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dhamakar convo...so good...kudos to u man...loved it
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oops sorry double post!!😭
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thank u people!! 😳
Just wanted the update on a fresh page. :)
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i know this is short, but it was important!! 😳

8. It came back ..

Nupur felt tiny goosebumps initiating on her arms from his statement. She saw him going inside the kitchen and feeling herself in sheer rage and helplessness, tears flowed out of her eyes. She clenched her fists and followed him to the kitchen.

"what do you want to prove by threatening me like this?", she stood there on the kitchen door and shouted .

"I just want you to accustom yourself with the fact that you ought to behave properly with me", he replied, cracking the egg in a bowl.

"yeah right!, behave properly with a criminal", she said without any hesitation and mayank raised his eyes , "seems you don't understand points in one go", he wiped off his hands.

"I don't!!, she glared him, "and criminals like you are not even meant to be understood", shouting again she turned to leave the kitchen but her moves fell slow as his arm slid across her waist and she was pinned against the wall.

"what the hell", she struggled under his grip and mayank looked in her eyes, 'I told you I have a name", he chewed every word and nupur glared back, "and I told you I have a home",

Something wild passed between their eyes. Both of them were helpless, and in sheer pain.

"I'll just have to use the most effective way to make u silent", suddenly his eyes got filled with rage and advancing close he made her eyes go wide and her body shivered mercilessly.

She saw him coming close and knowing there was no way she could run out of his grip, she just closed her eyes tight and a tear squeezed out of her eye, "don't invite things you can't face"
, instead of feeling his lips, she heard his hoarse voice and opened her eyes to see his face was now away and as she opened her eyes, he left her wrists, "next time I am not going to be generous", he glared and got back to the stove and still shivering, nupur ran out of the kitchen and rushed directly to the room and closed the door.

She just stood there, completely numb. Her eyes went to her wrist; they were red, due to his rough grip. She rubbed her fingers over it, and it was hurting, allowing all the tears to flow, and crying bitterly she sat down on the floor. Her life was reduced to hell. Never ending hell.

"Baujiii", she shouted on the top of her voice and cried further.

The knife fell from mayank's hand hearing that painful plead of hers'. He came out in the lounge and stared blankly at the closed door, behind which she was surely crying her heart out.

He sighed and sat down on the sofa with moist eyes.

"baujiii"

, a 8 year old mayank was shouting, while he swiftly moved through the crowded railway station with searching eyes.

"baujiii!", he shouted until his throat dried and mind surrendered, and he sat down hugging his knees, with his eyes going blank with terror and horror.

"beta chalo main tumhain le jaon tumhare bauji k pass"

He opened his eyes. That voice was still fresh in his mind. That meaness and crook tone.

"ap ko pata hai merey bauji kahan hain?', hope filled those horror filled eyes.

"haan pata hai", the man smiled.

Trust. Why do we all trust so easily?. We all trust anyone who comes with what we want to hear.

"cripple his leg and fingers, and then he can beg on the main highway"

This tone struck a half conscious mayank and he opened his eyes wide, but sensing danger, he still pretended the unconscious state.

"main tumhain bacha sakta hon, agar merey liye kaam karo tu ",

That whisper, the first offer he was made.

"you won't have to beg, just small thefts here and there, and when u grow up, you can join the mafia, decide quickly, jaldi!!

Choice. He made a choice.

"pity that God has given you such poor choices".

Taking a deep breath, he was just thinking of any way of talking to her again, when he was interrupted by a phone call and seeing the name flashing relaxed him. He had a way out.

Nupue lost track of time for how long was she crying and blankly staring athe vase at the table, when the door opened.

Nupur"

The voice was not alien any more and she raised her head to see a rather embarrassed mayank.

"tumhare kapre a gaye hain", he placed all those packets on the bed and without saying anything further he left the room, stealing a glance at her once again, which indeed made his heart shiver with pain.

~*~

Nupur kept on snuggling in the corner. Her mind was going numb and blank, only if she would know the reason. Only if she would know how to make him agree to let her go!. She could do anything. Any bloody thing on this world!!.

She closed her eyes and tried to induce strength for what she was thinking

~*~

It was night falling, when mayank went in his room. Nupur didn't come out of the room the whole day and neither did mayank had the strength to go and force her today. Today his own past had come back, and thus having no strength to argue, he let the things flow as they were.

He lied down closing his eyes. He could hear the rain, it was tapping heavily on the window sill, and just finding it as a catalyst in his gloom, he tried to ignore the sound, but then again a knock on his door made him startle.

It could only be Nupur.

He rushed to the door and threw open it, and as he did, he could just stare at the sight.

Ye usi k palkon k saye hain .. merey dil main jo utar gaye.

Ye junnon - e- manzil- e- ishq hai ..

Jo chaley tu jaan se guzr gaye ..

9. I've become so numb - Page 39

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAYEEE!!! KINZU THT WAS ONE HELL OF A HEART WRENCHING PART!!! SOMEWHR I FEEL BAD FOR MAYANK AND NUPUR BOTH!! THR HELPLESSNESS ABT THE SITUATION IS PAINFUL AND IT LEAVES U FEELING SO SAD FOR BOTH THESE HUMANS WHO HAVE NO OTHR WAY BUT TO FACE IT ALL!!! BEAUTIFULLY WRITEN KINZU AND I M LOVING THE WAY THIS STORY IS PROGRESSING!!! LOVE U BESTIE AND PLZZZ UPDATE SOON YAR!!! HOLIDAYS KA THORA FAIDA UTHAO!!!! :P LOVE U!!! AND LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT HAS A PAINFUL EDGE BUT STILL I LOVE IT!!! :)
Edited by mulan. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES😃 *EDITED*
OMG this was so heart wrenching..!! Poor Mayu.. seriously...<3
and Nupur, gosh they way u show her helplessness, it pricks my heart!! so so so sad!
And ms Magical Angel..u wrote it sooo BEAUTIFULLY ❤️ as always <3
and the ending..hmmm m wondering wats nxt :D pls cont sooon ! I love to read ur updates!! <333
Awesomely written , each n every emotion of Mayu as well as NUpur...Mindblowing!!
take care <3 ;love uuu🤗
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was an amazing update as usual...but why u stopped yaar..what is nupur going to do...plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved it lodsss...😊😊
awesome update...👏👍🏼👏
m really feeling bad for Mayank...😒😒
he had such a painful past...😔😭😔
i feel sooo bad for him n Nupur as well...😒😒
wht is Nupur gonna do...😕😕
i hope nothing worst...
really loving dis ff...😊
waiting eagerly for d next update...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing as always...
really feel sad for nupur...
how long she will have to face it...?/?
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazingly written dear
and i sure about what's gonna happen next
do write soon

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