OS | The Ski Trip - Page 5

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

Lovely OS...

Loved prem and heer, their romance and confession..

Thanks for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the OS 😃

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Thanks for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the OS 😃

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Sorry Divya this is just a OS.

But I have other SSs and a couple other OSs in mind so I'll keep writing 😃

wow! surely cnt wa8 2 read those...!!!! 😳 thnku so much Grace..!! u rock!👏⭐️

Guess who!

Comment on page 6 thats the longest comment ull probably be ever getting from me 😆

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX

Guess who!

Hey Grace...im commenting after like 3 months of u writing this...n im sooo touched that u wrote this for me whilst i was in hospital...ur a true friend n im blessed to have u all girls at the CC.

Thank uuu sooo much Grace n guess wht i find myself to be lucky that u wrote a OS for me 😎

Simply coz im the first person u wrote one for n ill always be number 1

Grace i love u 🤗

Now b4 we both get all senti lemme comment on this fab OS!

Now im sorry i took sooo long to comment on it...u always asked me if i read it n i always sed ive read this much n that much so today i sat down and read the whole OS all in one go.

Now i hope my comment does Justice coz i dont think it has at all.

Ok here goes.

I really loved the beginning Grace!

U descrbed the hospital room and then recaped wht had happened to Heer. she was very worred about "him" and what he must have been thinking about her falling down the hill.

Reading this reminded me of mine n Nabz' convos when i used to tell her that im gna be going skiing soon n that i was scared i wudnt cum back alive either 😆 buh fortunately i made it back safe n sound n here i am commenting on this OS u have written for me 🤣

Next part wow u described her pain sooo well...like how she felt n all...what was her reaction n all was penned down like sooo well. U shud really write a book! Im serious 😳 Ok back to where i was. Even tho she was in pain she was still worried about wht he was thinking.

N aww Preet his sooo sweet even now...I love him sooo much...n Meher they are always together where ever they go n i loved Preet's sarcastic comment to her question. It really did crack me up 😆 Hes a joker!

N the typical mother Teji. Dunno why buh her entry cracked me up. The way u described her n all...tho i shudnt be laughing coz my mums condition was worser than this when the ambulance had taken me to the hospoital bless her i understand what Teji must be going thru coz ive seen my very own mother go thru it 😭

N Heer being like me...wants to be indepent and live in her own house to her own accord...tho my parents say i have to wait till i go to uni 😆 not very long till that happens.

N Lalit seems nice here. N wow hes a friend of Balraaj Maan. Meaning Heers father. Wow what a coincidence never knew that wud happen. Im glad they know each other no problems for them to get Heer and Prem married 😉

He got special treatment done for Heer. Lucky her her future Father-in-law is very nice. Taking care of his bahu already. N im glad that the families get along well.

Loved Preet and Meher's lil fight about studies. Lolz Preeti being a straight C student really doesnt care about education where as Meher on the other hand does and now Preet and Meher are up for WWIII 😆

N Heer being sooo lucky had all her class mates come to visit her apart from prem 😔

N u have Sanjana in this story 😡 arrgghhh she better not be up to sumfink or else i will kill her wiv my bare hands! Im serious n Gayatri is their school chaperone 🤣 is she not Preet and Prem's mother? Like she does have the Juneja surname so now this has confused me!

Hmm maybe as the story processes well see and hear more about her. But this Sanjana annoyed me. The first thing she says after she comes in is that prem will not be comming because hes gotta take pics for the year book.

N what was in that letter prem has sent forr Gay3 n im glad she didnt let the others esp Sanjana see what was written init...jeez people can be sooo nosey 🤣

Now who entered the room? 😲 I think i know who it is 😆 But i wont say well have sum suspense right 🤣

Ahhh he wanted to steal a kiss from hern😲 Bad boy 😆😆😆 u shudnt do that thats not Prem 🤣 🤣 But well allow just him 🤣

N his heart dropped when he had seen her fall...poor him...well he aint gna let that happen again. Not whilst hes around with her.

Aww he likes her 🥳 if only he could tell her...buh him being all shy n all couldnt gather the courage...buh still he likes her 🥳 n he wanted to look good in front of her and her fam 🤣

Prem ILY 😆 He kissed her forehead buh by the way she suddenly opened her eyes also scared me 😳 like a light switch. Prem dud if u love her go n tell her!

Aww they got along really well n Prem's signing her cast n Heer trying to start a convo wiv him 😳 well atleast prem let his feelings out about being really woried n all.

Prem helped her to the bathroom...like did picked her up in his arms

Now here starts the love saga of Premeer 😆

THEY KISSED ☺️ <--- My reactions 🤣

Lobed the interaction b/w prem n heer. Prem asking her questions n then Heer answering and then vice versa. Lolz n Heer getting jealous coz of Sanjana! Heer sweety ur 1000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000* times better than Sanjana u dont need to worry at all n now that u have Prem aswell.

N the end was sooo good...coz Heer had got her Prem...n im glad i had the surgery too coz then i wudnt have got to read such an awsome OS tho i wud hate to go in to Hospital again. Once is fine for me 😆

Once again...thank u sooo much for writing this for me!

Im obliged to have a friend like u!

Love u 345654567890876543213456789 times xxx

Hi Preeti,

Anything for a friend. I'm just happy you enjoyed reading the OS. And yes you are the very first one to receive an OS gift from me. You should feel very special

Thank you so much for the long comment

Preet and Meher fighting like children is what makes them such a fun couple

Teji being the typical mother. Aww, you Mama was really worried about you when you left to the hospital

Gayatri is Prem and Preet's mom but she just happens to be the chaperone of the class trip. That is why Prem wrote a note to her to let her know where he was and that he was going to come back to the hospital later to visit Heer.

And yes Prem was being a naughty boy trying to kiss Heer but he's in love...he can't help himself

It was my pleasure to write this OS for you. I'm just glad everything went well for you and now you're back and healthy again

Lots of Luv,
Grace