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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Nice story shreya...after 10 doses of AKA I was actually thinking...you know...daya sir ko bhi 😈

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Aditi_97

@Aditi_97

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

👏👏👏...lovely story Sri...awesome... ⭐️⭐️⭐️

and you sent them in Goa...😳😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hey SHREYA...

very very LOVELY STORY👏... after prolong period i like BHAI as his CHARACTER in UR story👍🏼... pata nahi yaar main kyun tum log jaisa nahi likh paata😭... itni TRY karta hun😡... magar nahi ho pata💔... khair...
GOA, Ins RAHI, BARBOSA... very very well done... U really did a FABULOUS work⭐️... thanx alot to give ME a DOUBLE DOSAGE of BHAI... cz U posted it in TWO parts😉

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Again a very good job shreya!! 👏 👍🏼

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587298

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Very good story shreya 👏👏👏 keep it up👍🏼 thanks for PM😊

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

First of All Thank You..u knw Why😉...

And Now Abt the Story...It was All About Daya..Daya and Daya.ur story was on what Daya is. what he can do alone.👏..Nice plot..A very nice investiagtion and The character Rahi is good..Some scens was bit confusing for me..But later i understand..The overall story was good and the thrill, investiagtion was Good..It was Remake of "behroopiya"..Where Daya was "behroopiya"...

Nice Story👍🏼

and one thng i want to correct ur muhawara its "Rassi jaal gae per bal nahen gaya" Not kaat gae😉

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Seshat

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 57

Team Silver Trio

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: neeme
First of All Thank You..u knw Why😉...
And Now Abt the Story...It was All About Daya..Daya and Daya.ur story was on what Daya is. what he can do alone.👏..Nice plot..A very nice investiagtion and The character Rahi is good..Some scens was bit confusing for me..But later i understand..The overall story was good and the thrill, investiagtion was Good..It was Remake of "behroopiya"..Where Daya was "behroopiya"...

Nice Story👍🏼

and one thng i want to correct ur muhawara its "Rassi jaal gae per bal nahen gaya" Not kaat gae😉

Thanks. And yes I know why. 😉

As for the muhawara, my Mom told me it is said in two ways: jaal or kaat. So I used kaat because I liked it better for the story. 😉

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

First of all very sorry for late reply...I have not read yet ur Chase but will read it very soon...
Really good story...when i read it I thought of Beheroopiya...Great work Sri...keep it up 👍🏼

Edited by debasree04 - 14 years ago