Mayur FF : The perfect couple lastpart pg29 edited - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wao this was superb
so cute
By God kitna larta ha
thanks For Pm
cont soon
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g8 update...
i lov it
thanx for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update.
continue soon
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update.loved mayur fight.they were so sweet
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waiting for mayur love to start
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part 4

RV and Ria reach BB court

Rv---Good game

They don't listen they were in there own world

M-aaj game main jeeta scores equal

N'dekhenge pehle century kaun marta hain

M-ismain sochne waali kya baat hain main hi pehle century complete karoonga

N-Itna overconfidence kal bhi aise hi baat kar rahe the aur haar gaye

M-kal haara toh kya aaj main hi jeeta aur century bhi pehle main hi complete karoonga

N---lets see

M-lets see

CJ'guys we are getting late

M'shut tumhari wajah se phirse late hua

N-tumse ladne ke liye maine nahin kahaan tha

M'tum kehti kuch nahin hamesha tedhi medhi harkatein karti ho

N-tum toh maa ke dule ho na

Cj-guys

Both run to class

Rv and ria were laughing seeing them fighting

They reach class and were shocked to see mayur sitting together seeing RV dia was fuming with anger

D-yeh yehaan kya kar raha hain

B'kaun dia

D'RV

B-tum use jaanti ho

D-main iske baare main baat nahin karna chahti

Along with RV and ria adhaani enter

Su'yeh yehaan bhi pahunch gayi

A'cool suhaani kuch nahin hoga

Princi introduces them to class but during that time also mayur were busy fighting

Princi'agar tumhein kaisi bhi help chahiye mayank ya nupur se poochna they will help you right mayank

N-tum is duniya ka 8 wa ajuba ho

M'aur tum is duniya ki sabse badi paagal

N-sadu

M-jhansikirani

N-akdu

M-paagal

N-monkey

M-gamandi

N'stupid

M-idiot

Princi'agar tum dono apni ladai ko thodi der break doge toh main apna lecture complete karoon

Mayur 'sorry sir

Princi-yeh charo nayi joining hain tum log inko yehaan adjust hone main help karoge Rv andsuhaani ki help tum karogi aur ria aur adhi ka help tum karoge I hope you both are cleared ab tum dono help karne ke liye bhi nahi n ladoge

MAYUR'Yes sir

In lunch mayur were asusual sitting in canteen reading book and listening songs using same earphone cj and uday join them later benia come there

B-kya baat hain aaj maahol bahut shant hain

Mayank stares he keeps silent

Adhaani-hi guys can we join you

D---ya sure

C'you both are from

SU'hum dono pune se hain

A-main coffeelekar aata hun

SU-mere liye

A'jaanta hun lekar aaonga

D-you both are friends

Suhaani blushes making them understand

D-oh lovers that's great pehle kisne propose kiya tha

Annie'tum dono pehli baar kaise mile the

Su'actually bachpan se hum dono dost the uske baad

Ria & RV come there suhaani stops looking at ria

RV'hi guys

Uday, CJ and benji'hi

RV 'kya hum yehaan bait sakte hain (looking at nupur)

N--yeh chairs meri nahin college ki hain toh jaake principal se permission maango

RV'tum mazak acha karti ho

N-mujhe koi kaam nahin hain kya jo tumse mazak karte baitoon I am serious

RV-ok sorry (he sits)

Dia gets up

D-agar ye yehaan baita toh main yeha se chali jaongi

N-kyun ise chune ki bimaari hain

RV'no she hates me because maine usse pyar nahin kiya

Mayur look at each other and start laughing badly

C-tum dono ko ho kya gaya hain aise kyun has rahe ho

M-nahin toh kya kare itna acha drama chal raha hain

D-mayank stop it tumhare friend ko kisine dump kiya aur tum uski support karne ke wajah has rahe ho

N-use tum pasand nahin ho usne tumhein dump kiya ismain galti kya hain ab agar tum usse ladogi toh kya woh apni galti maan kar tumse pyar karega tum log bhi na jab tak kuch nahin milta uske peeche bhagte ho aur jab woh milta usse dur bhagne ke liye koshish karte ho

D-tum se baat karna meri hi galti hain you are mad

M-we are not mad you people are mad pata nahin kya chahte ho khud ko nahin pata tum logo ke liye pyar timepass ke liye chahiye

Su-main adhi se bachpan se pyar kart hoon aur woh bhi mujhse tabse pyar kara hain hum dono ek dusre ke bina ek pal bhi nahin reh sakte

R-yehi adhi last year mere peeche ghum raha tha jab maine use dump kiya tumhare pass agaya

Su-tab woh attraction ko pyar samaj baita uska sacha pyar main hi hun

N-yaar meri book ki love story se yeha ki love story kaafi entertaining hain zara clearly batao na

M-(to himself)yeh toh gayi aaj

Suhaani says her love story she and adhi were child hood friends but when adhi was in love with ria suhaani understood her feelings for adhi but she left her love for adhi's love and later ria ditched him suhaani supported him and at that time he also understood that his true love was suhaani

