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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta


Nope ... MAAN is NOT compared with vampo dear... have a look... Geet's dad said MAAN is not a vampo... he is too classy for a vampo


hmmm a hnsm.. rich... n classy guy like him cnt b vampo

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey galz...😊 thnks 4 ur supports...šŸ˜‰ thnks 2 all f u 4 d lovly cmnts... ur cmnts r vry precious 2 me...šŸ˜†

i'm gonna post d next part within a few mints... dnt 4gt to cmnt...😳



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Posted: 13 years ago

part 6: har doggie ka naam Tommy nahin hota


At dinner table

Geet and Armaan were eating paratha and Ridhima and Maan were eating boring pasta.

Geet: Ridhima tell me how Dr. Ridhima turned into lover Ridhima…

Armaan: it's a long story…

He looked at Ridhima romantically.

Ridhima: Haan a really looong story like Ekta mata's serial

Geet: mujhe yeh ekta mata ki serial jaisi lambi story sunni haiā€¦šŸ˜Š

Ridhima: chal I wl tell u after d dinner.

After the dinner Maan was shocked to see a servant is brining chocolate milkshake. He doesn't drink choco milk shake. Soon he finds out it was for Geet.😲

Maan self talk: pata nahi ye ghar kiska hai mera ya iss ziddi bachi ka??

He took a deep breath.

Ridhima: Geet u r drinking choco shake? U will b fat… dekhna…

Geet: I dont have to maintain eating.. I am natural beauty.. Born beauty….

Maan knew he should just keep quiet but his throat was itching to say something… finally he said

"Born beauty and born dumbo…"šŸ˜†

Geet shot an angry glare at him…

Armaan started to laugh and winked at Ridhima.šŸ˜‰

Most of the time at the dinner table Armaan and Ridhima were looking at each other romantically. They were holding each other hands under the table.

Geet was noticing them. They were just made for each other. She was dreaming about her prince charming.

Geet self talk: God even Ridz has got her prince abb mere liye bhi kisi ko bhej do na plz.. I promise I wl be a good girl friend. Apna farz nibhaungi aur badleme kuch nahin mangungi. Nana. Apni boy friend se kuch nahi mangungi? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai?


Maan looked at her in surprise. what is she doing. ye ladki sachme pagal hai, he thought.

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Geet was so lost in her self thot that she didn't noticed she was walking towards the wash room and she bumped on Maan. Geet fell on Maan. He could not manage the balance and sat on the sofa next to him and Geet on his lap. They were lost into each other's eyes for a few seconds.šŸ˜



But than their mobile rang.

Maan[angrily]: dekh ke nahin chal sakti?

Geet: oh hello? Y r u talking wd me like this? None talks to Geet like this.

They were shouting and Geet was still sitting on his lap. But none of them noticed.

Maan: karna chahiye tha.. nahin to tum jaisi pagal ko…

Geet: hey pagal kisko kaha… waise main to apni prince charming ke vare me soch rahi thi.. aap kaha se aagaye meri dream world me???? [she made her glare angrier] jao jao dust danav ki dust aatma… I dnt want u in my dream land…

Maan: kya dust danav? Mai danav dikhti hoon kya?😲

Geet: aur nahin to kya? Cinderella ki prince to nahi dikhte.. laddu jasi badi badi aankh…

Maan rolled his eyes.. "Geet"ā€¦šŸ˜”

Geet: dekha…. Kaise gol gol aankhe…

Maan: Geetā€¦šŸ˜”

Geet: main pass hi hoon sun rahi hoon… Geet aise pukar te hai jaise ki apni Tommy ko pukar rahe hai.. waise aapko bata doon har doggie ka naam Tommy nahin hota.. uska naam Rocky, Chinky, Barfi, Dolly, Ranee bhi hota hai.. samjhe?

Maan self thot: ab yeh doggie wali baat kaha se agaya? Geet was still saying the long list of names of Doggies.

Geet: Aur ha kuch log apni doggie ko…

Maan: I don't wanna hear lecture on names of doggies…

Geet: abb isme bhi problem… aapko kuch acha lagta hain ya nahi…

They would have continue fighting but they were disturbed by Armaan

Armaan cleared his throats.

