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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ehsaas

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No need to mention the characters they r as sweet, sadoo and nat khate as they were in mjht 😉

Part 1

After college timing, on their way to home they were walking as usual. Mayank was very silent, lost in his thoughts and Nupur was noticing………..

Suddenly Nupur looked at him and very sweetly asked him

Nupur : tum ne kuch kaha kya?

He looked at her and then after a second pause, in lil serious tone said

Mayank: Mera mun khula kya ?

Nupur ( surprisd by the ans, but calmly): Nahi !

Mayank (with irritating & questioning look ,this time): Chala kya ?

Nupur(more innocently0 : Nahi to !

Mayank: to tum ne kaise sun liya ??? I m sure nupur , tmhare kaan baaj rahe hain :D

Nupur (looked at him weirdly): Oho Mayank ! main mu ki nahi maan ki bhasha ki baat kar rahi thi, ( then with smile ) jaise ankhon ki bhasha hoti hai waise hi :P maan ki bhasha……….

Mayank smiled feeling how his love hear his inner voice J but then suddenly coming to his total sadoo look he said,

Mayank: Oho to mis nupur bhushan maan ki bhasha bhi janti hain ! :-/

Nupur(burst outin her nupurish unique style) : nahi,nahi mujhe kya pata maan ki bhasha kya hoti hai, kyun k sari intelligence to tum main koot koot k bhari hai ,Hamen kaun ghas dalega !

She said the last sentence very formally.

Mayank( with a question in his eyes and smile on his face): tumhe job hi ghas dalega na ….wo to bilkul hi PAGAL hoga……ByGod ! :D

Nupur (stil controlling her anger): Wo kyuun ??? :O

Nupur's question made him laugh evn more, he came lil close to her, looked at nupur with folding his hands

Mayank: Kyun ki…….(taking a pause)

Nupur(getting damn chirchiri): kyun ki ????

Mayank(serious): kyun ki Nupur ! shakal se to tum insano ki hi koi type lagti ho :D :D

He burst out laughing "Tum ne ghas khana kubse shuru kiya ?" he was laughing with his billion watt smile.

When Nupur saw him laughing so much and happy a smile crept on her face too J coz she was feeling so good for him. When Mayank saw her smiling he continued the convo saying

Mayank: Nupur! Ek baat puchun ?

Nupur: Phir se to….aisa wiasa……??

Mayank (very normaly): Nahiii……

Nupur : to pucho jo puchna hai !

Mayank: Nupur !( took a deep breath and looked at Nupur with concern)

Nupur geastured "what"

Mayank: Nupur ! agr koi bhi kabhi bhi tumhe ( more concern voice) , ghas dalega to kya tm mujhe chor k chali jaogi ? (serious)………………………..(burst out laughing) GHAS khane :D :D :D

Nupur (in quite serious tone) : Nahi Mayank !!

Mayank hearing so much concern in her voice stood there looking deep into her eyes, now with a beautiful smile asked,

Mayank ; Kyun ?

Nupur(very sweetly): kyun k Mayank 1 main use tumhare liye………….(aftr a pause)………..yahin le aungi :D

Now nupur was laughing and Mayank was confused,

Mayank : kise

Nupur( Laughing): Ghas ko mayank :D

Mayank(now in shock): Kya ?

Nupur(controlling her smile): Han na Mayank, Ab tum ghas ko itna chahoge to lani to paregi na ! (then continued saying laughng ) kya Mayank ! kub se ghas khane ki baten kiye jarahe ho……..Wiase anty ne tumhe ghas khilani kub se shuru ki?

Now Mayank getting lil embarrassed but nupur ek baar shuru ho jaye to rukti kahan hai

Nupur: ByGod Mayank ! mujhe pata hota k tumhe ghas itni pasand hai to aaj ghas sath leke ati ………..waise bhi hamare garden ki ghas kafi barh chuiki hai :D

Mayank(getting irritated): Kya Nupur, tum bhi na……..

Nupur(cutting mayank's sentence ) : Oh main !! ……….. han mayank ghas k ilawa main bhi yahin hun….(with so much love) ….. tumhe abhi ehsas huwa !

Mayank didn't understand what she said, stil confused

Mayank: Nupur !

Nupur looked at him and then noticed that they reached her home.

Nupur(lil sadly): ok Mayank Gudnite

Mayank( stil confused); hmm han gud nite

Kal milte hain

Nupur turned to see him ,he was stil standing there then she entered her home.

All his way to home Mayank was thinking of what Nupur said and what was the possible meaning…….all lost he rang the bel of his home. Mayank's Maa opened the door

Maa; Hi Mayu ! J

Mayank: hmm hi Maa…

Maa(noticing he was disturbd): Mayu kya huwa ?

Mayank: Kuch nai Maa…..

Maa : Acha bol khane min kya khayega ?

Mayank was going through wat Nupur said, the sentence " ghas k ilawa main bhi yahen hun"

Mayank (All lost in thoughts): Ghas !

Maa(shocked): Kyaaa??

Maa al surprised at what Mayank said and mayank noticing what actualy sliped out of his tongue

Maa(coming towards him): Mayu! Beta ghas khani kubse shuru kardi tu ne ?

Mayank( trying to control situation said): Nahi maa ! wo actualy i mean…… (he was short of words :D)…………Nupur………(oh stop again at what he actualy said now)

Maa(start smiling0: Oh ab samjhi Nupur ne ghas…….

Mayank(lil disturb tone) : bus karo Maa, Nupur ne kuch nai kiya !….…pehle hi meri samajh main kuch nai aaha aur tm ho k !

Maa: tabhi to ! tujhe khane ko pehle ghas to phr Nupur chahiye 😆😃

Mayank(warning tone) : Maaa!

Maa: acha acha wo chor! Aur bata kya huwa .ku tense hai ??

Mayank : Batata hun per pehle promise karo tum hasogi nahi 😲

Maa : guarantee to nahi deti per…….(seeing mayank's angry geusture )………..ok ok nahi hasungi.tu bol to

Mayank: Maa ! aaj wo jab……

Maa(cutting his sentence): Ek minute Mayu aisa kart u fresh ho ja ! tabtak main khana banati hun phir araam se baat karte hain……theek

Mayank (lil relaxed) : ok Maa………(while getting up to go)…………… Main fresh hota hun tum acha sa khana banana…..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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helo i m ha_sS . my previous id at IF was soul10 😭 lost it...plz do coment and my frnds like ammu, tuli, and others paleeez do send me req i cant find u 😡 its horrible to get started again 😉
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nice part...

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hey great start plzz update soon
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Nice start :-) total ghaswala updt...lol...continue soon :-) plz add me in ur pm list :-)

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