During the whole story mayur were having good fun but they controlled there laughter

N-toh tum yeh kehti ho adhi aur ria ka attraction tha aur tum dono ka sacha pyar

Su-haan ofcourse

N-agar for suppose ria adhi ki proposal maanti toh tab tum kya karti

M-kya karegi kisi bablu se shaadhi karegi aur kahegi

Mayur-mera pehla pyar adura reh gaya (bothlaugh and give hifi)

Su-tum dono ko badaa mazaa aaraha hain humein neecha dikhane main waise bhi tum dono pyar ko kya samjoge tum dono ko ladne ke alawa kuch nahin aata

N-relax yaar hum is pyar ke baare main jaankar apna time waste karna nahin chate

Su-aise hi kahoge jis din tumhein tumhara sacha pyar nahin milega na tab tum isi pyar ke liye tadpoge

M-tum log toh bahut tadapte ho na agar ek ladka ladki pyar main paagal hain toh kya guarantee hain dono final tak saath rahenge aade kahaniyon main ladki ya ladka reject karta hain aur jo baaki hain usmein misunderstandings ki wajah se alag ho jaate hain koi bhi lover ko bhi college ke saath badalte hain agar shaadhi hui bhi toh divorce lekar alag ho jaate hain aaj ke zamaane main ek romeo aur juliet,

N-heer aur ranja

M-saleem aur anarkali

N-ya phir paru aur devdas jaise ek pair ko dikhao hum tumhari baat maanenge

M- yeh sab chodo agarmain abhi is waqt adhi ka murder yehi karoonga toh kya tum uske saath marne ke liye tayyar ho

N-good idea

Mayur were fighting with suhaani at same time unpur mixes mirchi in mayanks coffee

Su-you both are mad tum logon se baat karke main apna time waste nahin karna chahti

M-good decision thoda sar dard toh kam hoga

Mayank drinks coffee and shouts nupur starts laughing

N-coffee kaise lagi

M-tujhe toh aaj nahin chodunga

He runs behind her she slips and falls

N-auch ab aise kya dekh rahe ho help karne ke liye permission poochne ki zaroorat nahin hain

He gives her hand to getup

N-uta nahin jaaraha

He takes her inarms and makes her sit on chairand asks uday to bring medicine from his locker

He catches her leg

N-auch bahut dard ho raha hain

She has tears in her eyes

M-mujhse panga logi toh yehi hoga hoshiyaar bandar

N-main bandar toh tu bandar

She starts fighting forgetting her pain

Uday brings pain reliever spray

M-thanks uday jaldi aake meri jaan bachane ke liye

N-mayank

He takes the spray and applies on her leg

M-ab kaisa lag raha hain

N-ab bhi bahut dard hain

M-ek kaam karte hain dono ghar chalte hain

N-par class

M-overacting band kar daily toh class bunk maarne ki bahaane dundti rehti hain aur ab class miss hoga bolke naatak kar rahi hain

She tries to stand but slips he takes her in arms

N-tumhein mujhe thanks kehna chahiye meri wajah se sabke saamne hero ban gaye

M-tujhse kahaana overaction band karne ke liye jyada naatak kina toh neeche giradunga

N-agar giraya toh mom ko call karke bolungi

M-dumki dena koi tujhse seekhe

Both smile

They go home

Su-yeh woh bolke pyar ke baare main stupidly baat kar rahe the aur khud hi pyar main paagal hain

D-they are not in love Suhaani nupur is mayank's responsibility hain he is just taking care of her

Su-tumhein shayad aisa lag raha hoga par yeh sach hain ki they are in love and I will make them realize that unke liye nahin khud ke liye undono ne mere pyar ka insult kiya ab dekho main undono ko kaise sabak sikaati hun

Ria was fuming with anger

RV-Wats up Ria

Ria-tumne dekha nahin woh dono kitne close hain

RV-right but just wait and watch kaise main nupur ko mayank se alag karke apna banata hun

Mayur reach home

Shilpa-kya hua meri bachi ko

M-maa panic mat hona maamooli si chot hain mainmom ko lekar aata hun

He goes to call shobha

Shilpa-tu bhi na dekh ke chal sakti na koi kaam teek se nahin karti ab dekho kya hua

N-mom main teek hoon aap rona band kijiye maamooli si chot hain thodi der restkaroongi toh teek ho jayega

Shilpa'lekin beta

N-lekin wekin kuch nahin aap mujhe abhi isi waqt coffee chahiye

Shilpa-tik hain lekar aati hun

She smiles

Mayank brings shobha

She checks her leg

Shoba-acha hua tujhe toh kisike sunne ki aadat nahin hain jo jee main aaya wohi karti hain ab pura din bistar pe leti raho din ba din shaitaan ban rahi hain

N-maa ek taraf main dard se marr rahi hun aur aap hain ki mera sar kaa rahi hain this is too much

Shobha-dard hain isiliye chup chap sunrahi hain warna kabki yehaan se bhag jaati mujhe nahin pata kya tere naatak