Armaan: kya khichdi paak rahi hai bhai?? Dono ek duje ki baho meā€¦šŸ˜›

They noticed their sitting position and they stand up immediately.

Armaan was accompanied by Ridhima…

Ridhima: Geet tune bataya nahi…

Geet: haan main to bata na hi bhul gayi Gunjan aur Pari ke vare me.. they just called me…

Geet dragged Ridhima with her..

Armaan was looking at Maan with a smirk. Maan noticed..

Maan: Kya hua?

Armaan's smirk grew wider..😃

Maan: this gal will make me crazy

Armaan: This gal will make MK crazy…!!

Maan understood he cud not give a talk fight.. he checked the missed call.. it was from Dev.. he called back..

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Geet called Gunjan…

Geet: Hey Gunjan.. wats goin on

Gunjan: Geet di.. how r u? wait a minute..

Gunjan started to shout: Pari… Geet di ka phone..

Pari: hey Geet di how r u? we r missing u too much.. Ridhima di kaisi hai??

Gunjan: Ridima di shaadi kab ker rahi hain?

Geet: wait wait… Ridhima is with me…

Ridhima: hii galz how r u??

Pari: Fine.. how r u?

Gunjan: aur humare Armaan jiju thik hai?

Ridhima: I'm perfectly fit n fine.. Armaan s fine too.. aur shaadi bhi bahot jald kar rahe hain…

Gunjan: we r waiting.. ap shaadi kar rahe hai.. phir Geet di ka shaadi ho jayegi… phir meri shaadi ho jaye gi.. aur uske baad Pari ki..

Geet: shaadi to main bhi jald se jald karna chati hoon par ladka kaha se dhundu

Pari: Dnt worry di apka hero ayega aur apko uthke le jayega..

Geet: chal gud nite.. abb mujhe Ridz se uski prem katha sunni hai

Ridhima: Gud night galz..

Gunjan n Pari: Gud night..

They cut the phone..

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Maan: where are u guys?

Dev: we r at HawaiišŸ˜†

Maan: y? Cancelled the previous trip?

Samrat: Nope… just post pounded.. Arman aur Ridhima next time jab ayenge hun waha chale jayenge

Maan: So u both r there

Samrat: hmm.. and enjoying like hell.. but missing chashmish..

Dev: ok chalo ab phone rakhte hain.. bye.. enjoy

Maan: oye sunno.. Armaan se kya dushmani hai?

Maan could not get his answer they have already cut the phone..šŸ˜•

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Four of them were sitting at the drawing room…

Geet: Finally now its time to hear the love story.. so how did u guys meet… tell me everything…

Ridhima and Armaan looked at each other's eyes..

Armaan: ek ladki tho jo bilkul fairy jaisi dikhti thiā€¦šŸ˜

Ridhima: aur ek ladka tha.. sher jitna strong.. and as handsome as a prince..šŸ˜

Armaan: aur ek rakhsash jaisa villain tha.. us fairy ki dad..


Ridhima: wo log to ek doosre ko dekhkehi samjh gaye the ke wo dono janam janam ka saathi haišŸ˜


Armman: uss khub surat fairy ka naam tha Ridhima


Ridhima: aur wo handsome prince ka naam tha Armaan...


Armaan and Ridhima were still luking into each other's eyes. Geet and Maan looked at eachother.. Maan was thinking Huh Wat The Hell??? Geet was thinking How Romantic...šŸ˜


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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey, you updtd after so long...

Awesome part...

Doggie...tommy...lol
Funny...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful FF...I read it in one go...
thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update...
waiting for the next part to know...
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Posted: 13 years ago
šŸ‘wow such a nice part... soo cutešŸ¤—... haha loved d MAANEET scn it was cute n funnyšŸ˜† ...their fight was in a way romantic too😳... har doggi ki nam tommy nahi hota 🤣... awsm yaar... šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_mimi


srry 4 d delay... i ws a lil bit busy.. my life was a total mess...😭


What happened to your Life???😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved AR
sooo cute
sooo sweet
loved maaneet eye lock nd fight
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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