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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good storyteller...
Daksh's imagination of pregnancy 🤣 too funny ...
The adoption idea was really touchy... 😊
I too would love them adopting aku's child... Dakshna will be the worlds best parents... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnx, dakshnafan and sou.
I agree, they will be really good parents.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dakshna kitchen scene continution...

As the door bell rings , naina opens the door, ayi and baba comes inside,daksh pretends to be redaing some paper in the hall(with atta on hair and cheek).Ayi baba come and sit in the hall,naina gets them water, nad goes to get some tea,daksh greets them asks them how the work went..baba is about to answer, ayi notices atta and asks daksh

Ayi; chintu; ye baal aur gaal par kya laga rakha hai??😲
Daksh puts hand on his cheek and realises its atta, just then naina gets chai for ayi, baba, naina looks at atta and is lil embarassed😳
Daksh; ayi, woh kuch nahi..bas naina ki thoda madat kar rahatha,akeli hain na..mera matlab hain saara kaam akeli kar rhai tho..maine socha ki...😆...

Naina feels embarssed and goes into kitchen.ayi baba, look at each other and smile as they realised the situation and 😆
Ayi; acha, lagta hai bahut madat karliya..she pulls daksh ear and says ab jaake saaf karo..javo😆😆

Daksh leaves from there, ayi comes into kitchen,she speaks with naina about how there work went and helps naina in completing remaining work.ayi asks naina to call daksh for dinner
Naina goes into their rooma nd sees  daksh is still with atta

Naina; daksh, abhi tak saaf nahi kiya..ayi neeche kaane ke liye bhula rahi hai she comes and starts cleaning the atta on cheek and hair with smile😃
Daksh holds naina and says; maine thodina lagaya hain atta.😆.jisne lagaya usi ko saaf karna padega...kyu??..saying he pulls naina towards him.😳
Naina; abhi nahi, pehle khaane par chlaona pls
Daksh; teek hain,,tum itna keh rahi hotho ab choddeta hoon..lekin baad mein nahi choodoonga..samjhi😛
Just then ayi calls chintu naina..aajavo beta and both come down..
Dinner khatam hogaya.After dinner in dakshna's room
                                                          Contd...

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Posted: 12 years ago
@storyteller ssbn

Thanks for response😃

Superb yaar, Dakshna adopting aku's baby,,gr8 idea and tum ne tho  dakshna ki bacche ke naam bhi soch liya😆
As usual gr8 dialogues and scene👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Contd,,,after dinner

Dakshna room❤️

Daksh is sitting on bed,just then naina comes out of washroom after getting changed into night gown.she comes and sits before dressing table and starts applying night cream.dakshu keeps looking at her

Naina; aisa kya dekha rahe ho?😲
Daksh; kuch nahi
Naina; daksh, aaj tho tumne had kardiya.Ayi, baba ke saamne kitna embarresed feel karrahithi mein..agali baar agar kuch kiya toh main ayi se tumhari shikayat kardoongi 
Daksh; acha..kya shikayat karoge??
Naina; yahi ki ayi, aap ka beta aaj kal bada badmaash ho gaya. kaam karne nahi deta

Daksh stands from the bed and says; haan karlo,mein bhi tumhari shikayat karunga
Naina stands infront of dressing table and says;; kya?
Daksh comes, holds naina from back, keeps his head on her shoulders and says( Imagine dakshan in mirror is being shown) at this dialogue

Daksh; yahi ki, ayi,aapki bahu itni pyaari lagthi hain aur itna khoobsurat dikthi hein toh  mein kay karu? issmein mere koi galati nahi aur kaam karte hue tho aur bhi jyada achi lagti hain.😆.iss liye  ( gives a cute smile)😊

Naina also gives a smile combined with shy and then daksh says; bahut raat hogayi hain, chalo so jaate hain,kal jaldi office jaana hain and he leaves naina and starts moving towards bed.Naina calls daksh.daksh turns towards her 

Naina; daksh tumhe nahi lagta tum kuch bhool gaye
Daksh, comes closer and says(with naughty look)😉 ; nahi..bas dekhrahatha tumhe yaad hain ya nahi
Naina; mujhe pata hain tum aise baatein bilkul bhulte nahi😳, acha toh kaho ki tumhare kya demands hain??
Daksh ; batata hoon
Daksh lifts naina into his arms,an intense eye lock,cool breeze touching their hair.he carries naina, puts her on bed and swithces off the light☺️

Bas..rest is upto your imagination😉😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Continuing from bangles FF

 

N: Meri pyar tumhare liye kabhi kam nahi hoga, sirf barti rahegi, har ek pal.

