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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

@niksidfan

Thanks for the compliment

And ur ff is

Very simple , lil romantic😳 and very good continution to the first scene👏..perfectly apt..but not fair yaar, dnt keep us waiting for jealous and possesive daksh..We want to meet him ASAP😉

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

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niksidfan

@niksidfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@niksidfan

Thanks for the compliment

And ur ff is


Very simple , lil romantic😳 and very good continution to the first scene👏..perfectly apt..but not fair yaar, dnt keep us waiting for jealous and possesive daksh..We want to meet him ASAP😉

hehe...yaaa...definately...yesterday only i wud have introduced him but my mood was off...after hearing some silly news about ssbn..which says its going to be off in this year only...so i was feeling really low about this show...i hope it doesnt happen

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

@ Neetu... Superb perfect scene 👏...with nice emotions 😛... Touching + equal amt of love potion of Romance to end with...(and the picture completes the whole)😳

Loved Daksh's dialogue...😛 His love for Naina 😛 Too good dear...

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: niksidfan
hehe...yaaa...definately...yesterday only i wud have introduced him but my mood was off...after hearing some silly news about ssbn..which says its going to be off in this year only...so i was feeling really low about this show...i hope it doesnt happen

Ur FF is really sweet and cute Niksidfan😊... Loved it 👏 ... perfect scene😉... I am enjoying the +ve Rohini in ur FF...😛

But don't do like CV's of SSBN and make us all wait for Jealous Dakshu yaar... 😍

@ Bold

Is it true... thats bad yaar SSBN has not yet completed one year also... this is all b'cos of intro of this Sonakshi track... TRP's only show the result of SSBN...

But still they have so many things to unfold... 😔

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niksidfan

@niksidfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Ur FF is really sweet and cute Niksidfan😊... Loved it👏... perfect scene😉... I am enjoying the +ve Rohini in ur FF...😛
But don't do like CV's of SSBN and make us all wait forJealous Dakshu yaar...😍

@ Bold
Is it true... thats bad yaar SSBN has not yet completed one year also... this is all b'cos of intro of this Sonakshi track... TRP's only show the result of SSBN...
But still they have so many things to unfold...😔

thnks :)yaa its bound to happen...naa...these cvs are soo stupid..how can they torture the audience day aftr day...dere is a limit..dey have sidelined the main most loved characters to give way to this most worthless character named sonakshi...uff..anyways lets see what happens

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Contd...

After bhagam bhag from station😆

They both run for some time..stop at some place look at ecah other..and laugh heartily.😃for long time remembering their act,,

Naina; daksh tum ne tho aaj..kya jaroorat thi last mein bholne ki?

Daksh;pehli baar ki hisaab se maine bahut acha kiya👏

Naina;lekin maan na padega..tum tho bahut acha acting karlete ho..not bad👏

Daksh looks at naina( naughty look). kya kare?.boora sangat ka asar hain...😆

Naina; acha...hits him slowly and says; mazaa aaya??

Daksh; sach kahoo. bahut mazaa aaya! aur tumne uss TC ka chehra dekha..gusse se lal hogaya tha🤣..acha hua hum bahg gaye warna pata nahi kya karta..maan gaye aap ko mrs.patwardan..lekin...yahi first aur last time..agali baar bina ticket ke kabhi nahi..ok

Naina; haan baba..pakka..agali baar se ticket le kar hi jayenge...

After few min

Naina; daksh bahut pyaas lag rahi hein

Daksh looks around ; ek min..he goes to near by shop and gets paani ka bottle, opens the cap and gives it to naina.Naina drinks and gives it to daksh..

Daksh; aage ka kya programme hain?

Naina; aur kya? ghoomne jayenge😛

Daksh; arey lekin kaise? 😲gaadi tho doosra station mein reh gaya?Paidal jayenga kya?

Naina; kisne kaha sirf gaadi ya paidal ghoom sakte hain..mere paas ek aur idea hain..woh dekho,😛 daksh looks at that direction, he sees a guy going on cycle.

