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Posted: 12 years ago
Contd...

After bhagam bhag from station😆

They both run for some time..stop at some place look at ecah other..and laugh heartily.😃for long time remembering their act,,

Naina; daksh tum ne tho aaj..kya jaroorat thi last mein bholne ki?
Daksh;pehli baar ki hisaab se maine bahut acha kiya👏
Naina;lekin maan na padega..tum tho bahut acha acting karlete ho..not bad👏
 Daksh looks at naina( naughty look). kya kare?.boora sangat ka asar hain...😆

Naina; acha...hits him slowly and says; mazaa aaya??

Daksh; sach kahoo. bahut mazaa aaya! aur tumne uss TC ka chehra dekha..gusse se lal hogaya tha🤣..acha hua hum bahg gaye warna pata nahi kya karta..maan gaye aap ko mrs.patwardan..lekin...yahi first aur last time..agali baar bina ticket ke kabhi nahi..ok

Naina; haan baba..pakka..agali baar se ticket le kar hi jayenge...

After few min

Naina; daksh bahut pyaas lag rahi hein
Daksh looks around ; ek min..he goes to near by shop and gets paani ka bottle, opens the cap and gives it to naina.Naina drinks and gives it to daksh..

Daksh; aage ka kya programme hain?
Naina; aur kya? ghoomne jayenge😛
Daksh; arey lekin kaise? 😲gaadi tho doosra station mein reh gaya?Paidal jayenga kya?

Naina; kisne kaha sirf gaadi ya paidal ghoom sakte hain..mere paas ek aur idea hain..woh dekho,😛 daksh looks at  that direction, he sees a guy going on cycle.

Daksh; kya? cycle pe?😲lekin ab cycle  kaha se milega? looks at naina and says; chori karvane ka irada tho nahi haina naina.🤣.main aur bhag nahi sakta😆

Naina; Naa chori karne ki jaroorat hein ..naa bhagne ki..yaha par ek shop hain,,jo cycle rent pr dete hain..hum waha jayenge; lekin tumhe cycle chalana tho aata hain na daksh

Daksh; ye bhi koi poochnewali baat hain..of course aata hain..Lekin tumhe kaisa pata yaha ye shop hein..mujhse pehle kisi aur ke saath.. bhi( naughty look)😆

naina; haan haan , ..iss cycle shop wala ke saath mera deal hain.😆.iss liye (smiles
..mein darjeeling se hoon, mujhe nahi pata hoga..tho kya tumhe pata hoga?

daksh;maan gaye..ab chale

Both go searching for shop, find it and take a cycle on rent...daksh checks if everything is fine(lawyer hain na) and after getting assured he sits on the cycle, cute trade mark smile😛 and looks at naina

Daksh; tho..chale safar par mere humsafar..

Naina smiles at daksh's words, nods her head and sits infront of daksh on rod of cycle.😍.rings the bell..daksh smiles...phir dono ghoomne gaye...cycle par😍


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Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Lucky 😛 Good I read this now ... And it made me smile 😃 
Just loved the whole scene 😉 Thanks bud 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Awesome Lucky 😛 Good I read this now ... And it made me smile 😃 

Just loved the whole scene 😉 Thanks bud 🤗

ditto here...
lucky yar thnku sooo much🤗...made me smile phir se😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks guys..

Lucky,
wow.. its so funny.. 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dakshna cycle trip - contd❤️

Dakshna on cycle.ghoomne nikalgaye.suddenly naina asks him to stop 😛
Daksh; kya hua?😲
Naina points at ice wala, ..
DAKSH ; acha..ice?? naina gets down and gets two ice for her and daksh.Daksh gets down cycle, cycle ka stand lagaya, phir dono ne ice khane mein lag gaye(Y naina got two ice is public place haina)😉

Naina looks at daksh and starts laughing😆
Naina; Daksh, ye kya tareek hain ice khaane ka..apne kapde kharab kar rahi ho  bilkul chote bacho ki tarah..

Daksh looks at his shirt kahi khai par ice girke..thoda gheele hogaye; 

Daksh; woh kya haina..mujhe itni aadat nahi hein ye sab khaane ka..iss liye..aur jyada haso mat..seekh javunga...tumhare saath jo hoo.
😆

Ice khana khatam hogaya😉..again they continue..their cycle trip.now daksh stops the cycle.he asks naina to get down...

