OS : Arnav's Khushi

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littlemoi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

it was a pleasure to read this!! so beautifully written!

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rechus

@rechus

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

No words explains hw much superb.. Realy touching... Thanks alot..

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Simply_Smart

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

So crisply written and beautifully expressed! You've captured both Arnav and Khushi so well...the power behind Arnav's emotions was just fantastic! I loved this bit "Arnavv...she never called him arnav...he leapt to his feet to see what the matter was." A small detail in the scheme of things, but loved it none-the-less!

Absolutely amazing!

Best,

Smarty

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Priya_128

@Priya_128

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: areeba123hina
incredible!! the way u captured the emotions!! thats what i like bout khushi, she tries to move ahead while arnav's anger still represents that a part of him is stuck in past!! wonderful!! 👍🏼👏

Thanks so much for your comments...I tried capturing what thought might be goin thru arnav's head...

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Priya_128

@Priya_128

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: aahana1
woww that was absolutely amazinggg !!!
Very well written. Please write more !
This was truly wonderful.

Thankyouu so much :)

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Priya_128

@Priya_128

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: aquablue17
amazing writing! im in shock! loved it

Glad you enjoyed it…thankyou J

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
This was a beautiful piece of writing dear.

A complete pleasure to read.

It was great to read the scene from Arnav's point of view!!!

Thankyouuu for the kind words :D

Originally posted by: napstermonster
Okay seriously, you now have an obligation to write a million more of these OS things-yours is the best Ive ever read, and the way you wrote the emotional aspects ripped my heart right out!

Fan-freakin-tastic!

You basically now have a debt those of us who cannot write this well, and who long just LONG to read excellent fiction, and put us out of our misery by writing like this everyday!

Hahaha…thankyou so much for the appreciation J I know it gets really frustrating when you want something to happen from the very fibre of your being and then it doesn't…I shall try writing more..but since this was like a one time effort… I wont be too hopeful :P

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
i caught this os coincidentally and trust me it's just fantastic! im spell bound by it and really hope something like this happens on da show tonite!! arnav must realize kushi is an orphan to he can assure his heart that she meant it well when she told him she could relate to what he's goin through; missing his parents

i want arnav to realize he's not da only one without a family. i want him to regret shoutin at her!!! wow let's hope ur fabulous writing pays off well in reality!!!

tnx heaps for a wonderful os! lots of love

Thanks so much for your words…I know…arnav has to realize J and I hope the CVs are listening to the 1000s of prayers… thanks again for reading..love

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
Fabulous!

actually it is beyond outstanding..

you have brought their emotions alive...on the table...and put before us to devour

and i for one feasted on it!

thoroughly captivating!!

bravo!

Thankyouu so much…coming from you …this is a big deal J im grinning like an idiot now :D

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
A beautiful read...you have done justice to his emotions, and his containment...and you have painted Khushi just as she is...though both of them have born the same loss, she strives everyday to LOVE...to give it and receive it in full measure...while he chooses to simply lick and re-lick his wounds alone...as far away from LOVE as possible!!!

Good job!!

Thanks J Its so surprising that they are two people who have had the same losses and have done so much differently to deal with it :D hopefully khushi will be a great influence on him J

Originally posted by: Simply_Smart
So crisply written and beautifully expressed! You've captured both Arnav and Khushi so well...the power behind Arnav's emotions was just fantastic! I loved this bit "Arnavv...she never called him arnav...he leapt to his feet to see what the matter was." A small detail in the scheme of things, but loved it none-the-less!

Absolutely amazing!

Best,

Smarty

Thanks a ton smarty….ironically that's my fav part …somethings people do out of the normal…only when they are highly distressed or so… I thought that anjali voicing his name would increase his sense of urgency…cos it rarely happens that she calls him by his name J

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tinanishoo

@tinanishoo

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

wow..the best read i ever had in 'is pyaar ko kya naam doon' forum...Pls write more.I want to read more..

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hey Priya 🤗

Now this one has truly left me speechless, it was very gripping, yup i read a similar OS, but yours had an altogether different essence, and an altogether different perspective, which makes it truly unique in it's own way :)

I can't even begin to say which parts i loved the most, because from the beginning to the very end, you had me glued to the screen, each line a new blow with the intensity that ..that Arnav would see in Khushi's eyes, a whole world within it.

I also loved the way you described KKG from Arnav's pov, It wasn't more about her outer appearance rather her inner beauty. Beautiful use of imagery, truly stunned for any more words.

Towards the end, I hope and wish you venture further into this passionate world of writing with ArHi :) <3

Do Pm me whenever you write anything, it will be a pleasure to read more of your work 😳

Lots of Love

ZeeJay 🤗