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Posted: 14 years ago
first of all kudos for writing succha wonderful write up👏
but really sad fot this being the last part😭
but if possible plz come up with another FF
you r superb as a writer😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Kavitha Di, i was a silent reader as i was reading via mobile but trust me, i was so enamored by ur FF that i was as if compelled to comment... I read the whole of the FF in one night, it is so beautiful..

I love the part where u wrote on women's weakness... Great job indeed and i came upon many facts of real life in ur FF so that's the most special content of ur story, including our Sid n Riddhima of course!!!

Thank you for all the powerful characters that u portrayed...

Please do write more, i really love ur piece of work...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

Hello Kavitha Di, i was a silent reader as i was reading via mobile but trust me, i was so enamored by ur FF that i was as if compelled to comment... I read the whole of the FF in one night, it is so beautiful..

I love the part where u wrote on women's weakness... Great job indeed and i came upon many facts of real life in ur FF so that's the most special content of ur story, including our Sid n Riddhima of course!!!

Thank you for all the powerful characters that u portrayed...

Please do write more, i really love ur piece of work...



Hi Liashna,

Thanks. You really caught my actual intention in writing this story. I wanted to write about many facts. My intention was in parallel to talk about some hypocrisies that exist in this world and how woman are kind of targeted and how that targeting itself is made a mockery in DMG. I somehow, could not respond to the replies and so could not achieve that part completely.


Dear All,

I will reply to all. But till then, thanks for liking it..


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Posted: 14 years ago
kavitha u are an amazing writer👏
I lovedd the way u wrote except the last two parts. Not ur fault; my dislike for R is too strong to appreciate SR milan. To me , R deserved Armaan not sid.
What kind of a woman is this farzy?? She wants to be the centre of both the men's universe. when she was sid, she wanted armaan. Now that she has armaan, she decides it should be sid in her life!
These kind of women can never be happy in their life.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shamil

kavitha u are an amazing writer👏

I lovedd the way u wrote except the last two parts. Not ur fault; my dislike for R is too strong to appreciate SR milan. To me , R deserved Armaan not sid.
What kind of a woman is this farzy?? She wants to be the centre of both the men's universe. when she was sid, she wanted armaan. Now that she has armaan, she decides it should be sid in her life!
These kind of women can never be happy in their life.


very truee

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shamil

kavitha u are an amazing writer👏

I lovedd the way u wrote except the last two parts. Not ur fault; my dislike for R is too strong to appreciate SR milan. To me , R deserved Armaan not sid.
What kind of a woman is this farzy?? She wants to be the centre of both the men's universe. when she was sid, she wanted armaan. Now that she has armaan, she decides it should be sid in her life!
These kind of women can never be happy in their life.



Dear shamil,

Thanks. You are right, Ridhima made way too many mistakes. But the main point is that she realized her mistakes. Secondly she made those mistakes under extreme pressure. For any human being it is difficult think properly when a person is kind of blackmailing continually in one or the other way. In fact she kept on making a mistake after mistake that she finally lost her track completely. Sid being nice human being and being weak in the love of Ridhima accepted to forgive her mistakes and take her back. I feel any nice person can't remain angry with a person who commited mistakes in phase of extreme pressures and who asks for forgiveness.

Well, keeping aside the story. my intension was actually something else. I am fed up of hearing in DMG forum that Ridhima is pressurized. Being a woman she is binded by marriage and so on. I want to show via this story, that this is not the case. Yes in reality there are lot more pressures on woman and they are forced into too many things. Rural areas, which constitute major portion of India, are much more backward but even the citites are not left behind. I have lots of examples of woman who excel in the professional front but their fate at the homeside is still not very good. They have to struggle through lots of pressures. But here in DMG, in contrary. Sid gave her all the freedom in the world. He tried to release the pressure on her to such an extent that any woman will be moved by that. We have even seen Ridhima doing it. So, why should Ridhima stay on with Sid with some Social pressure ? Even her gestures with Sid indicated she is falling for him genuinly.

So, the main issue is that they abruptly changed the story and hence failed miserably. There can be no proper explaination to this story as I already said in DJ's story. I would have been happy too if they have shown Ridhima not warming up to Sid and slowly made her way back to Arman. That would have reflected progression. But in the name of Social pressure, they mislead the audience, especially the young generation. This is the main point I want to bring out.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear Friends,

I am sorry I could not reply to everyone of you individually. I think now the time has passed and there is no meaning of replying now. However I am back with another story and will promise you all that I will participate more in that. If guys are interested that story is

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1731781

However note that the new story is more lighter and is just a story. I dont have any other intensions as I had with this story, which I also explained in reply to Shamil. It is just that, via this story, I felt I can attempt writing and hence am attempting it again.
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Dear shamil,

Thanks. You are right, Ridhima made way too many mistakes. But the main point is that she realized her mistakes. Secondly she made those mistakes under extreme pressure. For any human being it is difficult think properly when a person is kind of blackmailing continually in one or the other way. In fact she kept on making a mistake after mistake that she finally lost her track completely. Sid being nice human being and being weak in the love of Ridhima accepted to forgive her mistakes and take her back. I feel any nice person can't remain angry with a person who commited mistakes in phase of extreme pressures and who asks for forgiveness.

Well, keeping aside the story. my intension was actually something else. I am fed up of hearing in DMG forum that Ridhima is pressurized. Being a woman she is binded by marriage and so on. I want to show via this story, that this is not the case. Yes in reality there are lot more pressures on woman and they are forced into too many things. Rural areas, which constitute major portion of India, are much more backward but even the citites are not left behind. I have lots of examples of woman who excel in the professional front but their fate at the homeside is still not very good. They have to struggle through lots of pressures. But here in DMG, in contrary. Sid gave her all the freedom in the world. He tried to release the pressure on her to such an extent that any woman will be moved by that. We have even seen Ridhima doing it. So, why should Ridhima stay on with Sid with some Social pressure ? Even her gestures with Sid indicated she is falling for him genuinly.

So, the main issue is that they abruptly changed the story and hence failed miserably. There can be no proper explaination to this story as I already said in DJ's story. I would have been happy too if they have shown Ridhima not warming up to Sid and slowly made her way back to Arman. That would have reflected progression. But in the name of Social pressure, they mislead the audience, especially the young generation. This is the main point I want to bring out.


I agree whole heartedly with the bolded part kavz😊 in orderv to satisfy their star actors & their fans, the CVs completely butchered the story😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shamil

I agree whole heartedly with the bolded part kavz😊 in orderv to satisfy their star actors & their fans, the CVs completely butchered the story😕



Yes, DMG is just politics and not a story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was nice...realization part was good...

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