Daksh; naina..ek min..cycle pakdo abhi aata hoon
Naina; lekin kaha jaa rahe ho?daksh with our giving an answer handover cycle to naina and goes some where

Naina is waiting for daksh, looks at her watch. Daksh comes and says ; naina

Naina lil angry turns back and is surprised; daksh ke haath mein love shaped balloons aur bunch of red roses😍
Naina;( excited tone) ye sab kuch mere liye??😛
Daksh; jee nahi; woh waha par ek ladki bete hain uss ke liye;😆😆

 naina changes her expression😡

Daksh..of course tumhare liye jaan..😉,pulls her cheek lovingly..mujhe par aur mere surprises par sirf tumhara haq hain..❤️.
Naina; ( super excited)oh daksh...I love u❤️ and hugs him🤗.daksh kisses on her fore head.😳.; luv u too

Kuch dher ghoome ke baad, they come back return the cycle and comes back to station.Daksh takes ticket this time

Naina; agar phir se wahi TC milgaya tho?
Daksh;( with lot of confidence) kuch nahi hoga..ab hamare paas ticket hain😛

Train  aagaya..both get into train.😛.and relax( after all they had long tiring day)sleeping on ecah others shoulders.🥱.thank god woh TC nahi tha..doosra tha...😉

They reach their room..😉
                                                                                                       cONTD...

PS;Sirf din kahatm hua hein😳..raat ki surprise abhi baaki hain😉( naina ka)

Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Dakshna cycle trip - contd❤️

Dakshna on cycle.ghoomne nikalgaye.suddenly naina asks him to stop 😛
Daksh; kya hua?😲
Naina points at ice wala, ..
DAKSH ; acha..ice?? naina gets down and gets two ice for her and daksh.Daksh gets down cycle, cycle ka stand lagaya, phir dono ne ice khane mein lag gaye(Y naina got two ice is public place haina)😉

Naina looks at daksh and starts laughing😆
Naina; Daksh, ye kya tareek hain ice khaane ka..apne kapde kharab kar rahi ho  bilkul chote bacho ki tarah..

Daksh looks at his shirt kahi khai par ice girke..thoda gheele hogaye; 

Daksh; woh kya haina..mujhe itni aadat nahi hein ye sab khaane ka..iss liye..aur jyada haso mat..seekh javunga...tumhare saath jo hoo.
😆

Ice khana khatam hogaya😉..again they continue..their cycle trip.now daksh stops the cycle.he asks naina to get down...

Daksh; naina..ek min..cycle pakdo abhi aata hoon
Naina; lekin kaha jaa rahe ho?daksh with our giving an answer handover cycle to naina and goes some where

Naina is waiting for daksh, looks at her watch. Daksh comes and says ; naina

Naina lil angry turns back and is surprised; daksh ke haath mein love shaped balloons aur bunch of red roses😍
Naina;( excited tone) ye sab kuch mere liye??😛
Daksh; jee nahi; woh waha par ek ladki bete hain uss ke liye;😆😆

 naina changes her expression😡

Daksh..of course tumhare liye jaan..😉,pulls her cheek lovingly..mujhe par aur mere surprises par sirf tumhara haq hain..❤️.
Naina; ( super excited)oh daksh...I love u❤️ and hugs him🤗.daksh kisses on her fore head.😳.; luv u too

Kuch dher ghoome ke baad, they come back return the cycle and comes back to station.Daksh takes ticket this time

Naina; agar phir se wahi TC milgaya tho?
Daksh;( with lot of confidence) kuch nahi hoga..ab hamare paas ticket hain😛

Train  aagaya..both get into train.😛.and relax( after all they had long tiring day)sleeping on ecah others shoulders.🥱.thank god woh TC nahi tha..doosra tha...😉

They reach their room..😉
                                                                                                       cONTD...

PS;Sirf din kahatm hua hein😳..raat ki surprise abhi baaki hain😉( naina ka)

From romantic FFs to Fun FFs!!!!!!!!!!😆 sooo cute!!!!! great job lucky great job!!!!!!!!!👏 Naina is so good at making daksh do things he never intended to do huh??i really hope this happens in real SSBN!! Karela Patwardhan riding a bicycle with a girl!!!haha🤣sweeet! yaar, whats next?
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ mysti,dakshnafan, aish and neetu

Thanks buddies...🤗🤗

Thought Some cute and fun moments between dakshna will make their honey moon special.😉Trying to maintain balance b/w potions of romance❤️ and fun😛 in FF's.

Rahi baat cycle ride ki tho😆..I thought bahut ho gaya car mein ghoomna😉..ab kuch diff try karte hain..iss liye😆

I am happy u all liked it..More cute moments coming up..😛...But romance❤️ has not taken back seat😉.😳.we will cover up both😉
Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lucky din itna accha gaya hai to raat to baki hai aur aachi jane ke liye😉... Lots of love potion of the way...😆😆😆
U again made me smile 😃 Thank u Thank u so much  😃🤗 U are amazing with rom FF as well of some light moments of Dakshna... really Loved it 👏
Ice, Cycle ride, red roses and heart shape balloons nice nice very nice concepts...😉😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
@niksidfan
waiting for next part.. jealous kp
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@ntsindia:yaa..definately..today i will surely update it...:)