MY FIRST MG OS A LOVE STORY

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HELLO MAANEETIANS I WAS LISTENING TO RABBA MEIN TO MAR GAYA SONG WHEN THIS IDEA STRUCK ME I DEDICATE THIS OS TO MY FRIEND NANDY_BRU



A LOVE STORY

28TH AUGUST 2011
DEAR DIARY,
I MAAN SINGH KHURANA FOR THE FIRST TIME IN MY LIFE IS PENNING DOWN HIS THOUGHTS AND EMOTIONS.I'M FORCED TO WRITE DOWN THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF MY LIFE DUE TO THE INNER TURMOIL I'M GOING THROUGH.

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6 YEARS BEFORE
HERE I'M BACK TO HOSHIARPUR TO VISIT MY GRANDFATHER.

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MY FATHER DID NOT COME FROM A VERY RICH FAMILY. H CAME FROM ONE OF THE NORMAL FAMILIES IN HOSHIARPUR. BUT MY FATHER'S AIM WAS TO STAND ON HIS OWN FEET. SO HE MOVED TO DELHI WITH ME AND MY MOTHER WHEN I WAS ONLY 6 YEARS OLD.
MY FATHER STRUGGLED A LOT TO START A BUSINESS AND FINALLY HE STARTED KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS.

I WAS REALLY ATTACHED TO MY GRAND FATHER WHO BROUGHT UP MY DAD SINGLE HANDEDLY WHEN GRANDMA PASSED AWAY WHEN DAD WAS REALLY YOUNG. HIS CARE AND LOVE MADE MY RESPECT FOR HIM GROW AS I GREW. SO EVERY YEAR AS SOON AS MY TERMINAL EXAMS WERE OVER I WOULD COME TO HOSHIARPUR TO VISIT MY GRANDPA.

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I SAW HER FOR THE FIRST TIME WHEN I WAS 18 YEARS OLD. SHE WAS RUNNING ALONG THE STREETS CHASING ANOTHER GIRL. SHE MAY BE 13 - 14 YEARS OLD. I DIDNT EVEN KNOW HER NAME THEN.
FROM THEN DURING MY EVERY VISIT TO HOSHISRPUR I USED TO SEE HER BUT SHE NEVER NOTICED ME. I FELL HEAD OVER HEALS IN LOVE WITH HER.

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AND NOW I WAS GOING TO HOSHIARPUR TO NOT ONLY VISIT MY GRANDPA BUT ALSO TO SEE HER.

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HERE I WAS STANDIND ON THE TERRACE OF ONE OF MY NEIGHBOUR'S HOUSE FROM WHERE I CAN SEE HER HOUSE-THE HANDA HOUSE. I WAS WAITING TO GET A GLIMPSE OF GEET HANDA THE PERSON WHO STOLE MY HEART.I WAS WATCHING HER HOUSE THROUGH THE BINACULARS TO GET A BETTER VIEW AND THERE SHE WAS DRYING HER HAIR AT THE BACKYARD OF HER HOUSE.SHE WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL.

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5 YEARS BACK

I WAS HIDING BEHIND ONE OF THE STALLS IN THE MELA WATCHING HER RUN TOWARDS THE GOLGAPPE STALL WITH HER SISTER.THE WAY SHE RELISHED EACH AND EVERY PIECE MADE HER LOOK SO CUTE.

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4 YEARS BEFORE

THS TIME I DID NOT GO TO HOSHIARPUR TO VISIT MY GRANDPA BUT ONLY TO SEE HER COZ GRANDPA MOVED IN WITH US AT DELHI FEW MONTHS BACK.

I WAS HIDING AMONG THE BRANCHES OF A TREE TO GET A BETTER VIEW OF THE LAKE.AND THERE SHE WAS SWINGING ON THE SWING AT THE BANKS OF THE LAKE.

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THREE AND AHALF YEARS BACK

I WAS WAITING AT THE FIELDS TO CATCH A GLIMPSE OF HER. AFTER 10 MINS OF WAITING I SAW HER RUNNING BACK TO HER HOUSE. HER THUPPATTA FLEW IN THE AIR AS SHE RAN ACROSS THE FIELDS. AND THAT WAS THE LAST TIME I SAW HER.

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I ALWAYS ATTEMPTED TO TALK TO HER WHEN I SEE HER BUT ALL MY EFFORTS WERE IN VAIN. I WAS NOT ABLE TO GATHER ENOUGH COURAGE TO TELL HER ABOUT MY FEELINGS AND I THINK THAT IS THE BIGGEST MISTAKE THAT I MADE.

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APRIL 2011

HERE I'M BACK TO HOSHIARPUR AFTER TWO ANDA HALF YEARS. AFTER DAD PASSED AWAY I HAD THE RESPONSIBILITY OF TAKING CARE OF MOM, GRANDPA AND MY DAD'S DREAM , KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS.I WORKEDREALLY HARD ALL THESE DAYS AND FINALLY MADI IT AS THE NO 1 CONSTRUCTION COMPANY IN INDIA. AND I'M BACK TO HOSHIARPUR TO PLEASE MY EYES WITH HER VSIGHT.,TO PLEASE MY EARS BY HER LAUGHTER AND TO PLEASE MY SOUL BY MEETING HER TALKING TO HER AND ALSO CONFESS MY LOVE TO HER.

I WAITED AT ALL THE PLACES WHERE I USED TO SEE HER BUT I WAS NOT ABLE TO GET A SINGLE GLIMPSE OF HER. EVEN HER FAMILY MEMBERS WERE NOT SEEN FREQUENTLY.I PANICKED. WHAT IF SUMTHING HAD GONE WRONG DURING MY ABSENCE !WHAT IF SOMETHING HAD HAPPENED TO HER. AND MY FEARS CAME TRUE WHEN I ASKED OUR MUNSHIJI WHO LIVED IN HOSHIARPUR ABOUT THE HANDAS. HE TOLD ME THE NEWS THAT SHATTERED MY WORLD, THE WORLD THAT I HAD DREAMT FOR HER, THE DREAMS I HAD OF SHARING MY LIFE WITH HER.