 

D: Main bhi aisa feel karta hoon. Mere bas me chalta toh mein ek pal ke liye tumko mujhse dur nahi hone de ta, par aab humko tore der ke liye alag hona parega. Raat bohot hogayi, ab hamein sona chahiye, Aao,  main tumhe tumhari kamre tak chod aata hoon

 

N: Mujhe meri kamre tak chod aaoge, Koi zaroorat nahi hai, tum fikhar mat karo, tumhe chor kar main kahi nahi ja ungi.

 

D: Mujhe chod ne do na, me tumhe chodna chahta hoon,

 

N: Tik hain, Par kisine dekh liya to.

 

D: Sab so gaye hai, koi nahi dekhega

As they are walking to Naina's room

N: Daksh, hum sab ko hamare bare mein kab batayenge. Mujhe jhoot bholna acha nahi lagta.

D: Pehle toh tumhe aisa nahi lagta ta.

N: Tumhari saath saath rehnese,  mujh aisa lagne laga hai, Daksh, jaante ho, kisine ek baar mujhe kahata, ki jab hum sacha pyar karte hai, toh hum behter insaan banjaate hai. Ab main yeh khud experience kiya hai.

D: Tumne tik kaha, Naina, Jab se maine tumse pyar kiya hai, main bhi kitna badal gaya hoon, main KP aur akhdoo tora kum ho gaya hoon.  Shayad yehi farak hai, hamari pyar mein, aur Abhi aur Sonakshi pyar mein.

N: Haa

D: Par chupke se milne ki mazaa kuch alag hai, naa.
 
N: Haa
 
D: Toh jab tak ghar ka mahaul tik nahi hota, hum ise enjoy karte hai.
 
N: Haa (By this they reach Naina's room but they both look into each other eyes)
 
D: Tumhara karma aageya, Goodnight, Naina

Naina smiles but doesn't say goodbye back

D: Tum mujhe goodnight nahi wish karogi

Naina goes upto Daksh, pull him closer, puts her arms round his shoulders,  and gives him a kiss on his cheek

Daksh is a little shocked first then he smiles

N: lo, tumhe wish kardiya, tik hain, Goodnight

D: Tumne jistara se mujhe wish kiya na,

D:toh mera night ab good hi nahi, very very good hoga

They both laugh and have one final hug.

N: Ab jao, Daksh, agar kisine dekh liya toh

She pushes him out of the room. They look at each other one last,

D: Goodnight, toh me ab jaraha hoon

N: (Smiles) toh ab jao na.

D: Jaanta hoon, lagta hain kisiko meri shakal pasand nahi hai.

And leaves pretending to be annoyed but then can't help smiling

Naina smiles and closes the door

But then she opens the door again

And Daksh is still standing there and was staring at Naina;s door. They both see each other

They both smile and at the same time Naina closes her door and Daksh turns around and goes to his room.

Edited by storytellerSSBN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Next day

Aai is in the kitchen, making breakfast, Naina wakes up and sees Aai in the kithchen

N:Aai, main tumhari madat karu.

While Naina helps Aai make breakfast

A: Tik hain, tumne dekha Naina, ki Chintu jaag gaya hai ki nahi, aaj woh jagne me bohot der kar raha hain, iski tabiyat kharab toh nahi hai

N: Nahi, Aai, uski tabiyat kharab nahi hain, woh der se soya ta isi liye, ap uski fikar maat ki jiye.

A: Tumhe kaise pata ki Chintu der se soya ta, Naina

Naina worries at what to reply

N: Aai, woh ... woh main raat ko pani khane ke liye jab jaagi ti, maine dekha ki Daksh abhi tak uski kamre mein jaaga ta.   

A: Acha. Ab main use jaake utata hoon, varna woh kam keliye der hojayega

N: (Slightly too excitedly) Main Daksh ko jakar utati hoon, (Aai looks at Naina weirdly, then   to distract Aai from what she just said, Naina says cheekily ) ab jaake Baba ko utayi hain.

A: Naina, tum bhi na,

Aai pulls Naina's ear

N: Aap ne suna, Aai, Baba ne aapko bulaya hain, use chai chahiye, woh bhi sirf apki haat ke aur aap ke haat se.

Aai tries to pulls Naina's ear again but Naina runs away laughing

N: Main Daksh ko jaake utati hoon.

A: Jao

Edited by storytellerSSBN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@lucky what to say... Too sweet, cute & romantic...totally can imagine the scene... 😳 loved it...

@storyteller u do wonders with dialogue yaar... Love both the scenes... It seems Daksh overslept after getting the gn kiss from Naina 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
@dakshna fan

Thanks yaar😃

@storyteller ssbn

I really like the new font you are using and ur scene so simple and sweet yaar😛.I think we will get a good scene and dialogues again once  from ur side jab naina daksh ko utane jayege😉..hain na..Waiting for that
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Posted: 12 years ago
Storyteller, lucky... wow!!! wonderful!