OS | The Ski Trip - Page 3

Originally posted by: maryaa8688

awww its really very sweet Grace..loved reading it..keep writing more

..missing prem heer very badly nowadays...😭

Originally posted by: ...Harshiti...

Grace that was an awesome OS! Totally LOVED it ❤️

-Reserved-

will get back soon 😳

I'm not that late Grace 😎 😆

okay so that was an awesome OS...

very unique idea, everything was very well wirtten 👏

My fav part was where prem tells heer to not tell sanjana and Heer was like don't worry i won't and prem teasing her she was jealous 😆, but Prem's reply was incredibly sweet when he said No need to worry abot other's, he is her's now 😳

so many Premeer PHiss together *Phead* 😍 😍 😍

Do write more OS's Grace...

Thankx for the Pm😃

Originally posted by: SongsOf_Silence

Hey Grace😊 Thanks for the pm.. the OS was very well written ⭐️ I really liked the idea of ski trip and Heer getting into an accident. it was quite innovative and i liked it 😊 keep it up!

Hiba

Originally posted by: deepa101

Loved ur one shot such a cute little scene😳😊

Originally posted by: athisdagrh

Grace this is an awesome OS 👍🏼

I saw this on Preeti's Get Well thread. Very nice gift for her. First time reading your OS in the forum. I saw one on PHFC when you updated there. That was cute too. Thanks.

Originally posted by: Aymee

I hate to do this to Grace. But I have to.

Reserved.

I will come back tomorrow morning and comment. Yeah, I know, how can I reserve a one shot 😆

******************************************** Me back *****************************************

Unreserved. 😃

As always Grace this was another great OS. Great job.

I loved how Heer was trying to impress Prem at the ski slopes but it is a shame she took that horrible tumble.

Preet and Meher scenes was very cute.

Prem admiring Heer while she was sleeping was very sweet. Poor Prem and his temptation to kiss Heer at that moment.

I loved the scene they shared. And those kisses. I am so proud of Heer for quieting Prem with a kiss. She knew he was going to say something she didn't want to hear and something he will regret.

I am so glad, he realized how annoying Sanjana can be. LOL, even in your one shot Grace, Sanjana can be a pain.😆

Thank you for the PM. I think it was really sweet of you to make this OS for Preeti. You are really a nice and sweet friend to her.

Originally posted by: charmingprem

its a wonderfull os.no wonder u r a fab writer,please countinue this.😊

Originally posted by: newt2007

Wonderful OS Grace.
Thanks for this writing.

you really brought two lovers. Thought about each other is so sweet.
Grace how did you wrote perfectly like two lovers think in initial stages. Their love, fear and expressions are so perfect.

Every bad things has something good.

Heer broke her leg to get her Prem.

Originally posted by: deshdeewani

again another wonderful OS.

Grace!i have no words to praise u, u r simply an auswam writer.

every thing is just perfect.please countinue it.pleaseee.😊

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

awesome one grace , superbly written😃, Thanks for the pm

loved the Prem and❤️ Heer confession, their romance it was short and lovelyy Os great job keep 👍🏼it up waitingg for more

Originally posted by: rhtpkcm

awesomee...a very original and sweet idea

hope to read many of your one shots, SS's and FF's soon

Originally posted by: ...Pwincess...

edited

Awesome grace 😳

loved Premeers romance

prem just couldnt keep himself away from Her ☺️

but im glad that that kiss happened coz they were able to confess their feelings for each other

great shot👏

Originally posted by: khajju

woow tht was an awesmeee OS.
Heer being jeaolous...i likd it...preet and meher wer tooo cute...aww teji...she is soo caring.
Premeer moments wer 😍
Aaah he kissed her...i didnt thought it will be this soon...prem waitin for heer st locker...joining the same college as of heer...tht is all sooo sweet 😃
I luvd prems dialogue...'I m all urs'...sorry i dnt remember the whole dialogue 😳
Nywayzzz thanks for pm.
Keep writing mre.

Originally posted by: brainychild92

ya sanju's annoying! but that was cutee.. and i like the confession too.. adorable! "don't have to be jealous.. i'm all yours"..lol