Shilpa-kya meri beti ke peche padi hain tujhe treatment karna hain kar warna main koi aur doctor ko bulaloongi

N-good idea mom mujhe yeh doctor pasand nahin main kisi aur doctor se apna illaz karwaongi

Shoba catches her ears

Shoba-tune ab agar muh kola na muh thod dungi chup chap bait

She takes injection

N-injection mujhe nahin chahiye maa please

Shobha-kahana muh band

M-tu koi bachi nahin hain injection se darne ke liye

N-tu beech main aaya na dekho main kya karti hun

Shoba-use kya dumki de rahi hain doctor tu hain ki main hun chup chap injection lag waala warna sach main maaroongi

Mayank smiles she stares at him in anger shoba puts her injection she was crying like a baby. Mayank was having good fun seeing her behaviour.

Shobha-ab chup chap aaraam kar warna dubaara injection lagaongi

N-main aapke dumkiyo se nahin darti

(she catches her ears)

Shoba-ek baar phir se bol

N-i am sorry please chodona

Shobha-ise nahin tujhe kehna chahiye tune hi ise sar pe chadaya hain

N-meri mom ko kuch kahaana toh dekho actually aapko nahin is monkey ko kehna chahiye jab dekho aapse meri buraai karta rehta hain

M-tum toh bahut achi bachi hona maa se meri buraaibilkul bhi nahin kehti

N-tum kitne ache ho mom kopata hain tumhari braai karke main apna time nahin waste karna chahti

M-main bhi tumse behas karke apna time nahin waste karna chahta

Dadi-shobha aur mayu dono yehaan se jao aur tu chup chap muh band karke soja

M-humein bhi yeha rehne main koi interest nahin hain chalo mom

They go from tere shilpa takes care of Nupur that whole day

Shobha is never worried of nupur she only takes care of mayu becoz she knows shilpa is there to take care of her

Mayank spends most of time in bhushan house only for studying and sleeping he comes to his house if he wants anything he asks shashi or shobha. He has his lunch, breakfast, Dinner in bhushan house same is with Nupur she also spends most time in sharma house its like they have exchanged their parents. Shilpa and sanjay love nupur equal to mayu and shashi and shobha love mayu equal to nupur.

Next day morning nupur feels normal and goes to college shilpa orders mayank to take care of nupur

They reach college in lunch again gang sits together

RV comes there and sits beside nupur

RV-tumhara paon kaisa hain

N-waisa hi han jaisa kal tha

Rv- i mean to say ki tumhara chot kaisa hain kam hua ya nahin

M-kam nahin hoti toh madam college main nahin hoti ghar pe hoti

Rv-main yeh question nupur se pooch raha tha tum beech main kyun aarahe ho

M-mujhe nahin pata tha yeha quiz competition chal raha hain you carry on

N-quiz i hate it

Rv-I hate it too

B(to dia)-flirting shuru

Rv-shall we go for coffee

N-coffee toh yeha bhi milta hain baahar jaane ki kya zaroorat hain ek kaam karte hain paanipuri kaane chalenge

M-mil gaya mauka tumhein us paanipuri ke alawa kuch nahin sujta kya

N-tum toh mujhe leke nahin jaate ho koi aur leke jaa raha toh tumhein kya problem hain

M-mujhe koi problem nahin hain jo karna hain karo

RV ko majburan haan kehna pada

Rv-sham ko chalenge

He leaves later suhaani catches mayank alone

Su-tumhein bilkul bura nahin lagaa nupur RV ke saath bahar jaa rahi hain

M-bahut bura lag raha hain bechara RV aaj toh use bhagwan hi bachayega

Later in evening RV was waiting for nupur

Rv-toh chale

M-tumhein jaana hain toh jao main tumhein pick karne tumhare paanipuri shop main nahin aane waala

N-lekin mayank

RV-dont worry i will drop you

N-are wah mere do do drivers

Mayank smiles

M-rv all the best aaj bhagwan hi tumhein bacha payega

Uday comes there

Rv-tum bhi aarahe ho

N-haan main tumhari guest hoon aur uday bhaiya mere guest hain

RV(to himself)-i think i will get mad

They leave mayank was going to library

Ria-mayank coffee peene chale

M-coffee canteen main milti hain baahar jaane ki kya zaroorat hain

Ria-toh kahin aur chalte hain

M-rv nupur aur uday already baahar gaye hain why dont you join them

Ria-tum mere saath nahin aaoge

M-main kyun chaloon jab mujhe jaane ka mann nahin hain agar ab main baahar gaya bhi toh nupur mujhe maar daalegi

Ria-but mayank

M-sorry ria i cant come with you

Mayur ko samajne ke liye aap logon ko thoda wait toh karna padega

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabulous update dear
i loved d whole part
it was just too good
keep it up

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Posted: 13 years ago
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SO FUNNY PART
I loved Mayur scenes
thanks for Pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice updt ... awesome ...continue soon... thanks for the pm :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nicely written...

thnx for the pm

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