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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-5


Geet keeps thinking, while Rano comes in.

Rano: Beta, kal sham ko taiyaar rahna, Dev ki Mom tumhe shopping pe le jana chahti hain.

Geet looks reluctant at her words, as she is still thinking about Dev & his strange nature.


Pari takes Maan out for shopping. Basically shopping is not a cup of tea for Maan. He hates shopping. He wonders that how women can spend several hours for selecting just one single stuff. But today he has to come here as Pari wants to gift him something special. So they have arrived in one of the best shopping place in Delhi, 'LIFESTYLE MALL'. Pari takes him to the TIE-Zone (show room) for getting him a nice, cute Tie according to her choice. She checks many & then chooses one from them & shows it to Maan.

Pari: Maany, how about this. It's a beautiful, black BOW-TIE suited really nice on him. Maan likes it.

Maan: Acchha hai.

Pari: Tumhko pasand hai'?

Maan : Tumhe pasand hai naa'..

Pari: Maany, plzz tell me naa'...do u like it or not?

Maan: Achha hai', it's really nice.

Pari: So, le leh?

Maan: Le loh.

Pari asks the person in the counter to wrap that up, & then she shifts her attention from Ties to some junk-jewelries. Maan feels bored as Pari again gets sunk into the pool of hundreds of earrings & bangles. So he prefers to have a walk around the other parts of the shopping mall. Suddenly his gaze has been locked into those auspicious, almond-twinkle eye-balls yet again. He has been mesmerized totally as he doesn't realize that this time those eye-balls are coming towards his way. It's getting closer & closer even bigger too.

Aap mera picha kar rahe hain'...!!! oohhh Hellooo, kis duniye mein ho aap..!!! Maan can hear a sharp, yet sweet voice, which suddenly brings him back into this real planet from his dream world. It's Geet waving her hands in front of his eyes.

Maan: Jii'...kaya kaha aapne'.!!

Geet: Maine pucha aap mera picha kar rahe hain naa'.!! uush din se dekh rahi hun' ,aap ko pata hai aapki wajahse kal mujhe kitni badi problem ho gayee thi.

Maan: Meri wajahse !! Meri yah aapki wajahse, uushdin naa hi aap mujhse jhagadti aur naa main woh aapki drink galti se leke jata.

oopsss !!!he has got a slip of tongue.

Geet: Kaya !!!! achha'!!! toh woh aap the, jinhone jaan bujhke apni sharab wali drink mere Coke se exchange karwa di, 'mujhe laga bar-tender ki galti hai', Geet gets totally fumed over now. How could you do this'.!!! Aap jaise logonki wajahse hi hamari Delhi badnaam hoti hai'...shame on you'...she leaves the place with sheer disappointment. Maan tries to stop her, but she gives a stern look to him & departs. A smile comes there in Maan's face. He follows her from distance. Geet reaches to the TIE-Zone. She feels really disgusted after that conversation. How could he do such a bizarre thing to her? He must be a very flirt guy. Ohh Babajii'...what was his intention last night? Why did he exchange her drink? Did he want to'...no no , she can't even imagine those uncanny thing. She tries to resolve herself back & decides to buy a beautiful Tie for Dev as a gift. She asks the attendant to show her some nice Tie. After a while she chooses one beautiful black BOW-TIE keeping separately in one side. Dev is going to look very handsome in this Tie'..she smirks.

Geet: Bhai sahab , woh wali Tie dikhayiye.

Attendant: Sorry Mam, par woh Tie toh already sold ho chuki hai.

Geet: Sold ho chuki hai, thik hai , waisa hi dusra de dijiye'.

Attendant: Sorry Mam, woh Mrs. Nathani ki special designer Bow-Tie hai, saal mein aisa bas ek hi milega aapko...par Mam, aap kuch aur choose kar lijiye naa.

