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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srirad

Wonderful update...👏

Again geet rude behaviour😲...Poor maan he is not expecting after that day..😆
Really what is she.❓.Eagerly want to known her..
Precap Sound interesting..Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊

Thnx a lot dear , for your lovely commentSmile
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved part 5 n 6...

geet enjoyed with maan...

n the next day...again became cold...mayb coz she is feeling something which she doesnt want to...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

n sorry for the late comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

loved part 5 n 6...


geet enjoyed with maan...

n the next day...again became cold...mayb coz she is feeling something which she doesnt want to...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

n sorry for the late comment...

Ahh..Thnx a lot for ur wonderful comment😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 7
Maan was totally disgusted with her behaviour, !!!

He went into his room , thoughts of her were now becoming unavoidable for him her eyes ,her smile , her anger were now becoming a part of his thoughts.

But this time her behaviour was ridiculous..!!! He desperately wanted to divert his thoughts , he opened his laptop he opened the folders of his previous works,and his present work , he saw them and closed his eyes!!!

"Damn!! What's happening with me , it's not the firt time i'm visiting a village and capturing the life of it..!! but now i haven't even started my work properly ,i'm not even indulging in the lives of these people , i hardly know anyone here, the pace of my work became so slow!!! And this is all because i keep on thinking about a girl who don't even have the manners to speak , common Maan just stop thinking about this girl!!!!

Thinking this he looked at the screen of his laptop which was displaying the first picture of Geet!!! He looked at it, he knew that even though he hates her behaviour at times , she has something that attracts him towards her!!

He snapped out from his thoughts and closed his laptop..!!!

He then saw Maya aunty coming towards him

Hi ma'am

So Maan how is your work going on??

Very good !!

Maan i have a request ,

Sure ma'am

Actually i have seen your work you are wonderful we are taking some children to an excursion and if you have no problems i would like you to accompany us ,your way of observing things is so good , i just want you to spend some of the time with the children and share your views, they all would love your company and surely enjoy it.

Only if you are ok with it.!!

"Of course ma'am it would be my pleasure

Thank u beta, bye

Saying this she went away

That afternoon has been a very tiering experience for him it was very hot there , sun was dazzling over him , he sat on a bench drinking water ,just then he saw an old lady who was cleaning the roads ,and the same time was begging around. She was badly sweating she wasn't even able to walk properly. Maan took her to a dhaba went near her, made her sit on a bench of the dhaba , talked to her sweetly in a very polite manner . He gave her water to drink and ordered a thali for her, she was delighted to see such good food in front of her , she ate it as she didn't have proper food for weeks , she was so happy and delighted to have the food and Maan smiled looking at the way she was enjoying the meal but at the same time felt bad for her ,just then he got an important call and went to attend it .

After attending it , he saw Geet near the old lady

"What is she doing here??"

He saw the old lady puking there

"Oh my..!!"

He ran towards her , just to see Geet offering her water and cleaning her mouth and her saree!! She took absolute care of her, she helped her like she was her own family , There was no disgust or displeasure on her face .

He went near them "She was patting her back and made her comfortable"

"Aap thik to hai"

The old lady gave no response

He looked at Geet

She looked at him and answered him very politely

"She is ok now , don't worry ,may be it's because she's been working hard and now this food... ,

She saw him offering food for her

Anyways she is alright now , but it would be better if we take her back to her house"

With the help of some other villagers they dropped the old lady to her house

After dropping her , they came out

"Working like this in this age is not good " said Geet in a worried tone

Maan looked at her.

"Yeah you are right , i know an institution which is located in a town nearby , they take of all the old people , not only old but also those who don't have the ability to support themselves ,we can take her there, so that she don't get to face such problems in the future"

Geet's eyes brightened and she smiled at this idea , it was clearly visible that her worry was now vanished .

"Let's go"

"She cares for everybody except for me, does she find me irritating or what?? Why did she became so rude even after such a good and pleasent day?

Whenever i get angry on her rude behaviour ,some other shade of her brings me back to my same situation ,that overshadows all her attitude and rude behaviour"

Precap : Maan Geet in another town😲
Precap : -Shut up Geet!!
-I'm sorry Maan😭
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Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part
continue soon😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
continue soon...
thanks 4r pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part. u described the feelings well. thanks for the update and pm

precarp is interesting pls continue soon.


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Posted: 13 years ago
GREAT PART AND INTERESTING PRECAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
even i am wondering as to why geet is behaving strangely with maan and is very nice with others,,,
may be she hates men opr has undergone something painful that makes her weary of men or maan😉
lovely update
loved it
keep writing
lve u and ur SS
reva
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...

maan is intrigued by the person he cant seem to forget...

loved how he helped the old lady n now will b taking her to some other place...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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