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@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Intresting dear

I know Mayur will fall in love and ye zalim samajh una jeen nahi da ga hay mayur

waiting for next part

thanks for pm

cont soon

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

nice story do add me to ur pm list

and continue soon😊

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Nice dear but Sheena
We'll wait and see what happens in the future...
Thank you so much and continue soon...😊

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Nikhita

@nuckts

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

heya nice concept

it reminds me of a movie called aina!

lovely update

love ya🤗

love nuckts!!!!!😊

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exams tum mujhe chainse kyu nahi jeene dete???😭😭😭

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

very very nice update...

hate...😡😡😡😡😡 sheeennnaaa...

how could she... firstly she took nupur's frok... now she and her

are planning to seperate.. mayur...

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

lovely update...

loved nupur's childhood desc.

I know Mayur will fall in love,waiting for next part

cont soon😊

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

nyc start dear!!!
i hate sheena...😡
pls cont soon n add me 2 ur pm list!!
thnx 4 d pm anila!😃

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awesome concept dear

n the 1st part was superb not boring eagerly waiting next part with full of mayurish Nila thanks alot hun for the pm plzzz do pme next update

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

congrats dear
beautiful start
simply loved it
plz do cot. it

thanx anila for ur pm

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

1st of all a vryy sorry to all of u bada wala sachhi dil se 4 not updating...actually i was a little bust so not talking 4 more n boring u here is the nxt update...bear with it n plsss sryy 4 the errors

1 more things thank u all 4 ur precious comments😃

16 yrs later...

there was a huge noise in the bhushan mansion ... hustle bustle was there enough

evry1 were busy in there respective works...

1 lady: ghar toh bht sundar sajaya hai...

2: haan beti ki jo shadi hai aur yeh toh amiro ke chochle hai

1: hmm sahi baat hai heheheheheh

scene shifts to a room which is decorated nicely...

a girl in beautiful red lehanga was standing in front of the dressing table n staring at a photo

girl: aj aap khush ho na mumma papa...aj aapki pyari beti ki shadi hai ..n mjhe aapke blessings ki bht zaroorat hai ..i knw ap dono mere saath ho bt phir bhi bht darr lag rha hai ...shayad

interrupted by sum girls ... arre nupur tm taiyaar ho gyi hm ander aajayein?

nupur: haan

girl:arre wah bht sundar lag rhi hi...

nupur(smiles )

girl : arre nupur teri mehendi kitni ghehri hai ...iska matlab jiju bht pyarr karenge tjhe ...hehehehhehe😆

nupur: (thinking) kash main bhi aisa keh sakti...

meanwhile nupur's masi entered ...

masi: nupur beta ..tu taiyaar ho gyi...dekh baarat aa gyi hai tu bus ek baar apni dadi se bhi mil le ...tjhe pata hai na wo uth nhi sakti...

nupur: ji

there were no signs of happiness on the face of nupur that usually were on the faces of brides...

nupur entered in a room where there is an old lady was lying on the bed ...n was connected with more then 4 wires...

nupur reached there n sat on the corner of the bed

nupur: dadi..

dadi: nupur tu taiyaar ho gyi? dekhun toh kaisi lag rhi hai meri guriya?

nupur: dekho dadi main kaisi lag rhi huin?

n she stood up n showed her self 2 dadi

dadi: bilkul pari jaisi

she again sat on the bed

dadi: nupur ek baat puchuin

nupur: ji dadi

dadi:tu mere faisle se khush toh hai na

nupur jut nodded her head

dadi: kisi pressure mein toh yeh faisla nhi liya hai na tne

nupur shook her head

dadi: yeh kya sar hila rhi hai thik se bol na

nupur: ji dadi main bilkul khush huin..n koi pressure nhi hai mjhpar yeh mera khud ka faisla hai

dadi: main toh bus ab dua karungi ki tu khush rahe n jb bhagwan ke pass chali jaungi toh unse personally teri khushi ki request karungi😉

nupur: kya dadi aap bhi ...ap kahin nhi ja rahe ho samjhe ...n aap ab aisi koi baat nhi karoge

vidaai se pehle hi mjhe rulaoge kya

a tear escaped 4m her eye

dadi: achha guriya rani main nhi roti n tu bhi mat ro warna larke wale bolenge kaisi dulhan llaye hai hm jo bilkul bhi sundar nhi aur agar phir wo tjhe nhi le gye toh mjhe zindagi bharr tjhe rakhna hoga ufff n tu mjhe kuch achha khane hi nhi degi😭

nupur: dadi aapbhi na aur agar aisa ho toh achha hi hai ...warna ap toh raat mein chup chup kr icecream kaogi😊

dadi:n tu bhi toh mera saath degi hehehe

bht started laughing suddenly dadi started coughing badly n nupur makes her relax

nupur: aaram se dadi ..itna mat bolo ok...

suddenly a girl came inside to take nupur with her as the pandit ji is calling her...

dadi: achha ab nupur tu ja

nupur : started crying n hugged dadi

dadi: arre aise mat ro warna make up utar jayrga n paise dub jayenge

nupur n dadi : hehehehe😊

n nupur went with the girl as she started walking her heartbeat started raising ..as she was bit nervous wat will happen after all this

thanks

sryy 4 not any mayur scene ...bt i'll update day after tommorrow (shayad) n then u'll get all the scenes u want till then byee