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An alternative ending to the coffee mug story
I'll finish later
N: Zara socho, Daksh. Hum burappe mein yehi mugs se coffee piyenge, saath saath, aur main hamare char bache ke liye bhi asia hi cups lekar aungi, usme likha hoga, KP junior, little miss KP, twin/double KPs
D: Par Naina bache ko coffee nahi dena chahiye
N: oh God, Daksh, main bhi yeh baat jaanti hoon, bache mugs pe dood piyenge na, coffee mugs me sirf coffee peene ka koi rule nahi hai. mujhe bachche ko palna aata hai, mere bachche ke liye kya acha hai aur kya bura hai mujhe achi tara se pata hain, tumhe bata ne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.
D: woh sirf tumhare bache hai kya, tumne akele hi char bache peda kar di
N: Nahi, woh tumhare bi bache hai, par jab me tumse gussa karungi, aise hi bolungi. Agar tumhe yeh kabhi sunna nahi hain to tum mujhe kabhi gussa mat dilana, samljhe
D: Tik hain, ab Mrs KP mat bano tum
N: Mujhe ab meri baat pura karne do, hamare twins, mein ek ladka hoga aur ek ladki.
D: Hamare bache ko tumhare aankhein milne chahiye
N: Sirf mere aankhein, baki sab tumhare jaisa. Tumhe baas meri aankhein ache lagte hai kya mera aur kuch acha nahi lagta
D: Tumhara sab kuch mujhe bohot pasand hai, par tumhari aankhein mujhe sabse pasand lagte hai, bas
N: Aisa hai toh phir tik hai, par hamari bari ladki tumhari tara glasses pehnti hai, OK
D: OK
N: aurwoh mujhe aai bulayenge aur tumhe ... tumhe... KP bulayenge
Naina laughs
N: Sorry, woh tumhe Baba hi bolenge, agar aur kuch bole to main une khub daatungi
D: Tum daato gi, rehne do, waise bache ko daat na nahi chahiye, use pyar se samjhana chahiye
N: Haa, tum ne sach kaha, tum bohot acha banoge Daksh, bohot acha,
D: Tumhe sach me asia lagta hai
N: Haa, jaise tum har aur rishta bohot ache se nibhaye ho, beta ka, bhai ka, devar ka, dost ka, waise yeh rishta bi bohot ache se niba oge, tum daaro mat, mujhe pura yakeen hai.
N: Aur bi zara socho Daksh, yeh cups ko dekhar hamare bache yeh puchte hai ki KP ka matlab kya hai main tumhe KP kyun bulati hoon.
N: Main une kehti hoon ki, mujhse milne se pehle tumhare Baba bohot zyada akhroo te
phir tum bohot gusse kahonge, mein itna akhroo nahi ta, thoda akhroo,
mein kahungi ' dekha bacho, aise hi akhdoo te tumhare Baba aur use aise hi bohot jaldi gussa aajati ti'
hum sab tumpe upar haste hai
Tum bachose kahoge 'mujhse milne se pehle tumhari Aai bohot bari jooti ti, aur ab bhi bohot jooti hai'
Tum saab mujhpe haste ho
Main kehti hoon 'ki main jooti nahi hu'
Hum dono jagra karte hai.
Phir hamari bari ladki apni mug table pe bang karke kehti hai 'order, order' ek lawyer ki tarah.
Aur hum do no chup hojate hai, phir hamara sab se choto beta, ek origami rose tumhe de ta hai aur kehta hai 'yeh aai ko de do, baat out of court hi solve hojaye, toh hum sab ke liye acha hoga.
Tum mujhe rose de te ho
mein kehti hoon, case solve hogaya
phir hab sab hasne lagte hai aur phir hum sab gale lagte hai.
Naina goes to Daksh's room with two cups of coffee and seems him working. She goes into his room.
N: Daksh, aaj tumhe bohot kaam hai na, mujhe milne ke bhi time nahi hai tumhare pas
D: Aisa nahi hai, mein apna kaam jaldi kar raha hoon, kyunki mujhe tumse milna ta. Par main kya karu, tumhari khayal mujhe kam hi nahi karna dete hai.
