hello every1 i m back with the 1st part ...hope u all like it😊
waise i wanna thank u all 4 appreciating me n my work ...plss plss do comments or criticise as it matters to me a lottt here is the 1st part ...its may be boring bt bear it...
part 1
there is a big mansion ..yes its BHUSHAN MANSION ,beautifully desinged n there was alott hustle n brustle inside the house...
a lady in her late 50ies , sitting n shouting on the servants
LADY:arre ramu ,strawberry nhi chocolate cake lana tha , tjhse ek kaam nhi hota...champa tu gubbare yahan nhi yahan laga ufff...aree ratna bahu ,dekh toh meri guriyarani taiyaar hui ki nhi?
ratna: ji maji
SCENE SHIFTED TO A ROOM WHICH IS NICELY DECORATED WITH WHITE COLOUR N QUITE BIG...
A GIRL ,ABOUT 6 WAS SITTING QUIETLY N PLAYING WITH A DOLL
ratna: taiyyar ho gyi meri angle ..."happy b;day nupur"
nupur: thank u mumma...
ratna: ab chalo neeche dadi bula rhi hain
nupur : lekin usse bhi toh lana hai na uska bhi aj b'day hai
ratna :aree haaan jao uske pass aur dono jaldi se neeche aao
nupur:ok
nupur went to her jaan's room
n saw her crying
nupur: kya hua?
sheena: meri dress dekho kitni gandi hai n tmhari kitni sundar hai ..main bilkul bhi achhi nhi lag rhi huin...
nupur: bt yeh toh itni achhi hai bare papa laye hai na tere liye...
sheena:nhi achhi hai n mumma ne kaha bht sasti hai yeh n teri kitni sundar hai ...main bht gandi dikh rhi huin na...
nupur: nhi ...ab ro mat ..ek kaam kar tu meri dress pehn le n main teri...
sheena: sachhi
nupur:muchhi ab jaldi kar mumma bula rhi hain...
BOTH EXCHANGED THERE DRESSES N CAME DOWN
dadi was shouting as usuall when sum1 came n hugged her 4m back ...
aa gyi meri guriyaa "happy b'day nupur"
nupur:thank u dadi..she bend down n took her blessings
dadi : beta kabhi bhi mere pair mat chona betiyaan pair nhi chuti n yeh lo tmhara gift.aur wo dusri guriya kahan hai sheena
nupur: wo taiyaar ho rhi hai
sheena :gudmorning dadi
dadi : happy b'day guriya ..n ye lo aapka gift
she quickly unwrapped the gift n saw a frok inside it
sheena :yeh kya dadi , 1 frok ...🤢 iska colour kitna ganda hai , yeh nupur tu hi rakh le...
n she went 4m there
dadi got upset n nupur knew how to cheer her up
dadi yeh bht sundar hai sacchi dekhna apkeb'day pe main yahi pehnugi 😊
dadi 2 smiled seeing her innocence n said ok
soon guests start arriving as that was avryy big party...
mohan bhushan(sheena's father) arre chalo time 4 the cake cutting
shashi bhushan(nupur's father) bhaiya 2 min ruko ,abhi tk wo aaya nhi na
suddenly he heard a voice "naam liya n hm hazir"
it was prem sharma with his wife shilpa sharma n son mayank sharma
both mr shashi bhushan n prem sharma were best frnds ...
shashi :abhi aa rha hai
prem :ab aa ttoh gya na chalo lets cut the cake ..waise nupur n sheena kahan hai?
nupur always loved shipa as her mother
shilpa:ji ,hmari nupur kahan hai?
nupur :booo
n shilpa got scared
shilpa:ohh toh aap yahan ho ,aapne toh hme dara hi diya
happy b'day beta n ye lo aapka gift
nupur :thank u
aunty money nhi aaya?
