MG SS: Life is Incomplete without u! Last part 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey gf friends it's me zooni!!😉 i know you guys must b wondering what another story since i still havent finish my earlier ff.. hmmm wat to do maaneet hav made me like that always thinking abt them... this is atrue story of someone i know with some parts i have added together with it...soi thought of sharin it with my gf friends!! hope you guys will like it and not to worry this has two parts or three parts only!! this ss has nothing to do with the serial except the name..

Character Sketch:

Maan Singh Khurana - one and only heir of khurana's family.. 25 yrs old hot, handsome guy who lives with his dadima.. very caring and humble.. he is in relationship with his mishti, geet for 8 yrs..
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Geet Handa - she is the eldest in the family.. she is turning 23 yrs old soon who lives with her parents and brother.. She is loved and pampered by her fmily an friends..She is in love wtih maan for 8 yrs...
Part one:

The bright sun peeped through the small opening of the window. Geet cringed, pulled her comforter over her head and rolled onto the other side of the bed. With her eyes closed, she stretched her arm out and searched for her bolster but instead her hands felt something there.
She felt it and tried grabbing it. It felt like a stem. She half opened her eyes. Right beneath her palm, sat a beautiful rose. She opened her eyes fully and got a better look. She threw her comforter off and saw that her entire bed was actually decorated with rose petals. She had no idea what was going on and what exactly happened.
Geet got out of bed, put on her bedroom slippers and silpped on her bathrobe. She stretched her arms in the air and gave a little yawn, dragged her feet to the curtains.
Geet drew the curtains to the side and let the beautiful sunrays to shower its glory into her room. She turned and saw her bed once more, trying to recall what had happened. She walked to her bed and made her bed. While making her bed, something fell. She stopped what she was doing, dropped on her knees, and looked for the object. It was an envelope.
Scratching her head and shrugging her shoulders, Geet opened the envelope. In it, was a nice scented blue card. It said:
Dear Ms Hoshaipur Express,
Good morning!
Surprised with the decoration mishti?
It's nothing much but I hope you love it. Oh before I forget,

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JAAN!!

Love and loads of kisses,
ur dhush dhanav
Maan Singh Khurana


PS: please make the bed, leave the petals there, and bring your rose down. What ever you do today, please follow instructions. PLEASE WASH UP :D"

Geet smiled and smacked her forehead gently. She turned and looked at her desktop calendar and realised it was indeed her birthday. She brought the card to her nose and smelt it. It was scented with her favourite perfume, Burberry London. She smiled and whispered, "Maan, u sneaky little one."

After making the bed and washing up, she walked to where the rose was and she picked it up. Letter in one hand and the rose in the other, the birthday girl walked to the kitchen to whip up breakfast.

Her stomach was screaming for breakfast already. While walking to the kitchen, she hummed the tune of the birthday song and smiled. As she reached the kitchen, she saw that breakfast was already laid at the table.

On the table was a small white vase with no flower in it, milo in her favourite cup, plate filled with her favourite western styled breakfast. She shook her head and grinned. She looked at the small empty white vase and immediately knew what she had to do. She walked towards the table and gently placed her rose into the vase.

"Perfect!" she thought. Before she sat down, she saw another envelope, the same one she saw in her bedroom. She shook her head again and muttered, "Where does he get his ideas from anyways?" She opened the letter,
Mishti,
I see that you have settled down for your western styled breakfast.

I kinda sneaked into your house and did what I can. Please enjoy.

The vase is empty and I hope u know what u should do.

Oh, please clear up after you are done. Mary is not around, well I told her to take the day off and your mum knows about it too :D

Lots of love

Maan

Mary is not around and Geet has to clear up after she is done. Mary has been working for Geet's family ever since Geet was a baby. Geet has only done minimal chores, like making her BED!

Geet gritted her teeth and whined but the whining did not last long. The smell of her breakfast was very inviting and her stomach would not stop screaming for food.

She finished her breakfast and cleared up. She thought the surprise was over, and all she can think of is watching TV and lazing around the house until she meets him.

Little did she know, the surprises were just beginning.

While she was walking to the living room, she heard her phone ringing. She ran to her room to pick it up.

Geet: Helllooo..

M: Hello mishti!!

Geet:maan! I hate you! Why did u send Mary off'I had to clear up my own plates.. (sulks)

M: (giggles) Hope u like what I made?

Geet: LIKE? maan, I love them. They were delicious' tell me, u bought them right? (chuckles)
M: NOOO!
Geet: (giggles) All right I was just kidding. What time are you knocking off work?

M: (pauses) Not sure yet jaan, I may have to miss your birthday dinner but I will meet u after all that?

Geet: AWWW! Birthday without u' sure its gonna suck! (sulks)(overhears someone calling him)
B: Ok love, I got to go now'i will check on you later..
Geet looked at her phone sadly. "What a way to spend my birthday?"

She stuffed her phone into her track pants and walked to the living room. While she was getting ready to browse through her DVD collections, her doorbell rings.

She walked to the door and peeped through the peephole. She saw a young, nerdy looking mail carrier standing outside. She opened the door and greeted him. He greeted her and, "Ma'am, are u G-E-E-TH-A-N-D-A, GEET HANDA?" he asked..

Geet, nodded her head and went nearer to him cupping her palm closer to his eyes and whispered, "No one really calls meGeetHandaonly close relations...And whats the matter you are here?

The mail carrier scratched his head and frantically said, "' Ma'am, there is something for you and it was addressed as such. I'm sorry..

Geet laughed and said it was ok. She acknowledged that she received her courier and took the courier in. She held the courier with both hands and used her legs to shut the door. Within seconds, there was a knock on the door again. She was, "NOT AGAIN". She placed the courier down and opened the door again..

It was the mail carrier again. She asked him what had happened.

He looked as if he just sprinted from his motorbike to the door. "Ma'am, I forgot this..
She handed her a rose.
Geet was shocked and was about to scream her head off when he quickly, "NO NO Ma'am that is not from me, (long pause)'." The mail carrier scratched his head.

Then, "I remember now. Happy Birthday to you'This was given by Maan. Ma'am, have a good day." He walked away.

Geet's eyes opened wide and her jaws dropped.

What was Maan thinking about? Another ROSE! Just a stalk? What was on his mind?


TO BE CONTINUED...
part 2: page 4
part 3: page 7



So guys how was the part one??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulation for new ff
awesome start
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum start...
maan s so sweet...full of surprises..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow loved it very much
Plz plz cont soon and pm me
Thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS DEAR for ur new SS. It's Awesome ... Continue soon...
Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good start... hope will be romantic
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOL @ the drinking milo part!
oh gosh shona!
ok i really loveeed this first part!
cont soon pretty pleasee
and i better be the first to get the pm
and and this better be a happy ending!
LOL i jk about the last part!
i loveeed it now that i'm serious about :D<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is so nice... So cute... I'm a bit confused though 😕 if maan n geet r married, why is he calling her geet HANDA??? And don't they live in the same house?? As he said that he sneaked up in her house!!!

Plz continue soon n thx for the pm

ps: plz update shadi.com too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really amazing
are maan geet married
m confused
anyways it was really really good update
please do cont.

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