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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_smart

nice update
continue soon

😊will surely continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luvd

Hey its so lovely bt sad n intense.i was nearly crying.continue soon.

😭😭me too cried will surely update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suha16

nahhhiii...plz dnt make pia die update soon

😊nahin pia nahin maregi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sunu123

hey rose😃 awesome update dearšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘... omg what jay did yaar...hope abhay save her in time... i liked this nice side of jay... hey plz do cont soon...i want to know what will happen nxt... hav anice day luv u sunita

😊me too hoping abhay saves pia in time.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Emotional one Jazz...

But I am happy that Jeh repented...
Abhay will surely not allow Piya to die...
Continue soon

😊me too happy that jay repented
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS PART 3 CONTINUED...

A DIFFERENT END AND A FRESH START (Abhay takes pia in his arms lovingly and carries her outside the jungle ,whereas his swollen eyes speak a lot ...a lot about what had happened about the loss occured and his mind was full off disgrace ...of fear of loosing HER again ,her pain was making him too weak to understand
what to do next ..AND HOW???
Jeh-(in his mind)SORRY PIA...SORRY ...TEARS ROLL OUT FROM HIS EYES
JEH -(cries out aloud)Why ?why?I did this ...OH GOD NOW WHAT ...
My brother GAURAV was wrong in going in two brother's fight and i think whatever Alina said was right .Why the fool Jeh ?Why U chose a path of betraying ure love and revenging ure brothers death.Neither u were able to save ure brother nor revenge his death.NOTHING IS LEFT WITH U NOW...NOTHING...
U were blinded by the love by the love of ure mother and what she did...what she did SHE USED U ...AAAOOO(werewolf's cry is yelled by him)
OUTSIDE THE JUNGLE
Abhay to pia-KEEP BREATHING PIA...KEEP BREATHING MY LIFE ...I can't loose u again...U are everything to me.
PIA (slowly opens her eyes ..in a faint voice)-Abhay ABHAY ..don't feel sad for me,i deserve this for not trusting u..i deserve this for not being with u...and overall i deserve this for not there when u needed me .Every time Abhay ,every time u saved me throughout my life...became my gaurdian angel...were there when everyone went in dark.I WILL/SHALL ALWAYS LOVE U...EVEN IF U TAKE AGAIN MY MEMORIES AWAY...BUT ABHAY I DON'T DESERVE U..I DON'T DESERVE U..U DESERVE BETTER THAN ME...better than me abhay ..better than me who will love u more than me...(and her voice goes out)
Abhay-NO PIA NO...no one can love me as u love me...i took all my memories away from u but u still loved me..u deserve best man than me...but destiny has made us as such pia ...in such a way ..that we can never be apart.TODAY i agree with our fate PIA i cant land u in trouble by leaving u ...AND I CLAIM U FOR MY LIFE...U are mine pia...U ARE MINE AND I AM UR'S WILL/SHALL ALWAYS BE...this time no one can come in between us.(By saying this he kisses pia's cheek..tears roll down pia's eyes )
By this time HE HAD reached Raichand mansion and places pia on his bed ,starts healing her(her swollen lips,neck,Hurt back...controls himself ...and kisses each body part one by one...undresses her in a gown for treatment ...and makes her feel warm...THE BIG WOUND CAUSED BY JAY'S STICK ENGAGES HIM IN ANGER TOWARDS HIM but still he control's himself...and decides to take revenge for harm occured later...
HE SENSES PIA'S BODY GETTING COLD DUE TO LOSS OF BLOOD...so he decides to give the heat of his body to her(undresses himself takes pia along with him and gives him warm body treatment)...he makes pia breath through him and puts all his powers to save her.
INSIDE THE JUNGLE
A ll the werewolves have been defeated by the VAMPIRES though Chand's haseena was a little injured .
Dibbanta was still not ready to accept the defeat and was very furious .She was calling Jeh AAAOOO (in werewolf voice)but no responce was coming back.At last all her effort was wasted and Haseena gave her a huge blow and she went swirling away in the air...not know where
(At this time Jay entered and saved her ...and took her away...she was fully miserable no organ properly functionoing and senses loosing.
The vampires were happy at their achievement and all along with haseena reach RAICHAND HOUSE
RAICHAND MANSION
CHAND -I guess Abhay is in the room BUT I DON'T UNDERSTAND THE FACT why the hell he left without fighting.
HASEENA (smells)-Wait a second CHAND i can smell a human...but who that can be...PIA (CHANDEENA TENSED)
ABHAY'S ROOM -Abhay is giving warm body heat to pia ...and loving her a lot (her touch)he has made her so close to him that now even air is trying its best to escape through them but can't ...He cannot take his eyes Away from PIA'S FACE ,her body ...its morning by now(5:30)...and pia's body is coming back to normal...her face is gaining its pink colour...Though Abhay has now saved her...but still he wants to feel her in himself .He is remembering the first day when PIA WAS with him on his bed ...everything ..each and every memory ...how they both cherished their love ...and in the end how a tornado splashed their dreams in a pool of loss..of tears.
