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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#421

Anita???? ... thought she moved on with her life ... mmm ... a vengeful person.

A new life for Jigar ... it is much needed.

Glad to know that good eventually wins over evil.

Thank you Shilpa for keeping the chapters coming consistantly thus keeping us readers engaged and enthused.

Thank you for a wonderful and amazing storyline of Ahem and Gopi where Ahem realised Gopi's worth when she was not there and they overcame adversity together.

I look forward to your next story.

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winter30

@winter30

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#422

Thank you so much for such a great story. It was really interesting to read. Liked every moment. Your ff is so much better than the current track in the show.
You would do much better than the cv's

The ending was simply perfect. Rashi got what she deserved, glad Jigar is free from her.

Your take on Gohem was really nice to read

Looking forward to more ff by you. 😊

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#423

Can a person who is not in his sense give you a review? Na... So should i comment? Naw.. But i will coz you are my sweet sister.. I loved it.. Straight from heart review.. Just love it. I wish every story has a happy ending.. Like this! Your Ahem rocks..! But ahem is cold cold hearted. Cold hearted! I wanna write more.. Be right back!

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-GayabCat-

@-GayabCat-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#424

Hey Shilpa, Your aham rocks always LOL

fab ending,

Anita was 😡 totally

great update though

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#425

I am back with my second sound of review... Hahaha... Not sound, round.. Round! Rashi.. I love her! But nobody understands my feelings.. I love her!

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evad

@evad

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#426

Thank you for the marvel Shilpa loved it to bit and looking forward to the next one. And about that place you got it you could also do the viewing to the place anytime you want 😃

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pg713

@pg713

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#427

Great story! Really enjoyed the way you ended the story -- wish some of it can be seen in reel with SNS. Looking forward to more writings from you.

Pinky

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art80

@art80

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#428

Shilpaben, I absolutely enjoyed reading your story and was coming to the forum to see if you posted a new chapter or not. I am really going to miss it. Hope you soon start another great story for us.

The last part was awesome. I loved the way you showed Gohem's eye communication in this story. Felt sorry for Jigar but glad to know that he accepted the truth and moved on.