new OS gopi kidnapped (complete)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Since the CVs are showering us with goham scenes, it has inspired me to write this. Hope you all like it.

PART 1

The room was dark, small and smelling bad. Gopi was hurdled in a corner trying desperately to find a way out. It has been three days since she was shut in this room. On the night of janmastami she was so happy. First aham had allowed her to go to the temple; next he had personally dropped her. After the night when she cried to him about her desire to study, he had changed a lot. He was not scolding her and talking harshly to her.

Aham had dropped her at the temple gate and told her to go while he parked the car. She was very happy as she was going to see her kanaji's golden idol. Just when she was about to climb the steps, gopi crashed will a lady. She apologized to her and started to pick the flowers which have fallen from the basket, only to find the tip of a golden idol there. The women moved quickly from that place towards a car, impulsively gopi followed her and asked

What are you doing? Is it the idol shyamji gave from London? Are you stealing it?

The next moment all she felt was a bang on her head and everything went blank.

When she woke up she found herself in this dark room. She was tied up in a chair. Later two goonda's and the woman who stole the idol come inside. Gopi was terrified on seeing them. They started to make fun of her

Man: See what happens when you interfere in others business?

Man: We will lock you her and leave you to die.

Woman: Why don't you tell your name and your families address, we will inform them about how safe you are?

Gopi was terrified yet her brain was working overtime. She managed to stammer: my name is gopi shah, I don't know my address or phone number because I don't know to read r write.

The men got angry: don't try to fool us, we will give you one day's time if you don't tell us your address, we will kill you.

Then the woman snatched all her jewels and they left her in the darkness.

For the next three days Gopi was beaten and left with little or no food. But she stubbornly refused to reveal who she was. Being beaten and going hungry was not new to her. she has experience worst situation than this at her mamiji's house. When left alone she was trying to find out where she was. She was in an underground room. after much effort she opened the wooden door which leads outside. When she got out, it was a hall with lot of rooms and cabins which were being constructed. There was not sign of her kidnappers. She began to run from one room to another. Through a crack in window she found out where she was. She was shocked to know that it was Phalghar Constructions, the place aham was talking about. If only she could find a way to communicate or escape, she was running in desperation.

(i m typing the next part will post it immediately)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lol.. Shru.. You are back huh? Great start.. Is rashi positive?lol.. Waiting 4 more
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Originally posted by: Jake-neil

Lol.. Shru.. You are back huh? Great start.. Is rashi positive?lol.. Waiting 4 more


hi bro, it is a short story i m going to end it in the next part.
and yes i m back because of goham chemisty.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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m reading the os now and will be back with my cooments
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loved it shruthi ben...u are back same Suspense thriller as ur trade mark...

loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A great start ... full of unknowns.

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Great begin can't wait to read the next part!
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part 2

Aham was furious. All attempts to trace gopi and the kanaji's idol were futile. It has been three days since she was kidnapped and every one at home was worried. And in these three days he had missed her like hell. If something like this had happened six months back, he would have been relieved or would have searched as part of his duty. When she went missing in Switzerland, he searched due to guilt. But now she has become an important part for him. Since the day he started teaching her, he had seen her dedication and he had always she his mother's trust in her. But he felt himself change slowly towards her. These days he saw her in a new light. The other day when he had overslept gopi had woken him. When he had opened his eyes he was mesmerized by her beauty. He never had time for her or to watch her. But that morning, with water droplets in her hair and her sindoor and her innocence he could not resist himself from staring at her. Only the prospect of a meeting made him to move. These days he had literally started hating her for putting the pallu. It hampered his view to her lovely face. Still he was egoist not to show that he had change. Now he is going to pay the price.

On the night of janmastami, when he reached the mandir and his family, hetal asked him: aham dikra were is gopi? He was stunned and replied: kakiji, she came ten minutes before me, has she not reached yet? Kokila replied: maybe she had gone to darshan takurji.

Just then there was commotion that the golden idol was missing. People were shouting and there was utter confusion. A slow chill started to form in aham's heart. Soon the police arrived and every one were detained and it was soon found out that gopi was missing. Suddenly a boy of six r seven came towards the inspector and said: sir, I saw the kanaji's idol.

Inspector: beta were?

Boy: what will you give if I say?

Inspector: whatever you want?

Boy? I want lots of butter; my mother never gives me much, and says it will give me tummy acke.

Inspector immediately asked the punditji to give the boy the pot with butter.

Boy: sir I was playing there near the steps. One lady dropped a basket of flowers down and it had kanaji idol. When she went another lady followed her and asked her something. Then one man hit her in the head and pushed her inside the car and they went away.

Everyone was stunned. Inspector asked what they looked like.

Boy: the lady with basket had orange saree and was bad to look at. The other lady had pink saree and she looked beautiful.

Aham felt as if he was hit by an earthquake. Immediately jigar took his mobile and showed the boy the picture of gopi and aham and asked him: is this that lady?

Boy: yes, she was the one whom they hit in the head.

He turned towards the inspector and said: can I go now? I want to eat the butter.

Inspector: wait, tell me your name and where you live.

The boy started running before anyone could catch him and replied: my name is Gopal.

Immediately police and the modi's began to search for gopi and the kidnapper, for the past three days there had been no new and aham was getting frustrated. Only now he realized how important gopi is to him. All the while he had been rude to her but she was patience and loved him unconditionally. If something happens to her he will never forgive himself?


(thought i will finish it in one part, but seems it is growing)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ... loving it 😊...

keep it coming 😉

waiting eagerly too read the rest 😆... lol




- - badra

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Devine intervention, Kanaji, himself take the role of little boy to clue everyone in on Gopi's whereabouts. I love it. This is an awesome OS.

Kanaji definitely needs to come to help Gopi. It would be nice to see, if they showed this on the show.👏

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