Our Undying Love(ArSh&RM)| Pt20-25 Pg76,77 | Aug15 - Page 46

wowww loved it

idk how long this is gonna be, seriously 🤣 but since you both asked for a long comment..let me try :P overall, this is an amazing ff..you guys put it down so sweetly! like every time i thought one problem would just take over the FF & solving that would be the end of this, i was completely wrong..everything happened so unexpected <3 && ohh my daysss :O you guys wrote SUCH hot&sexy stuff 😳 like seriously..where was that side of you 🤣 i was hell shocked quite honestly 🤣and that note you had in one of the parts at the beginning which went like you might be of a younger age but mature brain & mature age but younger brain..i was like i'm very sure they were thinking about me right here 🤣 seriously that massage & fruits part was just :O X_X :O 🤣 and that time when Rahul&Armaan went shopping for Muskaan&Shilpa..they were like how do girls not get tired but we're tired of just this much 🤣 i love the way you try to make it as realistic as possible when it comes to that. oh & i loooved the way how the girls sneaked in to meet the guys before marriage..that was so unexpected but super sweet! <3 then their conversation in the plane..OMG hilarious 😳🤣 and after that when Shilpu was pregnant and honestly, when armaan said he isn't ready i was like WHAT 😲 like literally my jaws dropped..no joke..not even exaggerating 😳 then i loved the talk that armaan & muskaan had..i loved the way you showed their friendship..arsh's, rm's, rs's, am's, ra's..and the whole gang's of course! ;) then omg the pregnancy part was so good 🤣 the breathe in breathe out & the you don't want me to shout at you like muskaan part 🤣 & haww RM had twins & ArSh had a baby boy <3 has to be one of the sweetest, sexiest (at parts) and most romantic ff i've ever read! I hope this comment was long enough for you guys 😆 && can't wait for the epilogue..😃 love you both! 🤗