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Posted: 14 years ago
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prologue:
its been 2 months since ahem had started teaching gopi , gopi even passed her exam and ahem was very proud of that , even though he was only going to teach her for 10 days but his heart kept telling him to teach her more , in those two months ahem had became really close two gopi , he could finally understand her , finally know what was going on in her mind , and most of all he had started to like her , and gave her respect as a wife .
but life is not full off happiness , what you dont expect always ends up happening , same thing happened with ahem , what he didnt expected ,it happened to him
Hope you liked it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice...please continue it😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1 :
Gopi: ahem jii , i wanna talk to you about something.
Ahem: Haan gopi kya baat karni hain.
Gopi: woh ahem woh ,
Ahem: gopi dont be scared just say whatever you want to.
Gopi: im leaving this house today .
Ahem: kya ( all shocked ).
Ahem: but why , what happened gopi did anyone say something to you .
Gopi: no ahem jii , its my decision.
Ahem: but why all of a sudden??
Gopi: I think i am finally starting to understand you better ahem jii , that im not suitable for you , im not high class as you are , and from what i saw the other day i think Anita jii is best for you , You love her alot , and i dont want to be between you guys.
Ahem : but gopi i told you what you saw other day was not true, we're just friends gopi plus gopi anita is ..
Ahem was about to complete his sentence when mani knocked on the door.
Mani: sorry gopi ben but there is some guy downstairs calling for you .
Gopi : some guy , who is it . Mani ben tell him to sit , I'll come in a minute.
mani: okie.
Gopi turned around to see ahem .
Gopi: im sorry ahem jii but i have to go.
Ahem: but gopi mom.
gopi: i know what your going to say , how maaji is going to react , dont worry about that i already told her everything and she agrees with me this time. she knows i cant be happy here .
gopi came close to ahem and kissed him on the cheek .
gopi: promise me that you will not come after me at all and you wont stop me from going.
Gopi left from over there leaving ahem still shocked.
Gopi and ahem both came downstairs and found some guy drinking water.
Gopi: who are you ??
the guy turned around and gopi was surprised .
guy: What gopi now you for got me , apne moto koh , you got married and never told me , you decieved me.
Hearing him Ahem got jealous and kokila could see that too.
Gopi: Ajay and ran up to him ( and hugged him).
ajay: now you remember .
Gopi: ajay werent you in america , when did you come back.
Ajay: just a month ago , i went to your house , some girl told me that you got married ,, so i straightly came to you.
Gopi: yeah i did but couldnt inform you ,
ajay saw a bag beside gopi and asked her if she was going somewhere.
gopi felt kinda awkward at that moment but had to tell him.
gopi and ajay both went to the back yard and gopi told him everything that had happened since her marriage.
Ajay was totally mad and felt like beating up ahem at that moment but gopi stopped him.
Gopi: now i dont know where to go , i dont want to go back to that trecerous mami , please help me.
ajay: your not going anywhere , your gonna stay with me , and my family.
Ajay and Gopi both came back to the loung , gopi took her suitcase and took everyones blessing , gave a mean look to rashi , which ahem saw .
and hugged hetal and kokila .
Hope you liked it , please dont forget to comment for me to know if you liked it or not :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey, please i request u please write all dialoge in English...please i don't understand Hindi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaka.lg

hey, please i request u please write all dialoge in English...please i don't understand Hindi

oh sorry about that , few lines were written in hindi , bu next time i will write in english :)
and thanks for liking my ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeah...thanks...i really like reading FF and i wanna see what going on between Ahem and Gopi. nice story😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice story..pls continue..

i like this Gopi who is bold enough to say her decision..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice, continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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a very nice story do continue.. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, seriously a lovely update.
really awesome.plz continue soon.
Raunika

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