mayank:don't call me monkey
nupur:tmhe kahan bola ..lekin tmne khud ko samaj liya ,vryy gud ..dekhna unty isss baar teacher isse full marks degi
mayank:haan monkey kochipkali se zyada hi aata hai marks jaise mjhe tmse
nupur:i m not chipkali...
shilpa :ok aj no larai mayu aj uska b'day hai
mayank: maine thori na larai ki...ok "happy b'day chipkali ..ohhh sryy nupur"
nupur:thank u monkey ooopsss sryyy mayank
n bth giggled ...
shilpa :kitne pyare hain
ratna : haan larte bhi hai lekin ek dusre ke best frnds hain ..kitne pyare lagte hain saath mein kyun kaveri(sheena's mom)
kaveri :hmmm *upset seeing bht giggling (as she never loves nupur) n her daughter was alone sitting on the chair n playing*
the time came when bth r about 2 cut cakes ...there were 2 big chocolate cakes 1 4 nupur n other 4 sheena
kaveri*angry* yeh kya hai ramu ...maine strawberry cake bola tha na phir yeh kyun
dadi :wo maine kaha ki chocolate cake le aaye nupur ko pasand hai na toh mjhe laga ki...
kavri (intreruppting) haan nupur hi toh aapki fav hai*2 sec pause* i mean hm sab ki favhai ...chalo cake kato ab sheena
dadi understood her words...
after hving diner n playing all the chilren went 2 there room n these 3 chilren slept in a room while the adults were talking
prem: time kaise beet jata hai , i mean abhi toh bachhe hue the dekho ab 6 saaal ke bhi ho gye
ratna:sahi kaha bhai sahab ,ab kuch saal baaad inki shadi ki umar bhi ho jayegi
shashi : bt i think hmara time hi thek tha log loyal the aj kl toh kisi ka bhi bharosa nahi hai
prem:tu toh aise keh raha hai ki aj hi nupur ki shadi karne ka irada hai ,,jo uske life mein likha hai wo usse mil jayega n wo tni achhi hai ki use koi achha hi milega
kaveri:ji main kuch kahun
shlpa :ji
kaveri :aapko hmari sheena kaise lagti hai?
shilpa:bht pyari bachhi hai
kaveri : ji wo main yeh kehna chahrhi thi ..ji wo ..
prem :ji boliye
kaveri :ji main chahti huin ki aapke mayank n meri sheena ki shadi ho
EVERY1 WAS SHOCKED
mohan:ye tm kya keh rhi ho😡
kaveri sahi toh keh rhi huin
meri sheena main kya burai hai?
mohan:par yeh koi umar hai shadi ki
kaveri :par maine kb kaha abhi hi shadi karo ...bus abhi rishta
mohan:par tm...
prem*interuppted* nahi mjhe lagta hai yeh thik keh rhi hain aur waise bhi sheena hmari beti jaise hi hai ab wo hmare ghar hmesha ke liye aa jaye isse achi baat kya hogi
i think yahi thik hoga mayank aur sheena
kyun maaji aapko toh thik lagta hai na
dadi* thinking* agar maine na kaha toh kaveri ko lagega ki main unmein bhed bhaw karti huin lekin yeh bhi toh thk nhi mayank aur sheena ...akhir hoga wahi jo bhagwan ki marzi...
dadi:thik hai lekin main chahti huin ki jb tk unki umar na ho shadi ki unhe iss rishte ke baare mein koi nhi bata yega ...
every1 nodded while kaveri thought how easily she got agreed bt then keeping all thought aside she felt content n happy...
while shilpa was nt happy with this bt she knew if dadi said yes then sumthing is good in this so she remained quiet...
prem:toh phir rishta pakka
mohan :ji zaroor
😊
every 1 was happy bt these 3 chilren were unawsare of this important fact of their life n the next turn there life is goona take...
the end
plss bear this as i know its quiet boring bt it was necessary nxt part full of mayur 4 sure...
till then byeee
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Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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