HE AGAIN LOOKS AT PIA ...bents down his lips to kiss pia's rosy one's ,just then PIA opens her eyes ..but before she could say anything Abhay's lips have already touched pia's and first slowly then passionately both loving souls are lost with each other in a red quilt of love...
(song from backround starts ...marjawan)
IN THE LIVING ROOM
HASEENA -I guess its time to call Abhay ...out of his room ,its been so long..he was with a human PIA
CHAND -But What can be done?He has decided to do so and now we are under him...U ARE forgetting Haseena that all vampires have chosen him as their leader and we have to take care of him now...now only authority can do something.
IN THE ROOM
PIA IS BLUSHING and open's her round browny eyes...thinking was it dream or reality..which occured in a tragedy...remorse and ended in too much love .She sees herself in a gown which was unbuttoned and she was in abhay's arms...with his other hand tightly on her ...HE was smiling and was in a love sleep full of pia...Pia is very happy and seeing him with her speaks in mind ...never leave me again...
She thinks to freshen up...so slowly she picks up the hands of abhay,and makes them rest on the bed ...she thinks to use Abhay's bathroom and goes for a shower as she needed one to relieve herself for what happened .
She realises that in a hurry she forgot to bring her clothes inside and wasting no time she goes out ..in a towel suit with her hairs wet and open with scent of jasmine (jasmine shampoo)
ABHAY (in a faint voice in love dream) never leave me again ...pia ..never
PIA (hears it ...goes close to him and whispers in his ears (in a soft voice-ABHAY NEVER ...and kisses his cheek ..her scent makes abhay open his eyes ,her hairs touch him ...this makes abhay crave ..for her like anything ..and he pulls her over him(ahem..ahem...just imagine)
At this with lot of push the support of bed breaks and both fall over one another in a thud ...šŸ˜†(kya se kya ho gaya)But Abhay and Pia not Aware of what happened and both are just lost with one another and PIA says ..WHAT ARE U DOING ABHAY?...Abhay ...
(At this Abhay cuts her tone in between ...and put her middle finger on her lips...(says)SSHHH
dont speak(and a beautiful eyeock ..)Abhay gently kisses pia's neck and then he unfastens her robe and both lovers are lost in each other and ahem..ahem...
IN THE LIVING ROOM(aT 10:30 AM)
At around 10:30 both of them come downstairs .(pia is looking down in a very blushing way and very scared ...happy ,emotional)All the vampires sensing the sweet blood of human..thinking their leader has brought someone as food ...wipe out their mouths feel the sweet smell of blood and are lost in seeing her ...but one man gets out of control and goes to attack her ...
Abhay (in action)catches hold of that vampire ponces him on the ground and kills him.(looks angrily at everyone and declares that this should not be repeated again.
Abhay(to all)-She is mine and my life ..no one dare to repeat it in future ...and i declare my marriage with PIA a few days after ,I will marry pia and she will become my wife ...ure leader's wife...DO U GET IT .
(He bends down and takes pia's hands in his..and says)-Will u forgive ure love ...forgive me for every tear u spent on me ...and be mine forever...I promise to love u , to take care as always but this time i'll change for u..will instead of tear bring happiness on ure face...please will u give ure stupid abhay a chance
PIA-(can't believe her eyes and ears...tears roll her eyes)-Dont need to change for me abhay ..i love u as u are ...MY ABHAY...(AND they both hug..passionately)
(ALL the vampires are shocked whispering to each other marrying a human.)
(chandeena mouth opened wide)...just imagine me leaving
SO the next chappy of story starts...
Hope u like it...
i know its long ..take ure own time to read ...best of luck for that.
jutta chappel don't use that to bash me ...bye..AND PLEASE I greatly thank dishu to help me...and sugesting me an idea to add romancešŸ˜›
😊do coment and increse the imagination power to imagine
Edited by dolma.rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

i'll upload next chappy very soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update i love it i like ahem..ahem...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dolma😃
awesome update dearšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
loved abhiya romanceā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļø...
abhay removed his jacketšŸ˜²šŸ˜‰šŸ˜³ā˜ŗļøšŸ˜...
he pulls her over him(ahem..ahem...just imagine)
At this with lot of push the support of bed breaks and both fall over one another in a thud🤣🤣
this is for u
plz update soon
hav a nice day
luv u
sunita



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