FF- Destiny new Updated Pg 12 Nov 8th

My disclaimer: This is my first attempt at a fan fiction. I have changed a few characters to fit my story. My story will be told in English. I don't have the right slang to tell this in hindi. Hope you guys enjoy it and please feel free to msg me your input and even storyline suggestions. Also, I apologize ahead of time for any typos and mistakes'.Here goes nothing---

Dutta S Patil aka Bhao

The same guy we have all fallen for. He came from humbling beginnings and made his mark on his city. His business consisted of mostly property management and construction. His ethics- strong, his temper-explosive, his generosity-limitless. The residence of his town treated him like a god, his mere presence at the local temple would create hysteria amongst the crowd. He left no page unturned when it came to his town and family.

His family consisted of Aayi Sahib, 3 sisters-Kala (married to Kishore), Leela (married to Suds), Roops (secretly in love with Baaji) and Madhu (staying abroad in London). And of course there was Baji- the best friend, right hand man and probably the one person who understood Dutta better than Dutta himself.

Women came and went- they were a dime a dozen but he had fallen in love once and only once. She saved his life and stole his heart. He thought about her every night, when the house was silent and he would finally get the chance to sit down and relax. All he had to do was close his eyes and instantly she would appear. The most beautiful girl he had ever seen. Nakusha Rao. A smile would tug at his lips as he reminisced. But like every night, he would open his eyes to see nothing but the dark night and his smile would slowly fade. The woman he would turn heaven and earth for belong to another. There was no happy ending to his love story--- or so he thought.

Nakusha Rao aka Naku

Beautiful, intelligent, outgoing, well mannered, highly educated and highly respected.

Only daughter of Ganpat and Babi Rao. They moved from Dehli to California after Naku was born. Although she was raised in the states, she was always an Indian at heart. One would be a fool to think this girl was an "American". Her parents taught her about her religion, her culture and her people. Their only dream was for her to complete her studies and return back to India to serve her own people. Naku lived for her parents and her one and only dream- to make her parents proud. She lived a happy and rewarding life until the one earth-shattering day. She was on-call at the hospital where she was doing her residency; her parents were in a tragic car accident which ended up taking both the lives. Naku's perfect little world had been turned upside down. After months of grieving, she decided it was time to accomplish her goals. Babi and Ganpat had always taught their daughter to embrace what may come and push forward. Not thinking about it twice, she packed her bags, tied up all loose ends and headed home to Dehli after 23 years. Good bye California- Namaste India!

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Hello-- sorry for the confusion. The sister-- well i havent decided yet. Lets see how the stroy unfolds.

Dutta and Naku wont meet until they are older (when she moves back to india). What i wrote was sort of an intro to the main characters. My 1st update will explain how they met and how Dutta falls for her.