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I CAME TO KNOW THAT IN THESE TWO AND A HALF YEARS A LOT OF THINGS HAD HAPPENED.

SHE WAS MARRIED TO AN NRI BY HER FAMILY AND WAS DISOWNED BY HIM AT THE AIRPORT AFTER TAKING ALL HER JWELLERY AND MONEY WITH HIM. THE NEXT DAY OF MARRIAGE

BUT SOON HER FAMILY CAME TO KNOW THAT SHE WAS CARRYING THE
CHILD AF THE GUY WHO CHEATED HER. THEY ASKED HER TO ABORT THE BABY. BUT SHE REFUSED TO DO SO AND RAN AWAY FROM HER HOUSE TO SAVE HER BABY'S LIFE.

BUT SHE WAS BRUTALLY KILLED BY HER BROTHER'S MEN IN THE WOODS .AND SOION HER BROTHER AND HIS MEN WERE ARRESTED AND THROWN INTO JAIL .

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MY HEART SHATTERED . I LOST THE PERSON WHOM I LOVED WITH ALL MY HEART. I WAS ANGRY . ANGRY ON MYSELF FOR NOT BEING HERE WHEN THESE HAPPENED. ANGRY ON MYSELF FOR NOT CONFESSING MY FEELINGS TO MY LADY LOVE. SHE MAY NOT EVEN KNOW THAT THERE WAS A PERSON NAMED MAAN SINGH KHURANA WHO LOVED HER WITH ALL HIS HEART.

I SOON FOUND THE PERSON WHO WHO WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR THESE.
DEV SINGHANIA THE PERSON WHO CHEATED GEET, MY GEET. AS SOON AS I SAW HIM IBEAT HIM TO DEATH BUT WAS STOPPED BY THE POLICE. I WANTED TO KILL HIM WITH MY BARE HANDS BUT WAS UNABLE TO DO SO DUE TO THE LAW AND ORDER .HE WA SENT TO JAIL TO ROT OVER THERE FOR THE REST OF HIS LIFETIME.

FROM THEN ALL I HAD WITH ME WAS HER MEMORIES AND HER PASSPORT SIZE PHOTO WHICH SHE HAD ACCIDENTALLY DROPPED WHILE GOING TO COLLEGE.

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28TH AUGUST 2011 PRESENT.

TODAY IS THE DAY OF MY MARRIAGE. THIS WAS MY MOTHERS LAST WISH BEFORE SHE PASSED AWAY. AND I'M FULFILLING HER WISH BY MARRYING MY FATHER'S BUSINESS ASSOCIATE'S DAUGHTER MEERA SABERWAL.

I TOLD MEERA EVERYTHING ABOUT MY PASTA AND ABOUT GEET. I TOLD HER I CANT LOVE HER LIKE EVERY HUSBAND DOES BUT WILL TRY TO BE A GOOD ONE. MEERA BEING A KIND HEARTED PERSON HAD NO QUALMS ABOUT IT. SHE ACCEPTED MY PAST , MY NEVER ENDING LOVE FOR GEET. AND TODAY I'M GETTING MARRIED.

I DONT KNOW WHETHER I WILL BE ABLE TO LOVE MEERA WITH MY HEART COZ GEET TOOK MY HEART WITH HER WHEN SHE LEFT .GEET WILL ALWAYS BE MY LOVE AND WIIL NEVER LOOSE THE PLACE IN MY MIND. BUT I WILL TRY TO BE A GOOD HUISBAND TO MEERA. AND THIS IS MAAN SINGH KHURANA SIGNING OFF.

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GEET CLOSED THE DAIRY OF HER FATHER MAAN SINGH KHURANA. YES MAAN NAMED HIS DAUGHTER GEET.

TEARS ROLLED DOWN HER EYES AS SHE SAW HER MOTHER MEERA STAND BESIDE HER.

GEET : MAA !! WHY DIDN'T PAPA TELL ANYTHING ABOUT THIS TO ME. HE HAS LOST HIS LOVE BUT STILL HE KEPT US ALL HAPPY

MEERA : YOUR FATHER HAD NEVER FAILED IN HIS RESPONSIBILITIES AS FATHER AND AS A HUSBAND. HE IS A IDEAL HUMAN BEING

AND BOTH OF THEM STARED AT THE PHOTO OF MAAN WHICH HANGED ON THE WALL WITH A GARLAND AROUND...


ALL LOVE STORIES DO NOT HAVE A HAPPY ENDING


sorry for the mistakes

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SORRY FOR GIVING U A SAD OS
I HAD TEARS IN MY EYES WHILE WRITING THIS. HOPE U LIKED IT PLS HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND LEAVE UR COMMENTS


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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os dear it was heart wrenching 😭
maan named his daughter as geet hope that n next birth they would complete their incomplete love story
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69 VIEWS AND ONLY I LIKE AND COMMENT😭
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amazing🤗

maaneet😭😭😭
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Thanks Dear for PM
It's Stupendous! Sensational!
Getting Better All The Time.👏
Continue Soon.
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it was heart wrenching!...
but beautifully written!
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👏nice OS
awesome
i had tear while reading
gr8 one👏👏👏
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wow awesome os..
loved it...
so so so sad...
but nice story.
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awesome os ... yeah a bit sad
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haye ...!!!!
luved it ..
thanks for the pm ...
fab os

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