plan ko bechare ye soch bhi nahi sakthe the k unki mehnat ka fal aapko milega... raat bhar kaam kar rahe the wo magar uss camera aur microphone ki wajah se saari information aapko mil gayi
Arjun: Dono ki shakal dekhne laayak thi Geet toh ek dum shocked hi gayi thi
Sasha: Mujhe toh laga tha k MK geet ko ussi waqt dhake maar kar nikal denge magar...
Arjun: Laga toh mujhe bhi tha par uss din phir se usne meri bejathi ki aur bade hi gurur se MAAN KI GEET kehkar waha se chala gaya
Sasha: (angry) Maan ki Geet my foot... aaj tak MK ne mujhe kabhi MAAN KI SASHA NAHI KAHA uar uss ladki ko itne jaldi ye darja de diya
Arjun: Waise humara backup plan kaam aa gaya...
Sasha: Haan bechare MK kitna tadpe honge especially wo pic dekhkar jaha pe tum Geet k haath ko kiss karne ki koshish kar rahe the sach kehthe hai log gusse mein sab pagal ho jaate hai issliye toh MK ne bina pura sach jaane hi faisla suna diya
Arjun: Haan woh toh hai uss din bhi uss ladki ne mujhe zor se chata maara magar main bevakoof thodi tha jo usse wo photograph bhej detha
Sasha: Photos aur letter bhejnepar bhi MK ka bharosa dagmagaya nahi woh toh photos dekhne k liye taiyaar hi nahi the
Arjun: Jaanta tha issliye jab tumne inform kiya k Maan humarta parcel dustbin mein phekhne jaa raha hai toh turant hi maine ek private number se usse message bhej diya k agar itna hi bharosa hai toh darte kyun ho?
Sasha: Aur duniya jaanti hai k MSK kisi se darta nahi...
Both of them start laughing
Arjun: Ye lo Sasha tumhare kaam ki kimat
Sasha: Thanks Arjun
Adi had taken the video recording
Dev: Ab Bro ko sach maanna hi hoga
Geet: (thinking) Mera vishwas galat nahi tha Maan ne letter padne k baad bhi mujhpar bharosa rakha...
Dev: Geet chalo chalthe hai
Geet, Dev and Adi leave the place
Meanwhile,
Maan: Thank you Sir aapne mujhe apna keemati waqt diya aur meri help ki thanks a lot
Man: u r welcome Maan aur ab tum fikr mat karo tumhara kaam ho jaayega
PRECAP: TRUTH IS OUT 😊😊😊😊😊
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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wohooo
I am first
yippiee
ahh Piya

Just

Updateee😳
loved it
yay i was it was indeed sasha😡
and haila you just killed me
with this update

i want maan to that arjun
ahhh me going crazy
thinking about what maan is doing
sasha teri to band baj gayi

awesome update yaar
love it

mwahh continue soon
i got to go again
haha

update soon

Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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indeed it was a great update yar
so the truth is out
great...m sure ab sasha wud be badly thrashed from our MSK
everything was written beautifully

i really wonder whom is maan consulting to..is that person some detective or what??
par jo bhi ho m waiting for the update jab sach saamne ayega
ur just superb
loved it

continue soon yar

love
-urs smiling angel😳
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow... so its moron Sasha...hmm!! very bad this sasha...she's so desperate... kabhi Maan ki Sasha nahi kaha...? how can she even Maan ki Geet's place... moron kahin ki...! moron...idiot... dhokebaaz kahin ki...

Adi, Dev aww...so nice of them to help Geet... Maan still busy doing something... finally... FFs don't drag the tracks so much as the shows and the CVs do...

luv always
shivangi
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago

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