Geet: No, thanks. thik hai...main baad mein le lungi. She looks quite disheartened. Maan watches all this from distance. He immediately reaches to Pari, still she is busy selecting a bangle for herself.

Maan: Pari, woh Tie', woh mujhe pasand nahi hai'...usshe wapas kar do.

Pari looks surprised with his sudden demand.

Pari: What'.!! Par thodi der pahle tak toh woh tumhe pasand tha !!

Maan: Hain'...woh'!! hain, mujhe usshka colour pasand nahi..

Pari: Par black toh tumhari favouite colour hai naa'!!

Maan: Kuch bhi ho'...tum bas wapas kar do uushe. He looks adamant.

Pari: Ohh God!! Maany, main tumhko kabhi samajh nahi paayungii. She looks disgusted & walks towards TIE-Zone to cancel the purchase. Attendant is so very surprised with this incident, he immediately sends his boy to search for Geet. After a while Geet is there with that beautiful black Tie, smiling, as she gets what she wants.

Maan notices all this from back & her smile gives him immense joy, although he couldn't understand that why he has done all this. How come this strange lady has so much effect on him'.!!! why he can't control himself thinking about those almond-twinkle eyes'. Maan has become terribly confused with the present circumstances. Once he thinks to have an advice from Pari, but the very next moment he changes his mind as he thinks its better to be quiet until this confusion has been cleared up by its own.


Geet comes there in the Mittal house with Dev's Mom, as she requests her to have some rest after that hectic shopping schedule. Dev is there, he looks quite surprised seeing Geet.

Dev: Geet 'aap'..what a pleasant surprise'.!!

Geet: Ji woh hum'..Dev's Mom interrupts'

Dev's Mom: Hum laaye hain Geet ko, socha yahan thoda aaram kar le'...Dev, aap zara Geet ko ghar chodke aayiyega .Dev nods his head for a YES. Dev's Mom leaves from there. Dev tells Geet to take a sit. He also sits there & starts the conversation.

Dev: So...'ho gayee aap logon ki shopping?

Geet : Jii'...Dev, woh'... Main aapke liye kuch layee hun'. she hesitates.

Dev: Really'...mere liye'...what? Just show me na'.

Geet shyly opens up that gift box to show him that beautiful, black Bow-Tie.

Whattt'..a BOW-TIE'..!!!! Dev cackles out. Geet looks embarrassed.

Dev: Main Bow-Tie nahi pahanta'...aapne dekha hai mujhe kabhi Bow-tie pahante huye'!!! Nahi naa'..becoz , i only wear NECK-TIEs'...see, this is called a Neck-tie. He shows his own Tie.

Geet: Par, yeh aap par bahut achha lagega, aap ekbaar try to kijiye'...phir bhi agar pasand naa aaye toh'...

Dev stops her midway... Look Geet, maine aapse kaha naa mujhe Bow-Ties pasand nahi hai.

Geet : Par main iitni mann se laayee thi, aap kam se kaam iishe rakh toh lijiye'

Dev: Geet, jo cheez mujhe pasand naa ho, main uushe apne pass rakhta nahi', aap plzz iishe wapas kar dijiye, ...'his cell phone gets ringed up, he excuses himself & leaves from there. Geet sits there silent, looking extremely depressed. Her eyes get drenched.

I will never understand this man...!! she murmurs.

PRECAPE: WHY DEV IS BEHAVING LIKE THIS!!!😭😡🤢

PART-4

PART-6

i wanna know ur views guys...so plzz click the LIKE buttons & leave ur comments😆😍

Edited by 810Kankana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
awesome update...👏👍🏼😍

wow...geet ne kya kaha...maan uski pichha kar raha hai...ha ha ha...only geet can tell like dis...🤪😛

aur maan...uske toh apne upar koi control hi nahi hai...geet ko dekhtehi uske toh halat hi kharab ho jata hai...kya kar raha hai, kya bol raha hai...patahi nehi chalta...i love him sooo much...😉❤️☺️...wooow...maan ne apne pasand k bow-tie bhi usse de diya...sooo sweet...🤗

d main thing is i hate dev...😡

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hew awsum yaar plz do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First things first i HATE Dev with a passion xD
but i LOVE this ff
so pretty please add me to the pm list!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update Kankana...thanx for pm...👏

I immerse in my la-la land when Maan takes care of Geet.😍

He returns back his favourite bow-tie gifted by his girlfriend to him so that Geet can purchase it and be happy...hhhaaaiii

but Dev didn't care for Geet's emotions...he doesn't even has proper common manners.😡

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update
thanks 4 the pm
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nice dear... ds Dev s irritating n Maan s soo cute... cont soon... n thanx for d pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-6

Dev: Geet, jo cheez mujhe pasand naa ho, main uushe apne pass rakhta nahi',...aap plzz iishe wapas kar dijiye, his cell phone gets ringed up, he excuses himself & leaves from there. Geet sits there silent, looking extremely depressed. Her eyes get drenched.

I will never understand this man...!! she murmurs.

Geet comes back home by her own, didn't wait for Dev to drop her back. Dev's behavior hurts her a lot. Rano doubts something is wrong with her. She immediately enters into Geet's room. Geet sits there on her bed with a vacant look towards the outside of the window, her eyes are wet.

Rano: Geet', Rano sits beside her & put her hand on Geet's shoulder. Geet can't control her tears & hugs Rano.

Rano: Kaya huya beta, roe kyun rahi hai, 'Rano sounds worried.

Geet: Maa, main Dev ko samajh hi nahi paati'woh aisa mere saath kyun karte hain '..

Rano: Aab kaya huya beta'.

Geet : Maine kitne pyaar se uunhke liye ek gift liya tha, uunhone wapas kar di'...she sobs.

Rano cups Geet's face.

Rano: Beta', main samajh sakti hun tujhe bahut bura laga hoga, par beta Dev bure insaan nahi hain', iishka toh humein kal raat ko hi pata chal gaya tha naa'...soch, tuh nashe ke haalat mein thi'woh tere saath kuch bhi badtameejii kar sakta tha naa..lekin woh tujhe sahi salamat ghar chodke gaya. Geet surprisingly stares at Rano.

Rano: Aur phir Daarji ke saamne tere liye parwivi bhi toh ki naa, nahi toh aaj teri College ki padhayee bhi bandh ho chuki hoti.

Geet remains silent.

Rano: Beta, hum aurat o ko puree zindegi lag jaati hai apne apne pati o ko samajh ne mein , aur tuhne toh bas chand hi pal bitayee hain uunhke saath'...hai naa !!! iitni jaldi faisla naa le meri bachhi. Ho sakta hai key woh aur o se alag ho.

Geet : Par hamesha woh mere saath hi aisa kyun karte hain Maa'!!

Rano: Beta , achha hoga agar yehi baatein tuh khud uunse puchle'

Geet: Main uunshe baat naa karungi, koi fikr hi nahi hai uunhe meri. Geet sounds upset.

Rano: Par mujhe toh aisa nahi lagta, agar fikr naa hota toh tum sahi se ghar pahaunchi ho key nahi yeh jaan ne ke liye phone naa karte woh, unhe bina bataye chali aayee thi na tum wahanse. Geet looks very surprised.

Geet : Kaya'...uunhka phone aaya tha'...kab?

Rano: Abhi, thodi der pahle.

Geet: Par mujhse baat nahi ki unhone'.

Rano: Kah rahe the tum sayed naraz ho uunhse ,toh tumse mil ke hi woh tumhe manana chahte hain.

Geet: 'Sayed' nahi, main sacch mein bahut naraz hun'

Rano: Aab aur naraz na rah, chal khana thanda ho raha hai, kha le'...aa jaa.

Huhh'...dekhte hain 'Mr. Dev Mittal , iitni jaldi toh main nahi maanewali iishbaar'...bahut thes pahunchaya hai aapne mere dil ko. Geet murmurs.

Next day , morning, Samir comes to meet Maan in his house. He enters into Maan's room, Maan sits there on his bed , reading some newspapers. Samir also sits next to him.

Samir: Kaya huya Maan sahab, aunty kah rahi thi tuh Devdas bana baitha hai , kaya huya yaar.

Maan: Yaar, sabse badi pareshani toh yehi hai key mujhe khud nahi maaloom yeh mere saath ho kaya raha hai.

Samir : Matlab'.!!

Maan: Achha mujhe yeh bata, tere saath kabhi aisa huya hai , key kabhi koi bilkul achhi na lage, phir dhire dhire acchi lagne lage, phir bahut achhi lagne lage...phir'

Samir: Ooyee'...zara brake maar bhai'...yeh kaun hai jo pahle bilkul achhi nahi lagti thi , aur aab... Pari ko bolun kaya'...he teases Maan.

Maan: Samir, its serious yaar'.., tuhne dekha hai uushe'

Samir: Ek min, ek min'...kahin yeh wohi toh nahi jo uushdin sharab pike'.

Maan: Hain yaar, wohi hai. Pata nahi uushe dekhte hi kaya hone lagta hai mujhe. Tujhe pata hai kal maine kaya kiya.

Samir: Aab aur kaya kiya tuhne'.!!

Maan tells him everything about that shopping mall & Tie incident.

Samir: Aare baapre , yeh toh badi problem hai yaar'...lagta hai tujhe finally woh beemari ho hi gayee.

Maan : Beemarii'...kaunsi beemarii!!

Samir: LOVERIAA !!!!'.This brings a big smile on Maan's face. Both burst out in laughter.

Samir: Woh sab toh thik hai yaar, par tujhe uushke bare mein kuch pata bhi hai , i mean kaun hai, kahanse hai'...wagera wagera.

Maan makes a face...'Nothing'

Samir: Yeh toh aur bhi mushibat hai , par tuhne toh bataya key uushne Tie kharidi , sayed uushka Boy-friend ho'..aare uushdin party mein bhi toh kisi ladke saath hi aayee thi na woh.

Maan tries to recall.

Maan : Sayed, par main kaya karun yaar, mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai.

Samir: Tuhne Pari se baat ki...'mujhe lagta hai tujhe iish baremein Pari se baat karni chahiye.

Maan: Par agar Pari bura maan gayee toh.

Samir: Dekh Maan, aaj nahi toh kal uushe sab pata toh chalne hi wala hai naa'. behtar yehi hoga key tuh khud hi uushe sabkuch bata de. Chal , baat kar le uushe.

Samir tells Maan to call Pari.


Maan makes that call on her mobile & asks her for a meeting as soon as possible. Pari tells him to join her in her house. Maan wants Samir to be there with him too. But Samir advises Maan to handle this by his own.

Geet is standing outside her college with her friends, suddenly finds Dev's car there. She becomes quite surprised, what is he doing here? The next visual makes her even more shocked as Dev is coming out from his black Mercedes & moving towards her. Dev greets Geet & her friends. Her friends seem to be flattered with his gesture.

Dev: If u girls don't mind, can i take Geet out for a while.

Geet: Par main aapke saath kahin nahi jaayungii'...she sounds angry.

Dev: Please Geet, kal raat ke liye i am very very sorry. Mujhe aapse ussh bare mein hi baat karna hai, but not here. Please, give me just one more chance. I beg of u Geet.

Geet doesn't say anything, but moves towards his car & gets into it. She doesn't even look at Dev. Dev drives the car to a very old house, seems like no one is living there for long. The main door is locked. A watchman stands there outside the house. Dev gets down from the car, collects the keys from the watchman & opens the door. Geet is still there inside the car. Dev comes back to Geet, opens up the car-door for her.

Dev: Geet , aayiye.

Geet: Yeh hum kahan aaye.

Dev: Aayiye toh sahi'...batata hun. Geet comes out from the car. Dev takes her inside the house. It's not a very big house, a few furniture are scattered here & there. A few photo frames are hanging down the wall. Geet looks quite surprised that why Dev brings her here.

Dev: Geet , aap soch rahi hongi main aapko yahan par kyun laya hun '..main chahta tha aap aaj mere zindegi ke uunh tamaam raaz ke bare mein jaano jinhke saath main hardam ladhta rahta hun. After a long time Geet stares at him.

Dev: Yeh ghar mere Dad Mr. Dhananjay Mittal ne banwaya tha'...Iish gharmein mera bacchpan kayed hai Geet. Woh deho, woh jo jhula dekh rahi ho naa'...bacchpan mein har sham main aur meri Maa ghanto yahan baithe rahte the, 'Maa mujhe kahani sunati thi 'Pariyon ki kahani'. Geet can't trust what she has just heard...'Who is he'...Is he that same person who has told her that he doesn't believe in all those 'Sapno ka Rajkumaar' & all.

''..iiish chote se ghar mein woh saree khusiyan thi Geet'..he continues'...his eyes get drenched.

Meri Maa se shadi karne ke baad Dadaji ne Dad ko apne gharse aur apni sari jaydaad se bedakhal kar diya tha'..kyukey meri Maa ek Christian thi...Geet looks stunned'.

Geet: Aapki Maa '.par aapki Maa toh woh'..!!

Woh meri Maa nahi hai'...Dev interrupts.

Maine kabhi uushe apni Maa ka darja nahi diya'...she is only Mrs. Dhananjay Mittal. Uushi aurat ki wajahse hamari puree zindegi barbaad ho gayee. Geet doesn't understand what he is saying.

Dev: Woh mere Dad ki dusri patni hain. Uushi ki wajahse Dad ne meri Maa ko chod diya, uush ladki ko chod diya jisne sirf aur sirf Dad ke liye apna ghar-parivaar sab kuch chod kar aayee thi, sirf Dad ke liye. Tumhe pata hai Geet , sirf 12 saal ka tha main, uush umar mein bachhe kaya karte hain'...school jate hain, doston ke saath maze karte hain naa'...main uush umar mein court jata tha'..Judge-wakeel o ke saamne jaake uunhke hazaro tarha ke sawal o ka jawab deta tha main'.

kaya tumne apne Dad ko apne Maa par haath uthate huye dekha?

kaya tumhari Maa ne tumhare Dad ko jaan se maarne ki koshish ki?

iindono men se kisi ek ke paas rahna ho toh tum kiske paas rahoge?

kaya tumne apne Maa ko kisi aur insaan ke saath '...Dev can't complete his sentence'...there is so much agony in his voice...bas unh chand sawalo ne meri zindegi ko maatam mein badal diya tha Geet. Jhoothe gavaho se Dad ne meri Maa ko badchalan sawit kar diya'...jab key asli gunehgaar woh the. Sabkuch mere haathose reth ki tarha fisal raha tha , lekin main kuch nahi kar paya. Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai woh din, jab koi aake Maa ke haatho mein court ka order thama gaya '..woh uunki Divorce order ki copy thi'...jisshe dekhte dekhte Maa roe padhi thi, lekin uunhke hontho pe ajeeb si ek muskurahat thi...usshdin uunhki uush hansi mein jo dard chupa huya tha uushe sirf maine mahsus kiya tha Geet. Divorce hone ke baad main Maa ke saath U.S chala gaya, Nanaji tab U.S mein the...Maa uunhke paas nahi jana chahti thi, pata nahi kyun uunhe apne pyaar par yakeen tha, key kabhi naa kabhi Dad ko apni galti o ka ahsaas zarur hoga...'hah'...bharosha aur woh bhi uush insaan par'. Dev bangs on the wall, ...jiss insaan ne kabhi bhi unhke pyaar ki kadar nahi ki'...jisne divorce hone ke chand mahine baad hi phirse shadi rachaa li'...apne ghar walo ke kahne par meri Maa ko apni zindegi se hamesha hamesha ke liye mita diya'...uush insaan par bharosa tha meri maa ko, apni aakhri saans tak bas uunhi ka intezaar karti rahi woh. Par mere Dad'...woh nahi aaye, agar woh chahte toh meri Maa ko bancha sakte the, u know Geet, main zindegi mein kisise iitna pyaar nahi karta jitna main apne Dad se aur uush aurat se nafrat karta hun...Dad ke jaane ke iitne saalon baad bhi main uunhe maaf nahi kar saka'...aur sayed kabhi nahi kar paayunga.

Par aap U.S se wapas kab aaye'...Geet interrupts.

Dev: 5 saal pahle '...Dad uushwaqt hospital mein the'...aakhri saanse le rahe the, mujhe Dadaji ne apni kasam deke yahan par bulwa liya. Dadaji se kiya huya woh wada main aaj bhi nibha raha hun'...key main MITTAL PARIVAAR aur MITTAL INDUSTRIES ko kabhi chodke nahi jaayunga. Bas uushi wado ki wajahse mujhe uush aurat ko bhi apni zindegi mein bardast karna padha, jiski wajahse meri sari duniya, meri puree zindegi ujaad gayee. Geet, maine tumse jhoot kaha tha,main sirf business ke kaam se hi U.S nahi jane wala... mujhe Maa se tumhare bare mein baat bhi toh karni hai...

Geet looks surprised'...Maa se!!!

Dev: Hain Geet, tumhe pata hai , jab bhi main Maa ke grave ke saamne jaake baitha hun naa'...mujhe lagta hai woh mere pass hain, mere saath hain'...hain Geet ...'sacch'. Geet can't control her tears.

Dev: Geet , tumhe pata hai, kal woh BOW-TIE maine kyun nahi liya, kyun ke Mr. Dhananjay Mittal bhi bilkul waisa hi tie pahante the, aur mujhe nafrat hai uun sabhi cheezo se jo mujhe uunse jodta hai '..

Geet, mujhe 'pyaar' jaise khokhle lavjo se nafrat hai'...risto se darr lagta hai mujhe'...shadi mere liye bas ek kanuni dastabez hai ...bas'..

Suddenly he holds Geet firmly by her shoulder '...par Geet, main tum par biswaas karne laga hun'..kahin tum bhi mujhe chod kar chali toh nahi jaayogi naa'...jaise sab chale gaye'..hain Geet'...plzz , mujhe kabhi chodke mat jana...plzz Geet...his voice get jumbled up, his eyes get teary '...he puts his head on Geet's shoulder , Geet can't say anything & can't control her tears too'...actually she can't find any words to console him, just let him cry'. Dev is crying like a little kid trying to pull out all those pain, agony which he has buried within his heart so far.

PRECAPE: WILL MAAN BE ABLE TO SPEAK HIS HEART'!!! 😕🥱😲

PART-5

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Edited by 810Kankana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the part!
but i still don't like Dev hmmph!
hehehe cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Thanx for pm...sis.

wonderful part...Maan has started feeling for Geet...Dev told Geet about his life...but hum to Maaneet fan hain to Dev kuch bhi kar le humein pasand nahin aayega Geet ke sath...

Kankana...sab ki jindagi mein bure- achche dono incidents hote hain...but we don't behave badly with everybody for any other person's fault...Dev has suffered a lot and he has seen his father done wrong with his mother...after seeing his mother's suffering he should behave properly with Geet so that she should not suffer what his mother suffered...but how he talked with Geet it is not justified by his sad past...if his father wear bow-ties then he can accept Geet's gift and keep it in any corner of his house.

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