N: Oho, toh saari galti meri hai, khud kam tortoise ke speed pe karte ho aur galti mujhe de te ho. mujhe kam karte waqt bhi tumhare yaad baar baar aate hain, par main apni kam toh jaldi khatam kar de ti hoon na.
D: Oh, so tumhe kaam karte waqt meri yaad baar baar aati hain.
Daksh smiles and Naina looks embarassed
N:shaadi ki baad main aisa bilkul bhi nahi hone doonghi. Kaam office main hi khatam karke aana,meri tara.
D: Acha, shaadi ki baad aisa hi hoga
N: Yehi teek hoga tumhare liye, coffee peeyon, tand ho raha hai.
D: Tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe coffe peene ka mann kar raha ta
N: Tumse dil ka connection jo hain
I forgot to mention that Naina placed the mugs so Daksh does not see the writing initially and also so mrs KP is the nearest to Daksh
Daksh takes the Mrs KP coffee mug.
N: Tum meri mug le rahe ho
D: Tumhara mug, is mein tumhara naam likha hai kya
N: Kuch aisa hi hai.
D: looks at the coffee mug and sees nothing on one side, then looks at the other side and sees Mrs KP
D: Yaha toh Mrs KP likha hain, tumhe toh bohot yakeen hain ki tum hi Mrs KP banogi. Agar main tumhe Mrs KP nahi banaya, toh.
N: mujhe pura yakeen hai ke sirf main hi Mrs KP banungi. tum chaho ya na chaho. Phir se aisa bola toh, main tumpe yeh garam garam coffee daldungi
D: Tum toh pehle se hi, Mrs KP ki tarah baat kar rahi ho, toh main koi aur ko kaise Mrs KP bana sakta hoon.
They both giggle
Naina gives the (Mr) KP mug to Daksh with the writing facing him and Daksh gives her cup to her.
and she sits down on the bed next to Daksh.
N: Zara socho, Daksh. Hum burappe mein yehi mugs se coffee piyenge, saath saath, tab tak tumhari baal poore tara saafet honge,tumhara bara pet hoga, aur tumhare aankhein aur bhi kamzor hojayenge aur aaj ki tarah meri mug loge
D: Haa, aur tum abhi tak javaan dikhrahi hogi na
N: Nahi, par phir bhi tum mujhse yehi kehte ho, main sharmati hoon aur kehti hoon, tum bhi
(N:kash main yeh tumse keh pati, par main jhoot nahi bol sakti
aur phir tum kehte ho, kyun jab hab pehle mile te toh tumne jhoot hi bola ta na
phir main kahungi, 'par woh jhoot toh sach nikla na, isi liye yeh count nahi karta', phir tum gusse mein kehte ki tum ne bhi jhoot bhola ta ki main ab bhi tak jawan lagti ho, tumhe glasses nahi pehne te isliye main jawan lagi ti, asal mein main chudail ki tara dikh ti hoon, mujhe shukar manana chahiye ki tumhari aankhein kamzor hai, varna tum daar kar baag jaate. phir main kehti hoon, 'kash main chudail hoti, to meh tumhe frog bana deti'
aise hi hum dono hamesha ki tarah jagar rehe.
Young Daksh and Naina laugh
D: Pir tum mujhe manati ho kaise
N: main tumhe manawu kyu, tum mujhe manate ho
tum natak karke kasi de to ho par tumhare nakli daat bahar aate hain, main gusse mein tumhe pani aur dava kila ti hoon, phir tum natak karke apni haat table pe bang karte ho, kuch zyada hi zor se, yeh bhool kar ki tum bure hogaye ho, tumhe sach me dard hota hai, aur zor se chillate ho, yeh dekhar pehle main hasti hoon par phir tumhari buri halat dekh kar main tumhare haddiyon ko maalish karti hoon, pyar se aur bilkul bhool jaati hoon ki mein tumse gussa hoon.
D: Kash, aisa hi khoobsurat ho hamari shadi shuda zindagi. aise palo ke liye main tumhe har ek baar manane ke liye tayar hoon, chahe tumne hi kyun na jagra shuru kiya hoga
N: Tum dekhna, aisa hi khohoga, aisa bohot sare pal honge
D: Us soch par, toast hojaye
They both raise their mugs and toast
N & D: to reaching old age together
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