Daksh; kya? cycle pe?😲lekin ab cycle kaha se milega? looks at naina and says; chori karvane ka irada tho nahi haina naina.🤣.main aur bhag nahi sakta😆

Naina; Naa chori karne ki jaroorat hein ..naa bhagne ki..yaha par ek shop hain,,jo cycle rent pr dete hain..hum waha jayenge; lekin tumhe cycle chalana tho aata hain na daksh

Daksh; ye bhi koi poochnewali baat hain..of course aata hain..Lekin tumhe kaisa pata yaha ye shop hein..mujhse pehle kisi aur ke saath.. bhi( naughty look)😆

naina; haan haan , ..iss cycle shop wala ke saath mera deal hain.😆.iss liye (smiles

..mein darjeeling se hoon, mujhe nahi pata hoga..tho kya tumhe pata hoga?

daksh;maan gaye..ab chale

Both go searching for shop, find it and take a cycle on rent...daksh checks if everything is fine(lawyer hain na) and after getting assured he sits on the cycle, cute trade mark smile😛 and looks at naina

Daksh; tho..chale safar par mere humsafar..

Naina smiles at daksh's words, nods her head and sits infront of daksh on rod of cycle.😍.rings the bell..daksh smiles...phir dono ghoomne gaye...cycle par😍

http://www.123rf.com/photo_8232700_portrait-of-attractive-young-couple-on-bike-outdoor-in-a-park.html

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Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Awesome Lucky 😛 Good I read this now ... And it made me smile 😃

Just loved the whole scene 😉 Thanks bud 🤗

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Awesome Lucky 😛 Good I read this now ... And it made me smile 😃
Just loved the whole scene 😉 Thanks bud 🤗

ditto here...

lucky yar thnku sooo much🤗...made me smile phir se😊

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Neethu

@ntsindia

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

thanks guys..

Lucky,
wow.. its so funny..

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#440

Dakshna cycle trip - contd❤️

Dakshna on cycle.ghoomne nikalgaye.suddenly naina asks him to stop 😛

Daksh; kya hua?😲

Naina points at ice wala, ..

DAKSH ; acha..ice?? naina gets down and gets two ice for her and daksh.Daksh gets down cycle, cycle ka stand lagaya, phir dono ne ice khane mein lag gaye(Y naina got two ice is public place haina)😉

Naina looks at daksh and starts laughing😆

Naina; Daksh, ye kya tareek hain ice khaane ka..apne kapde kharab kar rahi ho bilkul chote bacho ki tarah..

Daksh looks at his shirt kahi khai par ice girke..thoda gheele hogaye;

Daksh; woh kya haina..mujhe itni aadat nahi hein ye sab khaane ka..iss liye..aur jyada haso mat..seekh javunga...tumhare saath jo hoo.

😆

http://www.inmagine.com/sd140/157922sdc-photo

Ice khana khatam hogaya😉..again they continue..their cycle trip.now daksh stops the cycle.he asks naina to get down...

Daksh; naina..ek min..cycle pakdo abhi aata hoon

Naina; lekin kaha jaa rahe ho?daksh with our giving an answer handover cycle to naina and goes some where

Naina is waiting for daksh, looks at her watch. Daksh comes and says ; naina

Naina lil angry turns back and is surprised; daksh ke haath mein love shaped balloons aur bunch of red roses😍

Naina;( excited tone) ye sab kuch mere liye??😛

Daksh; jee nahi; woh waha par ek ladki bete hain uss ke liye;😆😆

naina changes her expression😡

Daksh..of course tumhare liye jaan..😉,pulls her cheek lovingly..mujhe par aur mere surprises par sirf tumhara haq hain..❤️.

Naina; ( super excited)oh daksh...I love u❤️ and hugs him🤗.daksh kisses on her fore head.😳.; luv u too

Kuch dher ghoome ke baad, they come back return the cycle and comes back to station.Daksh takes ticket this time

Naina; agar phir se wahi TC milgaya tho?

Daksh;( with lot of confidence) kuch nahi hoga..ab hamare paas ticket hain😛

Train aagaya..both get into train.😛.and relax( after all they had long tiring day)sleeping on ecah others shoulders.🥱.thank god woh TC nahi tha..doosra tha...😉

They reach their room..😉

cONTD...

PS;Sirf din kahatm hua hein😳..raat ki surprise abhi baaki hain😉( naina ka)

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago