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Posted: 14 years ago
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A few months ago, my eyes got stuck in a promo.
And I waited for the whole day for the clock to struck nine.
When on screen, I saw those two mesmerized eyes,
Starring at his charming wife, seldom in her open hair-
Oh he was meant to fall for her since day1...was that all I could remember.

Just a span of 30 mnts a day and each day,
But it woven a world of magic, took the logic of reel or real!
It was more of a real and more than a mere reel,
A beautiful saga of life on reel
...was that all I could feel.

I waited for the whole day for the clock to struck nine.
Each day and every day and it was made a routine part,
Which made me feel what a crap, the other soaps are.
I cant help, but only regret, if I would have missed such a class.
...was that all I could tell.

If I could find such a class in my life, ever again,
If any actor could live on screen ever again,
I cant help, but to think a hundred ways,
To rub the number 9 off from my clock,
...is that all my thoughts could roam .


This cannot be called a poem nor just a passage, but you can call it whatever you like, a poem, a passage or a nonsense. All I would request is please dont ignore to comment.Your comments mean a lot to me.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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very well written :), thats exactly how i feel :(.
what am i gonna do at nine o clock everyday, life's gonna become so boring :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Alanta beautifully expressed...and yaara what do I say !! I await and dread Sunday simultaneously!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..alanta..u described very well👏👏👏 h our lives will be at 9...what will we do..after d kes-gul wedding..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was so sweet...I know exactly how you feel...I think we are all in the same boat. I can't even think of Monday 9pm...😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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alanta..🤗that was so beautifully written..👏...Very emotional...😭very heartbreaking

See maine itne prayers kiye..Rajni uncle se bhi request ki ki woh us lamp and wick ko bujha de..par koi nahi aya

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow loved it..u expressed our pain so beautifully

am already getting so depressed ..but i wont say 9 coz i could never watch it live

by life w/o gulaal is something i dont want

but guess everything has to move on
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Feeling r mutual dear... I gonna miss my Kesar the most...NEIL jus a awesome actor hope to see him soon on TV...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👍🏼 👏 yo, that's amazing!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😭even i don't know what am i going to do from monday at9.00pm! My mom is also sad but at the same time she is happy ,from monday i will not grab the tv remote from her at 9😔

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