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harianjana

@harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: palak13
mindblowing hari loved the little nok jhok with radev and then the teasing all of them had it was awesome and the talk with kanha that was superb really loved it too gd update soon and thanks for the pm

palak i was realy in a funny mood and thats why showing radh in the way i want to show , coming to the talk with kanha i always love cb not only becoz of avina but a lso becoz of kanha factor, so will never miss kanha in my updat.

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harianjana

@harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

@ suhasikaran thanks yaar

@dairy25 thanks yaar

@anu17 thanks di and u know na as i am sweet my updates also will be sweet

@radev85 thanks dear

@ak4423766463 thanks a lot for ur comment and here's ur next update will be in five minutes

@Myra.nelly thnks yaar

@meenaluma i think this is the ifrts time u are commenting on my ff thanks for folloqing my ff

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harianjana

@harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

HASISHI, imissouri, radev85, ak4423766463, masumasrilanka, maia22, ekta-avinafan, palak13, -pratyasha-, set_raj, anu17,

hanks a lot for likng the part and also to myra becoz she can't press the like buton. wish i could get some more likes

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harianjana

@harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Radev in the college

Radhika woke up uneasily as the sunrays falled on her face , yawning she sawed at watch and was quickly allerted "omg 8:30 kanah ye tum ne kya kiya"

She quicky got ready and rushed the downstairs straight into kitchen asking for her breakfats

Vaishali:teri breakfast table pe hain, teri tabiyat toh thik hain na"

Radhika looked at vaishali in confusion and asked "yeah why"

Vaishali:"waise pooch rahi hun, tum aaj bahut jaldi vutaya na is liye"

Radhika:"are u thinking to be sarcastic with me , nothing like that i am late as i slept late"

Vaishali:okay

Radhika:bye bye

Vaishali:tho\da aur khalo

Radhika:i am getting late

Radhika rushed out of maindoor and as if forgetting some thing she stopped there and rushed back to the mandir place and folded her hands infront of kanha and then went to daadima and touched her feet as if seeking blessings and went off.

Vaishali gave a big sigh and said to daadima"maa ye ladki bhi na, ek toofan ki taraf hi"

Daadima: that makes her unique vaishali.

BOth smiled and got back to their works.

At college...

Dev sat in first row and every one hwo came in were seeing at him with enthusiasm.

Guy1"ye dev k kya hua, Radhika se ek baar dance kiya toh ye soch rahe ki Radhika vusse apne bench mein baithne dogi"

Guy2:"thats impossible tum ne ramesh ko kya hua yaad hain na , ek baar jakar radhika ke saath baithne ka risk kiya and got a slap from her in retunr"

Guy1: yeah Radhika will never let any guy sit with her, only rarly she allows arshad or eswar or varun

Guy2: they all are best friends yaar

Guy1: saari ladkiyan ye dev se miln ki aur vus se friends banae ki kosish karte hain , but why this dev is after Radhika.

Guy2: dekho dekho Ramesh fir se dev ko warn kar rahe hain

Ramesh went to dev and saud "so Dev i pity u man"

Dev looked at Ramsh in confusion "why???"

Ramesh:"U are getting slap from Radhika na that's why"

Dev "why"

Ramesh:"I already said u that Radhika will never allow any guy to sit with her.

Dev smiled and get back into his work

The whole class was discussing abt this only, just then a red colour posh car came into college, Radhika got out of it wearing a red colour chudidaar with a tensed face.

Radhika came running into th class room and as usual came and sit in her bench.

The whoe class was looking with enthusiasm to Radhika's bench.

Guy1:"ye rahika ko koi reacton nahi hain kyun"

GUy2:"ma be she didn't see him yet"

Radhika was taking deep brethes realising it dev took waterbotle from his bag and gave t to her,

Dev:"take this"

Radhika took the waterbottle and drank it fastly, Just then she realised that a guy was sitting behin her and looke to that side with anger. but met dev's smiling face.Just then Radhika remembered that Dev was studying in same college.

Radhika:hi

Dev:thank god mujhe dekha tumne

Radhika:tum ne mujhe subah kyun nahi vutaaya, mera room tere room ke paas hi na ,mujhe vuta sakte na

Dev:wo wo cool , ab mujhe kyun blame kar rahe ho, waise hi miss.sharma aap saari rat soya nahi hain, night crawler ke taraf aur subah late vutne se koi problm nahi.

Radhika looked at dev with surprise:"tujhe kaise maaloom hain ki main kal raat nahi soya tha"

Dev:maine raa ke beech paani ke iye bahar aay tha tab teri room se kuch aawaaz suna tha aur samajh gaya ki tumne nahi soya.

Radhika smiled at him an then asked "waise ye tum asmi ki jagah kyun liya hain"

Dev:"kyn ki aapki asmith vuski arshad ke saath baithna chahti hain

Radhika looked back at asmi and then noticed the whole section looking at them enthusiastically

Asmi annd remaining were sitting in the back row of radh. Radhika in order to normalse the situation spoke with them in a normal smiling tone, but still the whole section was surprised to see radhika's atitude to dev. The guys were cursing dev for his good luck and the girls were tntrumming abt radh's attotude to dev.

Then another girl entered the clas Radhika looked at her and said "vishaka di"

Dev who was all the time chating with the firends and laughing looked at the door and the expression on his face was hangedfrom a present one to an angry one as soon as he saw Vishaka.

Radhika smiled at Vishaka but Vishaka ignored her and went back to sit with Ria.

Radhika felt hurt. Dev noticed it and turned to look at his friends who were aving the same shocked angry expression.

As the teacher came to class every one was silent. Through out the class Radev dicussed with each other as Radh found some difficulties to cope up with the class"

After the class Prinipla entered the room

Principal"dear students we had a new admission to our college today, she is Vishaka Sharma. "

Vishaa stood up . Principal continued " Vishaka sharma was from stanford university and she came here to continue her last year . Hope u all co-poperate with her. " Then looked at Radhika with a chuckele and said "Radhika"

Radhika:"yes sir."

Principal"HOpe u help Vishaka in he rstudies"

Radhika was abt to answer when Vishaa laughed out louder

Principal:"wht happened miss.vishaka"

Vishaka:"nothing sir, U are saying Radhika to help me na that's why i can't control my laugh"

Principal glared at vishaka and then left saying "every body continue with ur work"

Radhika's friends can no more tolerate this and Arshad asked vishaka"why u are laughing"

Vishaka:"mno arshad, I laughed becoz , how come Radhika jaise log yaha aate hain, mba padne keliye aur waise bhi prince is saying em to take help of a nerd like radhika"

Arshad:"nerd"

Vishaka:"college ko chudidaar mein aane wale lo ko aur kya kehte hain"

Arshad;"shut u ----"

Radhika:stop it arshad.

Arshad:Radhuuu

Radhia: please stop it arshad don't foget that vishaka is my sister

Vishaka who was laughing all the way stopped laughing and said "hey who was ur sister, not me . U are a orphan just remember it."

Radhika was in tears now and left out of class room silently excusing her self having some head ache.

Dev noticed that she was upset and followed her.

Edited by harianjana - 14 years ago

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harianjana

@harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

friends here i updated my part 15 and hope u all like it

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vaishali

@ak4423766463

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

i liked it very much👏but it looks like short update.anyway it was really good😃thanku very much for u update and pm👏

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Cristina Hriscu

@instcris

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

I like your story, Hari! Although Radhika make every effort to adapt to the new group of students to be nice for Vishaka, that bed girl not at all appreciate the generous gesture of Radhika, and it makes chicanes. But... Dev is on the side to Radhika!