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Posted: 13 years ago
im not use to reading ur ffs late.
u hamesha updated daily b4😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update Kinzu.
great job as usual.
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Posted: 13 years ago
now dats i call d twist in tale!!!
i'm soo luvin dis fear free nupur!!!!
luvd it!
cont soon magician!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wating for your update ???? continue soon ...r u going to update today??????... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so much people!! .. ❤️
and i guess you must have realized that i'll be updating on alternative days !! 😳


7. Don't talk to me like that.

Next morning, mayank woke up to a heavy head, well it didn't come as a shock for him, such headaches had to come after going through such complex conflicts within himself, so deciding upon lying for a while he closed his eyes and snuggled inside the blanket.

It was 9.00 am, he had checked the watch, and now lying in his bed, waiting to sense any improvement in his headache, his thoughts again travelled to the recent happenings in his life ' Nupur.

He opened his eyes with a frown, he could sense towards what warm waters he was heading, but still he wasn't afraid. Something in his heart told him that taking a huge risk was worth it. Nupur was worth it. She was worth every single hardship of this world, so finally his frown converting to a smile, he got down the bed.

After freshening up, he came out of the room, expecting to find the lounge empty as always, but he was wrong!!.

Nupur was sitting on the sofa cross legged, munching an apple, and very carefully reading newspaper. Startled, mayank just stared.

Her hair were flowing out of her pony tail, fluttering on her face, she was still; wearing the same lime shalwar suit, but it looked fresh and new on her even after two days. Her eyes were roaming over the paper, and the slight cute movement of her mouth made him smile.

"good morning!!", he vibrantly said, with a calculated voice, enough and loud enough. He smiled and stood at his place, awaiting a response, but it didn't come.

She just kept on reading, without any change of expression and mayank really had a doubt that did she listen or not. Sighing, he walked towards her, "good morning", this time he said softly, sitting on the sofa opposite her, but still she wasn't showing any response.

"Nupur!!", this time he said stiffly, somewhere hurt from her rudeness.

She raised her eyes, "kia hai"?, emitting fire and disgust form her eyes, she replied.

"good morning", he tried to smile and nupur smirked, "what is so good in this morning?"

Smiling at her anger, he licked his lips for a reply, "I am seeing you in front of me, that is good enough for me", he leaned a bit and flaring up, nupur glared, "am I to assume that from now onwards I'll have to bear your cheap flirting as well?', she placed the newspaper away and mayank sighed.

"I do not flirt, that was a truth."

"I am genuinely not interested",

"can we talk normally?",

"are you mad or what?, you expect me to talk normally when you have bloody kidnapped me"?, she got up and was about to leave when mayank held her arm and pulled her towards him.

She was shocked for a moment at that sudden pull. She was intimately close, and could hear his breath as well.

"next time, I'll prefer you to behave", he whispered stiffly

"ouch!, male ego is hurt"

"you don't understand this is for your own safety".

"to hell with such safety, this house haunts me", she looked in his eyes and he tightened the grip on her wrists, "I don't care nupur, I seriously don't care what this house makes you feel, but you have to live here, for the rest of your life, and that is it."

"you are wrong, I'll prefer dying rather than being trapped"

He smiled meanly, "you don't understand what a trap means, it doesn't even allows you to die"

She smiled back, equally mean, "I am not surprised that you consider being alive just on the basis of pulse and breath, life is much more than that".

"for me life is only when you breath and your heart beats."

"and for me life is when you smile and express, and both these things are remotely possible around you", she was standing still, not at all trying to free her wrists,.

"well, remotely possible means, possible atleast", he pulled her more close, and taking a deep breath, she decided not to show that fear on her face, "you seriously make me wonder if you have a heart or not", in spite of trying, tears flowed out from her huge eyes, slowly flowing down her cheeks, and being so close, that he could see his reflection in her eyes, he tightened the grip over her wrists even more.

"I have a heart nupur, I do", he left one wrist and holding her hand he brought it close to his chest and placed it there. She was resisting and but still, forcefully he placed her hand over his chest and within a second, her hand was sensing the rythematic beat of his heart and moving slowly.

"I have a heart and it beats", he whispered in her ears and looking in his eyes again, she managed to block tears, "I never doubted this physical heart beating with a rhythm, providing a normal blood pressure to your body, I am talking about the heart which feels the pain and understands what other people have in their own hearts.", her voice wavered, with eyes now conveying that plead again which was pricking him.

"I understand your pain and helplessness and I seriously wish I could do something for it, and trust me I tried, but it was in vain,"

"nothing tried from a heart stays in vain!", tears now flowing , her voice choked and mayank pulled her through waist, more close to him and she resisted, by blocking their chests to touch by her closed fists.

"you have lived in a protected sheltered life, and you don't know what life shows you and what it can reduce you too", he dipped his fingers in her waist, "it leaves you in a shock that did I really commit all this, was I reduced to this?", he said desperately and she broke in a laugh, "so you also have the same story of a helpless childhood where you were forced in crime world because you didn't have anything to eat, or was it that your father was killed and you didn't receive justice or was it that your sister was raped and she died", she said in a breath and looked at him full of hate,

'it was by choice, I chose this life and I chose this world, WITHOUT any past", pulling her more close and nupur fists failing at their work, their bodies touched intimately,

"pity!, I pity you that you were offered with such poor choices by God!"

"glad!, and I am glad that you realized God can be unjust", he wiped her tears and feeling cold under his touch, she tried to jerk his hand it didn't work.

"People like you don't have a right to comment on God, when did u worship or followed Him that He should shower blessings on you"

"alright!, but what about you?, you worship Him na, then why are you in such a condition, God is being unjust to you", he said, and this time his voice conveyed something which made her heart pump irregularly, but the disgust was still powerful., "I trust God, He will reward my patience He will!!, and that day you will be just left astounded by God's miracles", her voice was full of pride and trust and it scared his heart even more.

She has a blind and firm belief.

"I am waiting for that day when God will show his power and you will be left helpless, I wait to see that astonishment in your eyes, you crim..

Before she could complete her word, he placed his hand over her mouth and leaned on her ear, "mayank, my name is mayank and you are calling me that", his voice was strict and she opened her eyes wide,

"and next time I hear you calling me a criminal, I'll silence you by sealing your lips with mine, which is a much better and effective way from my current move", glaring in her eyes, which had yet again increased in diameter, he left her with a jerk and moved to kitchen, leaving nupur there, just looking at him dumbfounded and numb.

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Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved it API...
aj main soch hi rahi thi ap kab update karogi???????
thanks for updating...
love ya...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Fantu...Brilliant update👏...I loved their conversation

No more words to describe it...I just hope she falls for him soon...but i fear these kinds of stories generally have sad endings...I just hope it comes out to be false in this case
Edited by aysha_mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I admire Mayank's guts to talk to Nupur in such a way..
I'm very interested to know why Mayank chose this option in hies life when he had a better chance..
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
u knw wht is the best part of ur updates? the way u write thm!!! brilliantly writn!!! :) and m loving the way finally smwhr the charactrs of nupur and mayank r coming to surface! :) finally i can make out somethng abt the charactrs but still, its a too early stage to coment on thm!!! however i feel sorry for both and i definitely dnt hate mayank!! but as i told u earlier, i dnt feel mayank is worth the pain nupur is suffering frm!!! beautifully writn kinzu!!! love u!!! *tight hugs*
Edited by mulan. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
strnge...donot know but..
waitng for next

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